VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

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The pace in this game/story started out nice... a slow burn. Then as if the dev wanted to rush through the project it went flame on, like napalm the MC banging betty's left and right... it just seemed rushed.

Not a criticism just a preference others may want to rap the dog in the first seen and bang everything in sight... rambling rambling guy....

Yeah, this is not a slow burn type of a game. None of my games ever will be, because they are only intended to be about 12 updates are so.

SuperWriter i actualy think you live up to your name. i havent tried secret summer yet. but this game has some incredible good stuff in it..

I seriously appreciate that, Man. Thank you. I have so much more stuff coming.

Well, i think - the Bang all path Paris Nailed, Sasha huge out in the nude and Sabrina - welcome to the family "fun time in the woods. And ended with bed time with Miracle and her Fangs, i thought she was gonna Bite me May 14 and 29 save. So i have no idea, loaded this up like i said and it was in the end already. Nothing new

I'm getting the same issue, should be on all the paths. I'll just reset when i have time to though, not that big a deal since i got confirmation it's a bug lol

I think you both need to start over because other people are not getting the issue. You may have an old save from chapter 7 when you needed to restart or you are using the mod.

Sasha has those abandonment issues perhaps being pregnant may be her way of dealing with her fears in the end. She is obviously hiding her true feelings and even seems to want to share in what Paris is having. Possibly why she tell Paris everything so nothing hidden or off the table. I'd love to see her open up to the MC and seek out a deep relationship with him and possible Paris too.

Pregnancy cures abandonment issues...? Hmm, perhaps.

Or perhaps you are a perv who wants to get her pregnant. I'm voting for the latter xD

im guessing the saves are from before the animations were added, you needed to restart after that update.

That is most likely the issue since most people aren't getting that, and are able to play the update.

I kinda lost track of my saves... MY auto-save started just before Paris and MC go outside at night. Anyways I replayed for a little while until I caught up (it was worth it!). SOOO... Really, really Hot! I like where this is going! Thanks SuperWriter

PS: How are you getting around the Patroen Notzees?

this is the game about a landlord and tenants so there is no rule breaking going on here =] Glad you're enjoying the game!

Another great update SuperWriter Finally some sexy time with

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it was a great scene and fitted the development between the mc and her perfectly, The story is progressing nicely and going by the process of elimination i'm guessing Sabrina could be next up for some sexy time, mc style , In ch9?

Haha, glad you enjoyed the update so much, and definitely, Sabrina and Miracle are up next again!

I had the same issue, but I simply startet a new game ... enabled skip unseen text until my last save position - all went smooth and from there I was able to play ch.8 just fine.

Yep. Having old saves when you needed three start from chapter 7 is the issue all the other guys are having! Thanks for commenting

I did the same, after that i got like 8 or more pics and then it was end.

so the end isnt supposed to be after you

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Restart the game and you will get chapter 8! You needed to restart last update because I messed around with the coding. So sorry about that.

I don't care, 20 thousand words for the next update, I told you.
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Games aside, excellent work on this update, finally some action with Sasha, she's my favorite.

LOL I'm doing my best here! I'm happy you enjoyed the update, man. Plenty more coming. Trust me

 

[shadowr19]

I'm a little bit confused here.
so I'm trying to get all the girls, so I loaded for my last save file (before I stick my finger in Sasha) and everything was working fine but then the date with Paris got me confused for some reason it seems like I'm on her path even though I'm trying to get all the girls, she got pissed at MC when he said when he
said to her that I was going to date with somebody else even though she knows I'm messing with Miracle and Sasha and she said it herself as she doesn't mind that MC do stuff with Miracle and Sasha that's why I got confused

 

[lordfridge9]

SuperWriter
Getting Sasha pregnant to resolve abandonment DOES hold some ground. She'd strive to be better than her own parent. Besides, her idol has like two kids from her "circumstances" and Sasha seems to be pretty into somewhat emulating her.
It's a bit sad that there will only be 12 chapters, it just doesn't feel like there is enough scenes/content with each character. I though that stuff might be added later, like those 2-3 BJ's via Paris that have been name dropped, but I guess not

 

[Glooskabe]

I'm a little bit confused here.
so I'm trying to get all the girls, so I loaded for my last save file (before I stick my finger in Sasha) and everything was working fine but then the date with Paris got me confused for some reason it seems like I'm on her path even though I'm trying to get all the girls, she got pissed at MC when he said when he
said to her that I was going to date with somebody else even though she knows I'm messing with Miracle and Sasha and she said it herself as she doesn't mind that MC do stuff with Miracle and Sasha that's why I got confused

Did you finish the scene?

 

[DocPorny]

Short Version: Enjoyed the update VERY much.

A bit longer way too long Version:
I really enjoy the character development (on that note: cute Sasha is best Sasha ). Miracle for example. Her development into a little sexfiend seems, to me at least, believable the way it happend despite her being so timit in all other aspects of her life. I love how shy and cute she is. I know it's better for her in the long run to be pushed out of her comfort zone but if it were up to me she could stay cooped up forever at home if that's what she wants. What can I say, I still love the cute ones the most. So when the more "aggressive/adult" version of Miracle came to be I was afraid her personality would alter drastically from there on out but I'm happy to see that's not the case (though I fear it's only a matter of time ).

