Ren'Py Abandoned Trapped in Mysterious Lewd Island Remastered [v0.5.8] [cheezygirl]

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Who is your favourite 2 characters?


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darkpyre

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Apr 22, 2019
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For the next update maybe remove a lot of the "questline ends here" parts since the main questline does keep going.
 

Drainer002

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For the next update maybe remove a lot of the "questline ends here" parts since the main questline does keep going.
you shouldn't do that realy, because like it says, its the end of a "quest" not the game, its about the same as "no more content in this branche/route/task". problem is the sandbox ellements in this case. :p
 
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silversurfer1

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Gonna leave a review when I'm all done but I had to take a second to say I'm really liking this game. Lancy is already an all-time favorite girl for me! Insanely hot and a very cute personality.
 
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Otherguy2012

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Aug 21, 2021
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I have enjoyed the game thus far. I like the characters, beautiful work, and the story.

I have encountered one bug to be sure with Vivy. If I click my phone for her stats(we have done all her sex challenges that I could)it shows Katie's stats. Attaching image. Vivy.jpg Vivy.jpg

A few other things. For the most part sex challenges thus far have only been fingering Lancy, cuming for Keisy,and two sex positions with Vivy.

Last thing I wanted to mention is pubic hair. I am in the USA and in my 40s. Of all the women I have slept with in my life only two were not shaved or waxed completely. As one of them put it to me in my early 20s "I shave because hair can not feel your lips kisses bare skin does,and it just looks better."

Last thing. I seem to be able to do only one thing each day and the day ends. Even having a dream triggers the day to end and go to the next day.

Thank you for all your hard work and it looks like it will be an incredible game.
 
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Dragon59

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Last thing I wanted to mention is pubic hair. I am in the USA and in my 40s. Of all the women I have slept with in my life only two were not shaved or waxed completely. As one of them put it to me in my early 20s "I shave because hair can not feel your lips kisses bare skin does,and it just looks better."

Last thing. I seem to be able to do only one thing each day and the day ends. Even having a dream triggers the day to end and go to the next day.

Thank you for all your hard work and it looks like it will be an incredible game.
I'm in my 60s and I had the opposite experiences.
 

anna94

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I have enjoyed the game thus far. I like the characters, beautiful work, and the story.

I have encountered one bug to be sure with Vivy. If I click my phone for her stats(we have done all her sex challenges that I could)it shows Katie's stats. Attaching image. View attachment 1455705 View attachment 1455705

A few other things. For the most part sex challenges thus far have only been fingering Lancy, cuming for Keisy,and two sex positions with Vivy.

Last thing I wanted to mention is pubic hair. I am in the USA and in my 40s. Of all the women I have slept with in my life only two were not shaved or waxed completely. As one of them put it to me in my early 20s "I shave because hair can not feel your lips kisses bare skin does,and it just looks better."

Last thing. I seem to be able to do only one thing each day and the day ends. Even having a dream triggers the day to end and go to the next day.

Thank you for all your hard work and it looks like it will be an incredible game.
Thx for the feedback! Noticed Vivy bug and fixed it!

I will add more to sex challenges, it takes the most time to do. Animation is really hard to make haha

Thx for playing!! :D
 

Otherguy2012

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Aug 21, 2021
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Thx for the feedback! Noticed Vivy bug and fixed it!

I will add more to sex challenges, it takes the most time to do. Animation is really hard to make haha

Thx for playing!! :D
Just a thought on the animations. They do by far take the longest. How about a compromise for furthering your goal of a fantastic game?

Still frames,with maybe a Small note somewhere "Animation at a future date".

Animations are fantastic do not get me wrong,but most also want a great story.

Your game becomes more playable and enjoyable and can move forward in the story you want to tell(we all seem to like it).

Just an idea.
 

anna94

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Just a thought on the animations. They do by far take the longest. How about a compromise for furthering your goal of a fantastic game?

Still frames,with maybe a Small note somewhere "Animation at a future date".

Animations are fantastic do not get me wrong,but most also want a great story.

Your game becomes more playable and enjoyable and can move forward in the story you want to tell(we all seem to like it).

Just an idea.
Its a great idea but I did that on the first release and people were dissapointed because they were were waiting so long for this scene and end up with a small note " coming soon" and ended up having backlash haha. xD

And also I did a pole on patreon, most of them want sex scene and story. Hmmm
 

Drainer002

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Its a great idea but I did that on the first release and people were dissapointed because they were were waiting so long for this scene and end up with a small note " coming soon" and ended up having backlash haha. xD

And also I did a pole on patreon, most of them want sex scene and story. Hmmm
When dev's poll or ask for release dates versus content, i always say the same, take the time you need for content release so you have time to write a decent story and at least decent animation(s) that are suposed to go with the content.
Instead of a deadline where either the story or the animations/ renders are insuficient. So basicly it could mean that you release content after only a week and the other time it could take up a couple of months mostly becouse of animations rendering.
 
