Ren'Py Completed Personal Trainer [v1.1.2] [Domiek]

[Joshua Tree]

So for what I've been reading the games has no ending? I've been following this game for quite some time but I'm not gonna play this last update if there is no proper ending.

There is a ending, just not the ending everyone wanted, or did envision. Kinda like the ending of "LOST".. you sit there and.. eh?

 

[Tyhugg]

what kind of incest in the game? only with the cousin?

 

[Joshua Tree]

in other words its the kinda ending that makes you dislike the whole product

No, I wouldn't say that. But safe to say people had higher expectations to the ending(s). Doesn't help when there is so many female characters involved and players/readers end up get their own favorites and want to see more of them. If people did actually read all the text. The endings wasn't that horrible, just it left a lot up to yourself to fill in the blanks and complete the picture.

 

[H2S]

Spoiler: Steel panther?

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[Saint Blackmoor]

and then......nothing. That's it. Game over. Story ended.

The story is not over, the rest of this "fictional" story continues without our voyeuristic attachment. continue or complete the story in your imagination and move on to better things.

Thank you Domiek for the experience.

 

[The the Guy]

No, I wouldn't say that. But safe to say people had higher expectations to the ending(s). Doesn't help when there is so many female characters involved and players/readers end up get their own favorites and want to see more of them. If people did actually read all the text. The endings wasn't that horrible, just it left a lot up to yourself to fill in the blanks and complete the picture.

when i say dislike the product i mean its probably not gonna be something you come back and play because of the disappointing ending. its like how people dont go back and rewatch lost and wont go back and rewatch game of thrones. the way a story ends is an just as important as how it begins and it will be one of the most important factors in how people look back on it. as some story telling advice for the writer every "end" other then sophie seemed more like a jumping off point for a new plot line its not "realistic" but its important to give the audience a sense of finality. it can be positive or negative but it needs to feel final because as far as the audience knows its the ending of their experience with that world.

 

[nazgarD]

Please spoil the ending to me, whoever completed the game.

 

[Joshua Tree]

when i say dislike the product i mean its probably not gonna be something you come back and play because of the disappointing ending. its like how people dont go back and rewatch lost and wont go back and rewatch game of thrones. the way a story ends is an just as important as how it begins and it will be one of the most important factors in how people look back on it. as some story telling advice for the writer every "end" other then sophie seemed more like a jumping off point for a new plot line its not "realistic" but its important to give the audience a sense of finality. it can be positive or negative but it needs to feel final because as far as the audience knows its the ending of their experience with that world.

Why would you want to replay a game that offer very little in the way of different paths etc? This game quite straight forward. Replay this game would be for the lewd scenes if any tbh. It would be just like rewatch a movie, the outcome would be the same.

 

[quinfax]

Congratulations on finishing your test project. Let's all pray we can meet again in Personal Trainer 2: The search for more money.

P.S. To bad there wasn't any sexy time with Mayan. But you know what they say "Don't stick your dick in crazy"

 

[monkey33]

i noticed no walkthrough, is it safe to just go for every girl like in wvm?

 

[Joshua Tree]

I know this site respects the decision of developer but I think it should be tagged with [Abandoned].

Not in the negative way of "This Dev went playing dead and still milking patreons so we gonna give it a orange tag plate to inform others of this shitty behaviour"

But in a neutral way of "The Dev went on to another project and rushed this game to end and with no future content promised"

Imagine you are newcomer to this game and did not go to last few pages to see the drama, you probably go "hmm this game looks good I will give it a try" and after hours went in, just to get hit in the face with a unfinished ending.

It is understandable for us who followed this game through updates that the ending is rushed, but I think it is unfair for the ones that unaware of it and believe they are about to have nice road trip not knowing the huge hole at the end of the road.

And it could be unfavor for the Dev in a way, as these players who feel cheated by the [Completed] tag will unlikely support the Dev for his/her future project.

Afaik the creator never did make it a secret what this project was. A learning experience. Just because the ending isn't what you wanted it to be, it's still the ending you got. The game/story is still good. If you haven't tried it before, try it. But as with all games, stories, what not. They do come to and end, and it's not always what you want to see, but that is life.

It's very simple, you can choose to support a creator or you just keep consume their creations for free (pirate). Regardless of what you do, you (we) can't start dictate the creative process.

 

[Maou25]

Someone is a Tony Ferguson fan)

 

[Deleted member 1371216]

I think this game deserved to be more than just an exercise. Loved every second of it.

 

[Joshua Tree]

I think this game deserved to be more than just an exercise. Loved every second of it.

The problem with driving with training wheels.... One day you figure out you don't need them any longer and want to get out on the road I think this game shown us what the creator can be capable of doing. So rather than put a anchor around his neck, maybe look forward to what come next?

 

[JantsoP]

First off thanks for the saves for some reason my saves haven't been saved but how do I apply it as I try to, the saves don't appear.
thanks again.

You need to put them to game/saves and %appdata%\RenPy\Gym-1517986565\

 

[lo0u]

Bloody hell, talk about a disappointing conclusion.

Sophie was my favorite girl (because of how much she reminds me of Violet Starr), so it wasn't bad at all, because it was quite realistic. I just expected a bit more after the ending scene, like some post ending scenes, instead of the same old stuff. In fact every ending felt rushed as well.

Still a great game though.

 

[linkinn]

The problem with driving with training wheels.... One day you figure out you don't need them any longer and want to get out on the road I think this game shown us what the creator can be capable of doing. So rather than put a anchor around his neck, maybe look forward to what come next?

And then in 3 years he does the same with his next project, just because it worked here, why not.

 

[Joshua Tree]

And then in 3 years he does the same with his next project, just because it worked here, why not.

No one hold a gun to your head and force you to support the creator. You don't even need to download any more creations from the creator, that way you won't get disappointed either. He created a ending for his "learning experience". Just because it's not the one you wanted, it still is what it is. So what exactly did he do to the project apart from complete it the way he saw fit?

 

[Marzapane]

Is there mom son content in this game? If so, can he creampie her or impregnate her? How long does the whole game last?

 

[riktor]

Is there mom son content in this game? If so, can he creampie her or impregnate her? How long does the whole game last?

no, no, depends on how fast you read.