VN Ren'Py Onhold The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

[Apexpredator47]

Hopefully the landlord dicks her down in this next update.

 

[GreeperDark3dART]

por favor; coda dañada muéstranos algo!

 

[DamagedCoda]

Hi everyone,


Was receiving a lot of complaints regarding the textbox so I got it fixed in this update.
Also now you can hide the in-game buttons at the top right corner. Fixed minor bugs and spelling mistakes as well.

To make these changes you guys can go to preference -> dialogue box -> to change the text box related things and preference -> Ingame button -> to hide the top right corner buttons.

Changes that you can make in the text box :

- Box background
- Text Outline
- Text-box Height
- Text- box Width
- Text-box Opacity
- Text Size


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Thank you for being so patient and for all the support!

 

[seif19]

damn can't wait for the next update even tho its still far away

 

[dimasbtwe]

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[drfronkonstinmd]

Late newcomer here. I knew about this game but I didn't start playing it until recently.

First of all and, same as many other comments, congratulations. The quality of the renders, the main model and the writing are all top notch. Definitely top ten and that's saying something considering the amount of quality games available here.

Gail, as many others have pointed out, is probably the hottest character I've ever seen here. It helps that I'm a boobs/ass/lips guy who's crazy about extreme hourglass figures, but apart from that, it's just that she oozes sexuality.

That being said, I do have a very personal issue with the game itself, and I want to emphasise the "personal" part.

I want to point out that Gail is very well written. So much that I recognise real women traits that I don't find attractive about her personality. She's the stereotypical beautiful woman who wants to succeed in life, loves spending hours shopping, wears nice clothes, reads cheap sexual novels, doesn't like anything remotely nerdy and thinks those things are for immature men, uses her body to get what she wants on a regular basis, forces her boyfriend to do what she prefers, complains and even punishes him when he's doing something he likes and not paying attention to her... And I know the game is suppossed to be about her fucking her way to the top and she needs to be particularly selfish, but I can't stand the moments where she only cares about her boyfriend either when she just cheated on him or when he's doing something special for her.

What I'm trying to say is that, even though she's extremely hot, she's basically the kind of woman I'd never find attractive due to her overall behaviour, so I have a hard time being her while I play.

Other than that I can't help having a hard on every time she's on the screen.

 

[javikaston]

Late newcomer here. I knew about this game but I didn't start playing it until recently.

First of all and, same as many other comments, congratulations. The quality of the renders, the main model and the writing are all top notch. Definitely top ten and that's saying something considering the amount of quality games available here.

Gail, as many others have pointed out, is probably the hottest character I've ever seen here. It helps that I'm a boobs/ass/lips guy who's crazy about extreme hourglass figures, but apart from that, it's just that she oozes sexuality.

That being said, I do have a very personal issue with the game itself, and I want to emphasise the "personal" part.

I want to point out that Gail is very well written. So much that I recognise real women traits that I don't find attractive about her personality. She's the stereotypical beautiful woman who wants to succeed in life, loves spending hours shopping, wears nice clothes, reads cheap sexual novels, doesn't like anything remotely nerdy and thinks those things are for immature men, uses her body to get what she wants on a regular basis, forces her boyfriend to do what she prefers, complains and even punishes him when he's doing something he likes and not paying attention to her... And I know the game is suppossed to be about her fucking her way to the top and she needs to be particularly selfish, but I can't stand the moments where she only cares about her boyfriend either when she just cheated on him or when he's doing something special for her.

What I'm trying to say is that, even though she's extremely hot, she's basically the kind of woman I'd never find attractive due to her overall behaviour, so I have a hard time being her while I play.

Other than that I can't help having a hard on every time she's on the screen.

I see all your points. to make Gail more nerdy. what would your opinion be on it

 

[javikaston]

my question to you all if there was something about gail's personality that you could change what would it be and why?

Also if she was loyal could you see yourself dating her or just using for her sex?

 

[Echbert]

my question to you all if there was something about gail's personality that you could change what would it be and why?

Also if she was loyal could you see yourself dating her or just using for her sex?

