VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Clever Name [v0.04.7] [RandyJMarsh]

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Just another random thing for the fun of it.
Fairy fun time

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I wanna turn those two fairies into finger puppets; one on the pinky one on the index. Also wanna get my dick inside of Ash. Maybe Rose could egg her into it, call her a coward, incite her competitiveness by saying she's done it before. Thanks for giving us so much great stuff. Can only hope we're fortunate enough to be graced by more!

 

[zombhunt]

I know this is off topic but i will ask anyway. Does anyone remember a VN with a trans girl wearing a yellow ball cap i think i am not sure, it definately something yellow. The MC meets her in a gas station restroom i think and then later at her apartment? I have been searching with the filters and nothing. i figured since this has a trans/futa content someone here might remember.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I know this is off topic but i will ask anyway. Does anyone remember a VN with a trans girl wearing a yellow ball cap i think i am not sure, it definately something yellow. The MC meets her in a gas station restroom i think and then later at her apartment? I have been searching with the filters and nothing. i figured since this has a trans/futa content someone here might remember.

Can't swear to it, but I believe it was this one...
https://f95zone.to/threads/alison-fall-of-the-apple-v1-0-onemanvn.20766/
If I'm wrong I apologize...

 

[zombhunt]

no i tried that one, that trans was mostly interested in allison/alice not the MC, thanks anyway.

The one i am thinking of looks like a character from a video game, one of the final fantasies i think, short blonde hair with a yellow ball cap, yellow jacket and yellow shorts on, in the gas station restroom, but she is a long haired brunette later in her apartment, wigs maybe.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

no i tried that one, that trans was mostly interested in allison/alice not the MC, thanks anyway.

The one i am thinking of looks like a character from a video game, one of the final fantasies i think, short blonde hair with a yellow ball cap, yellow jacket and yellow shorts on, in the gas station restroom, but she is a long haired brunette later in her apartment, wigs maybe.

That's how I remembered the scene but it has been remade. Maybe it was removed when they did the rework. I hope not for your sake and I hope someone else might know... good luck

Dressed as Cindy from final fantasy if I remember correctly...

 

[zombhunt]

ok yeah they did change it i guess, i remember i lost interest when they added those alternate realities. thank you.

 

[zombhunt]

I don't want to spark up a bunch of hate or anything but i have read on this thread from some different people their view on NTR, the one thing i have noticed in the defense of it is that the MC is ok with it so its ok , the problem is most people aren't noticing that the player/reader/viewer is the one that's actually being cucked or NTR'd. I put myself mentally in the role of the MC and by doing that it takes away from my choice because a dev writes it so the MC is ok with it , nope always treat the MC as the player in your mindset of creating that situation.

With this very VN in mind, the girls started to get on my nerves with all the shit attitude towards the MC always finding ways to put him down for the sake of humor, that started making me dislike them with each time they did it, mainly the fairy. Then i find out (from reading here) that Jamie gets to start having her way with at least one of the girls the MC doesn't get and I had to go back and remove her from my storyline. The comment of we don't need you anymore because we have her now goes really well with the attitude towards the MC they have had from the beginning, he sucks but he has a dick so we tolerate him kind of attitude. The excuse of sex got me into trouble with my previous home so i wont have sex with MC because it might cause a problem but i will have sex with this other person within this same household does not make sense at all. Once the girls started to pile into living with him he got way less play with them more teasing really, and they got more with each other.

No need to comment at all. Just remember that the reader is the MC and taking away their choice is cucking or NTRing them not the MC.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I don't want to spark up a bunch of hate or anything but i have read on this thread from some different people their view on NTR, the one thing i have noticed in the defense of it is that the MC is ok with it so its ok , the problem is most people aren't noticing that the player/reader/viewer is the one that's actually being cucked or NTR'd. I put myself mentally in the role of the MC and by doing that it takes away from my choice because a dev writes it so the MC is ok with it , nope always treat the MC as the player in your mindset of creating that situation.

With this very VN in mind, the girls started to get on my nerves with all the shit attitude towards the MC always finding ways to put him down for the sake of humor, that started making me dislike them with each time they did it, mainly the fairy. Then i find out (from reading here) that Jamie gets to start having her way with at least one of the girls the MC doesn't get and I had to go back and remove her from my storyline. The comment of we don't need you anymore because we have her now goes really well with the attitude towards the MC they have had from the beginning, he sucks but he has a dick so we tolerate him kind of attitude. The excuse of sex got me into trouble with my previous home so i wont have sex with MC because it might cause a problem but i will have sex with this other person within this same household does not make sense at all. Once the girls started to pile into living with him he got way less play with them more teasing really, and they got more with each other.

