As a writer I was actually rather pleased that Annie obvs charmed you so much that you forgot that the very -previous- scene your MC tells you that Chris will be visiting! Yet you still went ahead anyway!
Alcohol can make morons of even the smartest of us! I don't believe in this "foreshadow" thing that writers mention anytime they want to play with our achy breaky heart It's not as if having multiple scenes and lines telling how bad an idea this is should actually make it a bad idea! If humanity followed this trend, we would never have reached the moon. I'm an adventurer, I only aimed for Annie's the moon!
That's Nottriarty for you. On a path to world domination through the blueing of everyone's balls. Soon we will all be eating out of her hand and we won't even know it!
(But seriously though I think it was a great pace setter. Cant give away the goods too easily or they lose value! Some teasing before the main course is great for the appetite.)
That's Nottriarty for you. On a path to world domination through the blueing of everyone's balls. Soon we will all be eating out of her hand and we won't even know it!
That's Nottriarty for you. On a path to world domination through the blueing of everyone's balls. Soon we will all be eating out of her hand and we won't even know it!
(But seriously though I think it was a great pace setter. Cant give away the goods too easily or they lose value! Some teasing before the main course is great for the appetite.)
Alcohol can make morons of even the smartest of us! I don't believe in this "foreshadow" thing that writers mention anytime they want to play with our achy breaky heart It's not as if having multiple scenes and lines telling how bad an idea this is should actually make it a bad idea! If humanity followed this trend, we would never have reached the moon. I'm an adventurer, I only aimed for Annie's the moon!
Did you know that according to antropologists, the reason humanity evolved from monkeys was due to the consumption of fermented fruits? staying on trees didn't seem that safe when drunk... maybe getting annie in trouble is the way to have fun with annie and Sarah....
Did you know that according to antropologists, the reason humanity evolved from monkeys was due to the consumption of fermented fruits? staying on trees didn't seem that safe when drunk... maybe getting annie in trouble is the way to have fun with annie and Sarah....
I'm not going to play with the combat mechanics that much *isn't much of a coder and has something that works!* but given that losing does gain different content should I add some sort of "feeble" attack? Something you can choose to reduce your chances of hitting?
Already been answered, but I agree with others that taunt or something similar should be in there, but not that we should be intentionally losing though eh?
Obvs neither of these gents are romance options for a male MC and, understandably, they probs haven't really been the focus of you guys attention. But, I'm curious, what do you think of them?
I'm partially asking from a writers perspective as obvs it's easier for me to write gals than boys, but also curious generally.
I don't trust either of them.
Marcus seems to be single-minded in his quest for food colouring, what's really in that radioactive container?
Mike is just an idiot, or his he?
I think your idea of happily married is very different from mine! I don't think he's on a waifu hunt, but not because he isn't getting any with Trisha I think he's got an LGM stashed away, the dirty prevert!
Well, there is a little Notty is all of us! ...wait, that came out wrong.
Let me try again, 'Aren't we all a little Notty?'
...um, Notty is as Notty does?
I forgot where I was going with this...
I still don't trust him, we were talking about what needed to be done, yet he still flicked the switch; who told him he had to delay my investigations?
People... Mike is actually a LGM in disguise, at the moment he switches the lights off, the other LGMs steal batteries from the station, but this time the tief was stuck in the spider cave
It's nuclear, the batteries are useless But that begs the question, why is nuclear needed and why is it disguised? What is really going on? Is there a secret second base that is drawing all the power away from this "fake base"
Someone has to do the cooking over there. I hope it's not Marcus (yikes), or Kelly (for Chris' sake) or Mike (his competence seems to be a bit too specialised), or Amanda (she wouldn't be unpopular if she was good at this).
Someone has to do the cooking over there. I hope it's not Marcus (yikes), or Kelly (for Chris' sake) or Mike (his competence seems to be a bit too specialised).
As a writer I was actually rather pleased that Annie obvs charmed you so much that you forgot that the very -previous- scene your MC tells you that Chris will be visiting! Yet you still went ahead anyway!
(this was of course on top of all of the other warnings/reminders that Chapter!)
Did you know that according to antropologists, the reason humanity evolved from monkeys was due to the consumption of fermented fruits? staying on trees didn't seem that safe when drunk... maybe getting annie in trouble is the way to have fun with annie and Sarah....
It's nuclear, the batteries are useless But that begs the question, why is nuclear needed and why is it disguised? What is really going on? Is there a secret second base that is drawing all the power away from this "fake base"
