- Aug 9, 2016
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Just found out this game. It has a lot of potential.
As a good fan of netorare, I happily say this one seems to be doing it right. Keep up the good job! I'm looking forward to the next version and I'll probably support you financially after that.
Just one constructive criticism I think you might think useful: it is a personal preference, but I don't like when the sex scenes are short. I mean, the NTR scene with Miru's ex was very short. She put his cock on her mouth and he already cummed. I don't know if it was done on purpose to show that he was extremelly nervous and couldn't hold it any longer or if was just that short. I suggest you could try to find a balance between the renders and the writing during sex scenes. The dialogue, description and Miru's thoughts when giving her ex a blowjob could make the scene so much more arousing.
The renders combined with the writing make for better sex scenes, in my humble opinion.
As a good fan of netorare, I happily say this one seems to be doing it right. Keep up the good job! I'm looking forward to the next version and I'll probably support you financially after that.
Just one constructive criticism I think you might think useful: it is a personal preference, but I don't like when the sex scenes are short. I mean, the NTR scene with Miru's ex was very short. She put his cock on her mouth and he already cummed. I don't know if it was done on purpose to show that he was extremelly nervous and couldn't hold it any longer or if was just that short. I suggest you could try to find a balance between the renders and the writing during sex scenes. The dialogue, description and Miru's thoughts when giving her ex a blowjob could make the scene so much more arousing.
The renders combined with the writing make for better sex scenes, in my humble opinion.