No need to comment at all. Just remember that the reader is the MC and taking away their choice is cucking or NTRing them not the MC.

Anywhere else you would have a point. Here it is tagged ntr when the mc is jealous not the player. When the mc is heartbroken etc. Here if the mc is fine with the others fucking etc then it's either sharing or swinging.

The tag system is really flawed here but your setting yourself up for a lot of frustration if you don't accept how this forum's ntr tag is: if the mc is jealous not the player...

 

[zombhunt]

I see you didn't get the point. No matter what, the player is the MC. It doesn't matter how its written or how the tag is defined. The player/viewer/reader is the one that's jealous or heartbroken. The need to hide behind the definition is very telling on its own. Just by writing in that the MC is fine with it, does that make the true MC(player) fine with it?

My intention of my comment was to make those more aware that defending with the definition doesn't help. The definition is a shield to allow the excuse of not giving the option to avoid it. To some they may not see their self as the MC but some also do, don't just cater to the ones who don't and think more of the full picture of both sides.

 

[RandyJMarsh]

I don't want to spark up a bunch of hate or anything but i have read on this thread from some different people their view on NTR, the one thing i have noticed in the defense of it is that the MC is ok with it so its ok , the problem is most people aren't noticing that the player/reader/viewer is the one that's actually being cucked or NTR'd. I put myself mentally in the role of the MC and by doing that it takes away from my choice because a dev writes it so the MC is ok with it , nope always treat the MC as the player in your mindset of creating that situation.

With this very VN in mind, the girls started to get on my nerves with all the shit attitude towards the MC always finding ways to put him down for the sake of humor, that started making me dislike them with each time they did it, mainly the fairy. Then i find out (from reading here) that Jamie gets to start having her way with at least one of the girls the MC doesn't get and I had to go back and remove her from my storyline. The comment of we don't need you anymore because we have her now goes really well with the attitude towards the MC they have had from the beginning, he sucks but he has a dick so we tolerate him kind of attitude. The excuse of sex got me into trouble with my previous home so i wont have sex with MC because it might cause a problem but i will have sex with this other person within this same household does not make sense at all. Once the girls started to pile into living with him he got way less play with them more teasing really, and they got more with each other.

No need to comment at all. Just remember that the reader is the MC and taking away their choice is cucking or NTRing them not the MC.

Friends tease and make jokes at each others expense if you think the girls don't like the MC I really can't understand how you came to that conclusion.
Yes Jamie starts having sex with the other girls it fits with the way they all act around each other.
Yes Jamie gets to have sex with Holly before the player does and there have been complaints about this before but thats just how the story goes.
I could of given the player the choice to stop Jamie joining in but I have no interest in stopping her from having her fun because doing that would be treating her differently from the other girls which would be wrong.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

I see you didn't get the point. No matter what, the player is the MC. It doesn't matter how its written or how the tag is defined. The player/viewer/reader is the one that's jealous or heartbroken. The need to hide behind the definition is very telling on its own. Just by writing in that the MC is fine with it, does that make the true MC(player) fine with it?

My intention of my comment was to make those more aware that defending with the definition doesn't help. The definition is a shield to allow the excuse of not giving the option to avoid it. To some they may not see their self as the MC but some also do, don't just cater to the ones who don't and think more of the full picture of both sides.

I got your point and I also said anywhere else you would have a point. It is the mc that matters not the player. If the mc isn't upset with the events here on this forum then it's not ntr.

Look everyone feels differently so how the hell would you make a tag on how the player feels?!? The mc you can gage how they feel because it is shown. There is no way in hell to know if a player will be jealous or not.

What may make you jealous might not even phase another and vice versa.

Hope you got my point...

 

[zombhunt]

exactly, by not knowing how someone would feel and then making that choice for them, means that you are cucking the player. by giving control over situations like that to the player, you cover both sides of the fence and make both happy. never just assume that because it is written that it how everyone feels and just accepts it. devs start getting disliked for making choices by assumptions others may not have made. basically giving someone more control over the actions of the MC is the better choice.

that alone would almost solve all arguments over ntr. freedom of choice. i liked jamie until that point, so she had to go.

in this game though none of them are his love interest because they don't really give a shit about him so of course from the MC's perspective its not ntr. to the player that might be a different story for some players.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

exactly, by not knowing how someone would feel and then making that choice for them, means that you are cucking the player. by giving control over situations like that to the player, you cover both sides of the fence and make both happy. never just assume that because it is written that it how everyone feels and just accepts it. devs start getting disliked for making choices by assumptions others may not have made. basically giving someone more control over the actions of the MC is the better choice.

that alone would almost solve all arguments over ntr. freedom of choice. i liked jamie until that point, so she had to go.

in this game though none of them are his love interest because they don't really give a shit about him so of course from the MC's perspective its not ntr. to the player that might be a different story for some players.

