VN Ren'Py Abandoned View of Family [v0.1.4] [Marvel]

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Eluzivo said:
don't take this as bashing just criticism you can use to get closer to that one: She only has one mole to the left of the nose, you put 3 in her face 2 on one side, another on the other. Play more with the jaw, it looks very different to me, the chin is more pronounced on the original for starters (not sure if that would correct the rest of it as face morphology is quite hard) needs hair a tad bit longer (seems to be nipple lenght when going to the front, based on the image from the previews), sunken cheeks a bit, the nose tip is more... bulbous? black brows and more arched past the irises, which should be darker too, and skin color as well. the daughters are a bit more pale, but she is more... brown?, nostrils also need to flare more, or be a bit bigger?. and the mouth is not there yet. Regretably I can only tell it's different there.

Hope this helps get closer to that model, if that's what you want.
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Thank you!! All this is helping me. I am not somebody trained in arts of painting or sculpting...[only a daz enthusiastic user :) ]. I will check all these details!!! So your comments really helped. I wonder if you also know what hair is the original character using...I am attaching the photos i had looked for the 3 moles and the color on the brows marked for you to see why i was led that way...About the morphing i will see what i can do better...
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i had to zoom closer and see 2 slightly fainted moles and different color on the brows from the hair she is using... it depends of course on our graphic cards and monitors the way we see the colors represented. It can also be the colored lighting also on the renders some mesh lights are not always white but blueish or orange...so i don't really know for sure if the color is black and high transparent enough to make me see it brownish :) Maybe Marvel will release the original assets one day...
 
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Brutt3456 said:
Thank you!! All this is helping me. I am not somebody trained in arts of painting or sculpting...[only a daz enthusiastic user :) ]. I will check all these details!!! So your comments really helped. I wonder if you also know what hair is the original character using...I am attaching the photos i had looked for the 3 moles and the color on the brows marked for you to see why i was led that way...About the morphing i will see what i can do better...
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i had to zoom closer and see 2 slightly fainted moles and different color on the brows from the hair she is using... it depends of course on our graphic cards and monitors the way we see the colors represented. It can also be the colored lighting also on the renders some mesh lights are not always white but blueish or orange...so i don't really know for sure if the color is black and high transparent enough to make me see it brownish :) Maybe Marvel will release the original assets one day...
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It's indeed as you say, however the type/grade of moles, or it's shades is what's different. The ones he uses tend to get lost in some iluminations and your's jump at the eyes so toning them down would be best. As for the eyebrows I am not sure they're really different color or just they look like that because they're thin, thus skin color and their color come about as a different color. I would need to actually sample the rendering of them to try it out. However I am currently unable to do so.

Regarding the original hair she is using, I have no information, sorry. Maybe someone else from the guys who lurk in this thread may be able to give you a clue if they have that info or where to find it.
 
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Charlie78 said:
It's every time the same...! A new game starts, It would be good and then... NO MORE UPDATES!? Pfff...!!!! :mad:(n)
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As far as I know, dev didn't even plan to finish the game, in his last report he said that hes gonna remake the whole game, but then he magically disappeared
 
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Qmil679 said:
Do you know what happened to him? that you write such things? :unsure:
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nobody knows what happened to the dev, but considering the fact that he disappeared right before covid started, + he already had some health problems... thats kinda the only explanation
 
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mylifexi said:
nobody knows what happened to the dev, but considering the fact that he disappeared right before covid started, + he already had some health problems... thats kinda the only explanation
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Well, how many times we see dev who prentend illness because they don't have anything to release during months. I don't say you're wrong but...
 
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mylifexi said:
nobody knows what happened to the dev, but considering the fact that he disappeared right before covid started, + he already had some health problems... thats kinda the only explanation
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yeah, its really sad. Dev was cool and would reply here every now and then.
He had some severe health issues with his eyes. I remember him telling something he might lose vision in future or something( not 100% sure if it was that but it's in ball park).
Whatever may have happened to this games development, i just wish he is happy and in good health and our worst covid assumptions are all wrong.
Game already has content with all Love interest so its already complete in a way.
 
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yeah, its really sad. Dev was cool and would reply here every now and then.
He had some severe health issues with his eyes. I remember he telling something he might lose vision in future or something( not 100% sure if its excatly was this but it's in ball park).
Whatever may have happened to this games development, i just wish he is happy and in good health and our worst covid assumptions are all wrong.
Game already has content with all Love interest so its already complete in a way.
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You're right, he wrote that he was slowly going blind and there was a risk of losing his sight completely.
 
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Eluzivo said:
don't take this as bashing just criticism you can use to get closer to that one: She only has one mole to the left of the nose, you put 3 in her face 2 on one side, another on the other. Play more with the jaw, it looks very different to me, the chin is more pronounced on the original for starters (not sure if that would correct the rest of it as face morphology is quite hard) needs hair a tad bit longer (seems to be nipple lenght when going to the front, based on the image from the previews), sunken cheeks a bit, the nose tip is more... bulbous? black brows and more arched past the irises, which should be darker too, and skin color as well. the daughters are a bit more pale, but she is more... brown?, nostrils also need to flare more, or be a bit bigger?. and the mouth is not there yet. Regretably I can only tell it's different there.

Hope this helps get closer to that model, if that's what you want.
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I remembered your excellent description on the shapes of her face and I'd recently searched for tutorials on drawing faces. Some facial features etymology too. I will study and when I am ready, I will post a new model with all the corrections! Thanks again for the description!

A first quick attempt. There is still room for improvement...I gave her different make up and blue eyes plus other size boobs...Maybe someday she will look exactly like the original, especially if anyone knows the hair cut she is using...:)
https://f95zone.to/threads/daz3d-art-show-us-your-dazskill.4764/post-11703642
 
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