I do like the new image of Annie, especially with how you moved her arm out of the way of her cleavage. The removal of the small table behind her, the texture of the floor/carpet? The lighting, a slightly more expressive face, the editing of the text to be red and show the emergency of the situation, the editing of the star map to show Ophion.
3 questions on it though. 1st: the console behind Annie just has a bunch of star systems everywhere, this seems like a really confusing design choice for a ship. 2nd: The door? I think it is a door, whatever is the blackish thing on the right of the image, it looks weird as if something is sitting in the players view rather than being part of the ship. 3rd: Is the far right of the image a stowing area or bunks? I thought crew quarters were a bit further back.