Ren'Py Completed No More Secrets [v0.11] [RoyalCandy]

[gunzen]

The game is good, up to a certain point where it becomes obvious that some girls will not want to share their man (Aimee and Jeane, whose respective better halves were caught cheating). At that point of commitment, there is no story support for keeping your dick in your pants, and sticking with a single woman.

Once you've had sex with either Jeane, or Aimee, you'd expect the story to focus on that relationship, but it doesn't.

The game lacks meat. - granted it's a porn game, but you do what you can to make your game better than others.

 

[Avaron1974]

The game is good, up to a certain point where it becomes obvious that some girls will not want to share their man (Aimee and Jeane, whose respective better halves were caught cheating). At that point of commitment, there is no story support for keeping your dick in your pants, and sticking with a single woman.

Once you've had sex with either Jeane, or Aimee, you'd expect the story to focus on that relationship, but it doesn't.

The game lacks meat. - granted it's a porn game, but you do what you can to make your game better than others.

The game expects you to make the choices, it doesn't do it for you.

You know Jeane and Aimee don't like cheats and you know when they find out you're going to have a bad day. Prom is where it all comes out if you've been cheating.

It's up to you whether you stick your dick in everything, the game won't limit you. You know what the girls want and only 2 are willing to share, it's all up to you if having sex with everyone is going to be worth the shit storm at prom.

 

[gunzen]

The game expects you to make the choices, it doesn't do it for you.

You know Jeane and Aimee don't like cheats and you know when they find out you're going to have a bad day. Prom is where it all comes out if you've been cheating.

It's up to you whether you stick your dick in everything, the game won't limit you. You know what the girls want and only 2 are willing to share, it's all up to you if having sex with everyone is going to be worth the shit storm at prom.

i wasn't talking about choices. i never once mentioned choices. i said there is a lack of story. lack of story support. once choices have been made, for example, if you choose solo aimee, or jeane, then the game goes the same way anyway. there is no focus on the different story paths.

again. it's not about choices, but the lack of stories AFTER, the choices.

 

[m4dsk1llz]

If Bulb69 is correct and his Patreon supporters are now dictating the course of this game, there likely won't be any consequences for 'sticking his dick' in everyone. If there is a storm it will likely be a drizzle and he will escape relatively unharmed.

gunzen, agreed the story has turned out to be pretty linear and there are very few consequences from your actions, This I can say for sure since I have searched all the episode code in making my in-line walkthrough, it is a bit more than obvious that Bulb69's statements are true.

 

[gunzen]

If Bulb69 is correct and his Patreon supporters are now dictating the course of this game, there likely won't be any consequences for 'sticking his dick' in everyone. If there is a storm it will likely be a drizzle and he will escape relatively unharmed.

you are correct. this could have been a good one though. ah well. more jerk off material.

 

[m4dsk1llz]

One of the issues with this and for the most part every one of these porn games, is that they are all works in progress and the story is not flushed out beforehand. None of them have complete scripts or even storyboards and this one is no exception. If you look at each episode as part of a whole story, you can see that there are a lot of things that just defy any attempt at continuity. Stuff is just dropped and never mentioned again, other plot points are wrapped up in unbelievable ways (like the missing girl). That is all the result of writing each update as a separate section instead of having some sort of completed story or outline of a story. Think about all the Hollywood movies that we are all hyped for but suffer from rewrites or director changes, etc. and end up being some of the worst pieces of shit or just cash grabs.

Please note that I still really like this VN.

Even though I 100% believe this and I have story ideas for my own game, I will likely never do one. I am not a writer and can't put a complete story together to save my life. If I could, that is how I would start, with a complete episodic story, and just release it over time as artwork is added to each episode. That way I can build a Patreon following while releasing content on a regular basis. No need to bow to the whims of the donors fetishes as the story is already complete. I can always dream.

 

[Drafox]

This is a title I slept on for a while, it's a goldmine of amazing looking characters, Milves & adult teenagers is a mix that can only be made in heaven.

My only complaint is the fuckboyness of the MC regardless of the choices we make, I tried to make a solo route where I only focus on one character but I couldn't, oh well...

