VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[shadowr19]

I'm a little bit confused here.
so I'm trying to get all the girls, so I loaded for my last save file (before I stick my finger in Sasha) and everything was working fine but then the date with Paris got me confused for some reason it seems like I'm on her path even though I'm trying to get all the girls, she got pissed at MC when he said when he
said to her that I was going to date with somebody else even though she knows I'm messing with Miracle and Sasha and she said it herself as she doesn't mind that MC do stuff with Miracle and Sasha that's why I got confused

 

[lordfridge9]

SuperWriter
Getting Sasha pregnant to resolve abandonment DOES hold some ground. She'd strive to be better than her own parent. Besides, her idol has like two kids from her "circumstances" and Sasha seems to be pretty into somewhat emulating her.
It's a bit sad that there will only be 12 chapters, it just doesn't feel like there is enough scenes/content with each character. I though that stuff might be added later, like those 2-3 BJ's via Paris that have been name dropped, but I guess not

 

[Glooskabe]

I'm a little bit confused here.
so I'm trying to get all the girls, so I loaded for my last save file (before I stick my finger in Sasha) and everything was working fine but then the date with Paris got me confused for some reason it seems like I'm on her path even though I'm trying to get all the girls, she got pissed at MC when he said when he
said to her that I was going to date with somebody else even though she knows I'm messing with Miracle and Sasha and she said it herself as she doesn't mind that MC do stuff with Miracle and Sasha that's why I got confused

Did you finish the scene?

 

[DocPorny]

Short Version: Enjoyed the update VERY much.

A bit longer way too long Version:
I really enjoy the character development (on that note: cute Sasha is best Sasha ). Miracle for example. Her development into a little sexfiend seems, to me at least, believable the way it happend despite her being so timit in all other aspects of her life. I love how shy and cute she is. I know it's better for her in the long run to be pushed out of her comfort zone but if it were up to me she could stay cooped up forever at home if that's what she wants. What can I say, I still love the cute ones the most. So when the more "aggressive/adult" version of Miracle came to be I was afraid her personality would alter drastically from there on out but I'm happy to see that's not the case (though I fear it's only a matter of time ).

Where was I going with this before I started rambling? Right, Sasha. I'd love nothing more than her becoming just as cute as Miracle, since Sasha is just smoking hot, but it wouldn't fit just happening. But the way it is done here really works for me. It feels organic and not pushed while still being significant.

In regards of render not much to say. They all look gorgeous. Loving them all.

The scenes are great, especially the Sasha ones (not just this update but overall). Just so much passion behind them. [Hm .. kinda feel like I start to convert to the Sasha camp while writing all this]

The Story development I'm not sure about. Right now it feels good. Struggling start for the family unit but slowly they're all have a direction/goal in front of them. At the same time it worries me. This is now 100% guesswork on my side. It feels like they will go from nothing to everything in like 1 second. Like Sasha is becoming a well paid major actor within a month, Paris can barely fight off endorsement deals, pulitzer for Miracle and Sabrina in the next six month ... you see where I'm going with this. I've seen to many rushed endings for good games lately to not be scared of that. But as I said, 100% fear based guessing right now.

Well ... this turned out much longer than I intended. Talk about verbal incontinence. Sorry about that.

 

[shadowr19]

Did you finish the scene?

she asked the mc if we should tell everybody that they all in a relationship

 

[Glooskabe]

she asked the mc if we should tell everybody that they all in a relationship

Okay. If you're still confused, I think you're on the path you want. She thought you were gonna date someone OUTSIDE the group which was why she was pissed.

 

[Ayhsel]

Don't hate me for being an annoying bastard, I am the one living with myself!

I strongly suggest not to write "so you 2 would be first" and write "so you two would be first". It is a sensible thing when to use real numbers, as if somebody tells their phone number, or a password, that is usually fine, but otherwise the non-text looks less elegant.

 

[doyathink]

patiently waiting for the66

 

[shadowr19]

Okay. If you're still confused, I think you're on the path you want. She thought you were gonna date someone OUTSIDE the group which was why she was pissed.

I'm still a little confused. I mean, if I'm on the path I want to be,why she didn't talk about the other girls in a dentist scene I mean she knows that the MC is also messing with the other girls and she probably knows that he's going to start a relationship with the other girl soon too, so why can't she talk about the future between MC and all the girls (including her too).
she was only talking about the future between him and her not including the others and that's why I'm confused

 

[TundraLupus]

I'm still a little confused. I mean, if I'm on the path I want to be,why she didn't talk about the other girls in a dentist scene I mean she knows that the MC is also messing with the other girls and she probably knows that he's going to start a relationship with the other girl soon too, so why can't she talk about the future between MC and all the girls (including her too).
she was only talking about the future between him and her not including the others and that's why I'm confused

I understand the confusion but that is normally how it works in polyamorous relationships, your relationship with the other is not of her business as long as it doesn't affect yours with her unless all of you want to include each other, the girls themselves talk to each other though, one of the girl's comments on it at the end of the update.

 

[shadowr19]

I understand the confusion but that is normally how it works in polyamorous relationships, your relationship with the other is not of her business as long as it doesn't affect yours with her unless all of you want to include each other, the girls themselves talk to each other though, one of the girl's comments on it at the end of the update.

I'm still a little bit confused but I understand what you talking about. but I want to know which scene are you talking about

 

[TundraLupus]

I'm still a little bit confused but I understand what you talking about. but I want to know which scene are you talking about

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[shadowr19]

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are you talking about that scene when she was taking a shower with mc and her name is Sasha

 

[TundraLupus]

are you talking about that scene when she was taking a shower with mc and her name is Sasha

Yes, sorry, had to check I remember some of the words and their meaning but my memory for timelines suck.

 

[Glooskabe]

Yes, sorry, had to check I remember some of the words and their meaning but my memory for timelines suck.

I actually read that exchange as Sasha was going to ask Paris if she (Sasha) could sleep with MC that night, but I guess it is a little ambiguous the way it's worded.

 

[shadowr19]

Yes, sorry, had to check I remember some of the words and their meaning but my memory for timelines suck.

for what I understand Sasha is going to ask Paris if she can sleep with MC tonight not with Paris

at least that's what I understood

 

[TundraLupus]

I actually read that exchange as Sasha was going to ask Paris if she (Sasha) could sleep with MC that night, but I guess it is a little ambiguous the way it's worded.

for what I understand Sasha is going to ask Paris if she can sleep with MC tonight not with Paris

at least that's what I understood

I assumed the opposite because she talks about having a conversation with her sister, but yeah it could be either, or she could be talking about all of them sleeping together.

 

[Glooskabe]

I assumed the opposite because she talks about having a conversation with her sister, but yeah it could be either, or she could be talking about all of them sleeping together.

 

[Sk8587]

In this game have any animation or not because I like it so please someone tell me I want play .

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

In this game have any animation or not because I like it so please someone tell me I want play .

Animations would stop you from playing the game? I always find it strange when I see one of these comments. Animations makeup maybe 5 or 10% of the game. so even if the story is good and the renders are good you will not play if the game does not have animations?