Where was I going with this before I started rambling? Right, Sasha. I'd love nothing more than her becoming just as cute as Miracle, since Sasha is just smoking hot, but it wouldn't fit just happening. But the way it is done here really works for me. It feels organic and not pushed while still being significant.

In regards of render not much to say. They all look gorgeous. Loving them all.

The scenes are great, especially the Sasha ones (not just this update but overall). Just so much passion behind them. [Hm .. kinda feel like I start to convert to the Sasha camp while writing all this]

The Story development I'm not sure about. Right now it feels good. Struggling start for the family unit but slowly they're all have a direction/goal in front of them. At the same time it worries me. This is now 100% guesswork on my side. It feels like they will go from nothing to everything in like 1 second. Like Sasha is becoming a well paid major actor within a month, Paris can barely fight off endorsement deals, pulitzer for Miracle and Sabrina in the next six month ... you see where I'm going with this. I've seen to many rushed endings for good games lately to not be scared of that. But as I said, 100% fear based guessing right now.

Well ... this turned out much longer than I intended. Talk about verbal incontinence. Sorry about that.

 

[shadowr19]

Did you finish the scene?

she asked the mc if we should tell everybody that they all in a relationship

 

[Glooskabe]

she asked the mc if we should tell everybody that they all in a relationship

Okay. If you're still confused, I think you're on the path you want. She thought you were gonna date someone OUTSIDE the group which was why she was pissed.

 

[Ayhsel]

Don't hate me for being an annoying bastard, I am the one living with myself!

I strongly suggest not to write "so you 2 would be first" and write "so you two would be first". It is a sensible thing when to use real numbers, as if somebody tells their phone number, or a password, that is usually fine, but otherwise the non-text looks less elegant.

 

[doyathink]

patiently waiting for the66

 

[shadowr19]

Okay. If you're still confused, I think you're on the path you want. She thought you were gonna date someone OUTSIDE the group which was why she was pissed.

I'm still a little confused. I mean, if I'm on the path I want to be,why she didn't talk about the other girls in a dentist scene I mean she knows that the MC is also messing with the other girls and she probably knows that he's going to start a relationship with the other girl soon too, so why can't she talk about the future between MC and all the girls (including her too).
she was only talking about the future between him and her not including the others and that's why I'm confused

 

[TundraLupus]

I'm still a little confused. I mean, if I'm on the path I want to be,why she didn't talk about the other girls in a dentist scene I mean she knows that the MC is also messing with the other girls and she probably knows that he's going to start a relationship with the other girl soon too, so why can't she talk about the future between MC and all the girls (including her too).
she was only talking about the future between him and her not including the others and that's why I'm confused

I understand the confusion but that is normally how it works in polyamorous relationships, your relationship with the other is not of her business as long as it doesn't affect yours with her unless all of you want to include each other, the girls themselves talk to each other though, one of the girl's comments on it at the end of the update.

 

[shadowr19]

I understand the confusion but that is normally how it works in polyamorous relationships, your relationship with the other is not of her business as long as it doesn't affect yours with her unless all of you want to include each other, the girls themselves talk to each other though, one of the girl's comments on it at the end of the update.

I'm still a little bit confused but I understand what you talking about. but I want to know which scene are you talking about

 

[TundraLupus]

I'm still a little bit confused but I understand what you talking about. but I want to know which scene are you talking about

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[shadowr19]

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are you talking about that scene when she was taking a shower with mc and her name is Sasha

 

[TundraLupus]

are you talking about that scene when she was taking a shower with mc and her name is Sasha

Yes, sorry, had to check I remember some of the words and their meaning but my memory for timelines suck.

 

[Glooskabe]

Yes, sorry, had to check I remember some of the words and their meaning but my memory for timelines suck.

I actually read that exchange as Sasha was going to ask Paris if she (Sasha) could sleep with MC that night, but I guess it is a little ambiguous the way it's worded.

 

[shadowr19]

Yes, sorry, had to check I remember some of the words and their meaning but my memory for timelines suck.

for what I understand Sasha is going to ask Paris if she can sleep with MC tonight not with Paris

at least that's what I understood

 

[TundraLupus]

I actually read that exchange as Sasha was going to ask Paris if she (Sasha) could sleep with MC that night, but I guess it is a little ambiguous the way it's worded.

for what I understand Sasha is going to ask Paris if she can sleep with MC tonight not with Paris

at least that's what I understood

I assumed the opposite because she talks about having a conversation with her sister, but yeah it could be either, or she could be talking about all of them sleeping together.

 

[Glooskabe]

I assumed the opposite because she talks about having a conversation with her sister, but yeah it could be either, or she could be talking about all of them sleeping together.

 

[Sk8587]

In this game have any animation or not because I like it so please someone tell me I want play .