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hottarod

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There are a few little bugs in this program.

Luna's stats are displayed for 3 or 4 of the other girls as well as Luna.
The mysterious coins counter never changes and is stuck at 125.
I can't find anywhere that displays the MC's points.

A lot of the text language seems to be a translation from another language perhaps of Asian origin. There is also a lot of incorrect phrasing or incorrect words used all over the place. Here are just a few examples. "That is a relieve" should use the word relief and not relieve. "Hold on, do this pictures goes to public or anyone else. It doesn't goes anywhere else". "It" is referring to photos so that should say "they". Doesn't then should be "don't". Goes should be "go". "They don't go anywhere else". The full statement should be "Hold on, do these pictures go to the public or anyone else?". A question should end in a question mark. An excited or angry statement should end in an exclamation point. Comments that a character is thinking and not saying out loud should be in italics or parentheses so we know they are thoughts and not statements. It seems on the face of it insignificant but after a while it gets annoying. If the MC is waiting he didn't "waited for awhile" and you didn't took a picture. That should correctly say "you wait for a while" and "you take a picture" because you are doing this in the present.

So I have written a lot with many technology, research and planning white papers in corporations. I also have written a lot of code in my past in several languages. I also wrote a book related to planning for future technology and I have also written my own book of poetry. My background may contribute to my aggravation with how the language is being misused in this program but if you are going to go to all the effort required to develop something like this it should be trivial to simply use the language properly.
 

anna94

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There are a few little bugs in this program.

Luna's stats are displayed for 3 or 4 of the other girls as well as Luna.
The mysterious coins counter never changes and is stuck at 125.
I can't find anywhere that displays the MC's points.

A lot of the text language seems to be a translation from another language perhaps of Asian origin. There is also a lot of incorrect phrasing or incorrect words used all over the place. Here are just a few examples. "That is a relieve" should use the word relief and not relieve. "Hold on, do this pictures goes to public or anyone else. It doesn't goes anywhere else". "It" is referring to photos so that should say "they". Doesn't then should be "don't". Goes should be "go". "They don't go anywhere else". The full statement should be "Hold on, do these pictures go to the public or anyone else?". A question should end in a question mark. An excited or angry statement should end in an exclamation point. Comments that a character is thinking and not saying out loud should be in italics or parentheses so we know they are thoughts and not statements. It seems on the face of it insignificant but after a while it gets annoying. If the MC is waiting he didn't "waited for awhile" and you didn't took a picture. That should correctly say "you wait for a while" and "you take a picture" because you are doing this in the present.

So I have written a lot with many technology, research and planning white papers in corporations. I also have written a lot of code in my past in several languages. I also wrote a book related to planning for future technology and I have also written my own book of poetry. My background may contribute to my aggravation with how the language is being misused in this program but if you are going to go to all the effort required to develop something like this it should be trivial to simply use the language properly.
Ahhh that's true! Thanks for telling!
I'll fix the bug next update.
And yea.. my english is bad..hope i can find an English writer soon..~
 

Drainer002

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Ahhh that's true! Thanks for telling!
I'll fix the bug next update.
And yea.. my english is bad..hope i can find an English writer soon..~
I can't help you there, im not english myself, but i did correct some mistakes while patching, when im in doubt i use google translate sometimes i even do a double translation depending on the original text an example if its written in spanish and translated to english i will do: english-> dutch + spanish -> dutch, if im still discontent i try other countries then to Dutch and then back to english, so long they use the abc alphabet, sometimes even frases are used as examples. oh, im dutch by the way haha.

Ofcours its a lot harder when using figure of speech.
 
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anna94

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I can't help you there, im not english myself, but i did correct some mistakes while patching, when im in doubt i use google translate sometimes i even do a double translation depending on the original text an example if its written in spanish and translated to english i will do: english-> dutch + spanish -> dutch, if im still discontent i try other countries then to Dutch and then back to english, so long they use the abc alphabet, sometimes even frases are used as examples. oh, im dutch by the way haha.

Ofcours its a lot harder when using figure of speech.
Yea, I tried too. I even have my patron proofread it.. at least it is not as bad as before when I first started :ROFLMAO:
 
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