"Soon"? Buddy, you're 6 months too late, we're already dancing to the beat of her puppetmistress' fingers' strings!
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*curtsies*
Also it sets up a totes different branch of storyline. Anyone thinking that was just a "bad end" could end up missing out on some rather fun stuff...
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Did you know that according to antropologists, the reason humanity evolved from monkeys was due to the consumption of fermented fruits? staying on trees didn't seem that safe when drunk... maybe getting annie in trouble is the way to have fun with annie and Sarah....Alcohol can make morons of even the smartest of us! I don't believe in this "foreshadow" thing that writers mention anytime they want to play with our achy breaky heartAnnie'sthe moon!
I'm ready for a royal getaway with my two princesses, at last!
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Ok I guess I'm just late to the blue queen's ball. My pumpkin wagon had a shitty GPS and I lost my shoe.
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Already been answered, but I agree with others that taunt or something similar should be in there, but not that we should be intentionally losing though eh?
If I was confused, how would I know if I'm Thea?
I don't trust either of them.
Marcus seems to be single-minded in his quest for food colouring, what's really in that radioactive container?
Mike is just an idiot, or his he?
I think your idea of happily married is very different from mine! I don't think he's on a waifu hunt, but not because he isn't getting any with Trisha I think he's got an LGM stashed away, the dirty prevert!
It's a nice arse to look at, but if he does it again, we'll be having words!
Notty is subverting us all slowly on her quest for world domination. It's easy to get confused.
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I still don't trust him, we were talking about what needed to be done, yet he still flicked the switch; who told him he had to delay my investigations?
All lies! Who is he working for really?He always does it at that time of day. I heard him say it!
We've been through this our dear Notty; you shouldn't beleive everything you see on the news!
It's nuclear, the batteries are useless
But that begs the question, why is nuclear needed and why is it disguised? What is really going on? Is there a secret second base that is drawing all the power away from this "fake base"
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There are so many strings that the chances of cutting loose are next to nil.
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Maybe she's a brilliant cook!
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I wouldn't trust anything she prepared TBHMaybe she's a brilliant cook!
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It can't all taste like rock, surely.I wouldn't trust anything she prepared TBH
Someone has to do the cooking over there. I hope it's not Marcus (yikes), or Kelly (for Chris' sake) or Mike (his competence seems to be a bit too specialised), or Amanda (she wouldn't be unpopular if she was good at this).
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This is a futuristic space station, do you really think that someone has to prepare food; it'll all be prepared by some super high-tech machine!It can't all taste like rock, surely.
Someone has to do the cooking over there. I hope it's not Marcus (yikes), or Kelly (for Chris' sake) or Mike (his competence seems to be a bit too specialised).
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When you gotta go, you gotta go...He always does it at that time of day. I heard him say it!
Some times, it can be fun to have someone watch...*gave -plenty- of warning!*
As a writer I was actually rather pleased that Annie obvs charmed you so much that you forgot that the very -previous- scene your MC tells you that Chris will be visiting! Yet you still went ahead anyway!
(this was of course on top of all of the other warnings/reminders that Chapter!)
A lot of my writing works like that, I just give them the situation, and the characters react to it, like an RPG.
Well, that and cooked meat.
Why does that remind me of something creepy? I guess I will just crawl over here.There are so many strings that the chances of cutting loose are next to nil.
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If only the bloody dev had posed it so you could fully see the wording on it, eh? Devs. Bastards the lot of them, I say
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I don't think it's that futuristic.
But maybe.
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I must admit to rolling back that scene to see if the wording came in to view, but alas, denied again!If only the bloody dev had posed it so you could fully see the wording on it, eh? Devs. Bastards the lot of them, I say
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Good questions... *grins*[/SPOILER]
It's nuclear, the batteries are useless
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You'd almost think I obscured it deliberately! *smiles sweetly*I must admit to rolling back that scene to see if the working came in to view, but alas, denied again!
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I thought so too!
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*does worry about too much plot at times!*
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Perish the thought...