 

[IvanOSP]

compressed please

 

[m4dsk1llz]

Here is a modified episode 10 with grammar corrected and color highlighted for an in-line walkthrough. Make sure the file is named ep10_convs.rpy and place it in your /game folder overwriting the existing file. start NML as you would normally and it will take a few extra seconds to start as it recompiles the new episode. Funny that he added the code to prevent the errors mentioned here but did nothing to fix the spelling or grammatical errors.

Fixed typo in line 4719

 

[m4dsk1llz]

Same file without the highlighting or hints. Fixed typo in line 4719.

 

[WizD]

Why isn't Lizzie's last name Smithson?

She is the mom's daughter not Phil's. If she didn't legally change her name it's still her birth name. Mom marries Phil takes his last name and legally changes it. I was in the same situation. I used the last name I have now since kindergarten but I didn't legally change it until I was 16. Fun fact: despite what Patreon will tell you I can legally marry anyone of my cousins on my step dad's side of the family. Would have made for pretty hot bed room talk. Alas it wasn't in the cards.

 

[superic]

the walktrhough is updated to the last game version?

 

[gregers]

the walktrhough is updated to the last game version?

The walkthrough goes through episode 10; this latest release is just a bug fix so you should be good.

 

[Avaron1974]

i wasn't talking about choices. i never once mentioned choices. i said there is a lack of story. lack of story support. once choices have been made, for example, if you choose solo aimee, or jeane, then the game goes the same way anyway. there is no focus on the different story paths.

again. it's not about choices, but the lack of stories AFTER, the choices.

That was the point I was trying to make, the game expects you to stick by your choices.

If you pick a girl, it gives you the option to follow with her alone or stick your dick in everything. If it narrowed the path people wouldn't make the mistake of fucking every hole and the blow up at the prom won't happen.

Everything is about choices.

 

[P4cc3r5]

This is a title I slept on for a while, it's a goldmine of amazing looking characters, Milves & adult teenagers is a mix that can only be made in heaven.

My only complaint is the fuckboyness of the MC regardless of the choices we make, I tried to make a solo route where I only focus on one character but I couldn't, oh well...

I didn't have any problems creating solo paths for Lizzie/Venessa/Brandy/Amiee/Stephania & Jeane - in fact I think if I you try you can just get away with only BJ's from Cecile (at the strip club) and Nichole (at home) if you want to as they're part of the story. It's all about the choices. For example - use the walkthrough mod linked in the OP and avoid the green answers that may lead to paths you don't want. Sure, you still have to interact with the other girls but you don't have to bonk them if you want to stay faithful.

I opted to go with answers to build up a relationship with all characters at the start and created separate paths after the party as I found it more convenient that way.

 

[gunzen]

That was the point I was trying to make, the game expects you to stick by your choices.

If you pick a girl, it gives you the option to follow with her alone or stick your dick in everything. If it narrowed the path people wouldn't make the mistake of fucking every hole and the blow up at the prom won't happen.

Everything is about choices.

once again, i wasn't talking about choices. it is the stories that should be there as a result of the choices. the dev did not make stories for those choices. there is a lack of story. if you can't see that, then there's no point in arguing. my post was about lack of story content. period.

 

[gunzen]

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so you find a writer, talk about your ideas, and let the writer do the rest. pretty sure you can find a good writer in one of those fan fiction websites.

 

[P4cc3r5]

once again, i wasn't talking about choices. it is the stories that should be there as a result of the choices. the dev did not make stories for those choices. there is a lack of story. if you can't see that, then there's no point in arguing. my post was about lack of story content. period.

I think the stories for Lizzie, Venessa, Jeane & Amiee are pretty developed - but those for Brandy & Stephania could have been developed further in Ep.10 - as they had no additional content. I guess RoyalCandy didn't have time or his patreons decided they didn't want it.

The other characters (except for Nichole possibly) are only after casual relationships and therefore no real stories to develop.

 

[Camrin91]

Where can I see the version? Don't remember if already downloaded 0.10.4

 

[Avaron1974]

once again, i wasn't talking about choices. it is the stories that should be there as a result of the choices. the dev did not make stories for those choices. there is a lack of story. if you can't see that, then there's no point in arguing. my post was about lack of story content. period.

Are you being purposefully dense?

I don't know how simpler I can make it.

You pick a girl it's then up to you to decide what to do, not the story. The story is left open like that on purpose so people can do what they want. If you got put on a girls path you wouldn't be able to make any mistakes and choices wouldn't matter.