Even when there is choice there is still arguments. I could point out many of thread where the choice is present and still there are posters fighting over ntr.

Devs like this one that don't do it for money but for love of the vn itself will always make their vision. It matters not if everyone likes it because it's a labor of love.

I don't feel the lis treat the mc bad nor do I have issue with them touching each other. Most importantly the mc doesn't mind it nor does he feel mistreated. The mcs really happy life started when he found that beautiful little fairy and the story began...

 

[RandyJMarsh]

exactly, by not knowing how someone would feel and then making that choice for them, means that you are cucking the player. by giving control over situations like that to the player, you cover both sides of the fence and make both happy. never just assume that because it is written that it how everyone feels and just accepts it. devs start getting disliked for making choices by assumptions others may not have made. basically giving someone more control over the actions of the MC is the better choice.

that alone would almost solve all arguments over ntr. freedom of choice. i liked jamie until that point, so she had to go.

in this game though none of them are his love interest because they don't really give a shit about him so of course from the MC's perspective its not ntr. to the player that might be a different story for some players.

While I agree that more choices is almost always a good thing there are a couple of reasons not to add a choice for some things.
1 When it would change the story you want for a character.
2 When it would create a large amount of extra dev time for something that isn't really needed/something most people will never see(I'm sure this would be a contentious opinion for some but time vs more important content is a necessary call to make).

And again with this idea that the girls don't care about the MC I just don't understand.

 

[zombhunt]

their attitude towards him is that more of a walking warm dildo with money, tease then leave, start suggesting bathroom time should just be girls only. holly says i don't want to have sex with him because that caused problems before but no problem having sex with someone else in the same home. all the shitty digs the fairy gets in at him all the time. he is basically made fun of or a verbal punching bag the entire time by the majority. they really treat him terrible. go get me this go get me that, beta male.

take the bitcoin and run dude!

sorry for mispellings or bad punctuation, big fingers and a dying keyboard dont mix well.

 

[RandyJMarsh]

their attitude towards him is that more of a walking warm dildo with money, tease then leave, start suggesting bathroom time should just be girls only. holly says i don't want to have sex with him because that caused problems before but no problem having sex with someone else in the same home. all the shitty digs the fairy gets in at him all the time. he is basically made fun of or a verbal punching bag the entire time by the majority. they really treat him terrible. go get me this go get me that, beta male.

take the bitcoin and run dude!

sorry for mispellings or bad punctuation, big fingers and a dying keyboard dont mix well.

While I'm not going to claim my writing is great I think you have misunderstood the way they talk to each other because that is the total opposite of what I was going for.
But labeling him as a "beta male" might just be the problem here. I don't see the world that way. He isn't an alpha or a beta he just is.

 

[Hordragg]

ok yeah they did change it i guess, i remember i lost interest when they added those alternate realities. thank you.

I respectfully call bullshit on that line, as you definitely played the dom path extensive enough to encounter non-cosplay Tiff. OMVN only remastered the prologue, getting rid of the rape and applying some of what they learned on the way:

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their attitude towards him is that more of a walking warm dildo with money, tease then leave, start suggesting bathroom time should just be girls only. holly says i don't want to have sex with him because that caused problems before but no problem having sex with someone else in the same home. all the shitty digs the fairy gets in at him all the time. he is basically made fun of or a verbal punching bag the entire time by the majority. they really treat him terrible. go get me this go get me that, beta male.

take the bitcoin and run dude!

sorry for mispellings or bad punctuation, big fingers and a dying keyboard dont mix well.

That is neither how it's intended nor how it plays out. It's a harem of respect and equal opportunities, with playful banter and a bit of teasing thrown in. It may be not for you, but most of us playing the game really love what Randy does.

RandyJMarsh, you rock!

 

[Skarletts_Blossom69]

So I had to start over, because my computer crashed in the middle of backing up. I had noticed a few things I didnt remember.
I love this game. What would happen to the MC if he got sick which girl would take care of him the most? I vote Jamie, but Im bias because I love her.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

So I had to start over, because my computer crashed in the middle of backing up. I had noticed a few things I didnt remember.
I love this game. What would happen to the MC if he got sick which girl would take care of him the most? I vote Jamie, but Im bias because I love her.

Holly being the "Mommy" figure would be my bet on both plays. Not saying Jamie wouldn't be babying him as well

 

[Vreek]

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