Dont' really have anything specific, but i think what the other poster meant is that Gale lacks authenticity. She feels extremely basic, and in many ways a straight stereotype. Give her something unexpected to be into, like maybe on her off time she loves reading Noir novels, absolutely random and out of left field, but it works to add some dynamism to her character. A few examples from other games:

ORS-Lena- loves literature, she prefers the romance genre(not cheap drivel neither), but will absolutely read anything that is of quality, whether sci-fi, fantasy, drama, etc. she just appreciates literature as an art form, and the same applies to music which is her real passion.

BaD- Maya- she's unique anyway, but one aspect about her you don't see coming is that she's a huge movie buff, she especially loves horror movies, that's something she could spend all day doing.

BaD- Sage- she joked about liking birdwatching, but honeslty think this would have been a nice quirk for her character.

AEA- Anna- grew up being the "computer wiz" in her town, and this gave her a love for online games.

these help ground the characters. A good thing is to give her a passion that she's into as a hobby(a few would be better), that's totally unrelated to her work. What does Gale do on her free time alone? what about with friends? what did she used to love to do as a kid that she still does now? Just think about all the unexpected quirks you find in the women you know that make them unique.

I probably would date her for a bit, but it wouldn't last. She's too basic, judgemental, and honeslty selfish, she comes of as very focused on herself and what she wants, and that's not really the type of person i would want to be with. if you want to make her endearing, you have to give her personality traits that make her enjoyable to be around, even if you keep her other aspects, show that there's more to her than that, and even some internal conflict about who she is. example Yen from Witcher comes off like this, but once you peel back the layers of her character there's way more to her, and she's not really that bad, but she also grows quite a bit.

 

[drfronkonstinmd]

my question to you all if there was something about gail's personality that you could change what would it be and why?

Also if she was loyal could you see yourself dating her or just using for her sex?

Wow… I didn’t expect this to turn into a general “how would you improve Gail” question from the developer himself.

First and foremost, my review of the character was very personal. It doesn’t mean that anything should be changed. In fact, women who behave like Gail are rather common. It’s true they’re normally referred to as “basic”, like someone pointed out before, because it’s like they took a list of every single thing a stereotypical woman should do and say and they live their lives according to that list. You could say Gail sort of feels like a dramatised version of that type of woman.

As for me, the reason why I talked about nerdy stuff is just because I find nerdy girls extremely attractive, but I don’t think that would work with the way Gail has been behaving throughout the game so far. If anything I missed finding out she had some kind of unusual hobby that’s clearly separated from the idea of a standard serious adult woman. She could even keep it a secret from everyone.

Would I date Gail if she was loyal? That’s a tricky question, because from the very first scene, she’s made very clear that she can’t control her sexual urges and she loves using her body to control men around her, so making her loyal would be basically changing her whole personality, which leaves us just with her insanely hot and provocative body and face. I don’t think anyone here would have any problem dating her based on that. If anything I’d say she’s way out of our league.

 

[javikaston]

Wow… I didn’t expect this to turn into a general “how would you improve Gail” question from the developer himself.

First and foremost, my review of the character was very personal. It doesn’t mean that anything should be changed. In fact, women who behave like Gail are rather common. It’s true they’re normally referred to as “basic”, like someone pointed out before, because it’s like they took a list of every single thing a stereotypical woman should do and say and they live their lives according to that list. You could say Gail sort of feels like a dramatised version of that type of woman.

As for me, the reason why I talked about nerdy stuff is just because I find nerdy girls extremely attractive, but I don’t think that would work with the way Gail has been behaving throughout the game so far. If anything I missed finding out she had some kind of unusual hobby that’s clearly separated from the idea of a standard serious adult woman. She could even keep it a secret from everyone.

Would I date Gail if she was loyal? That’s a tricky question, because from the very first scene, she’s made very clear that she can’t control her sexual urges and she loves using her body to control men around her, so making her loyal would be basically changing her whole personality, which leaves us just with her insanely hot and provocative body and face. I don’t think anyone here would have any problem dating her based on that. If anything I’d say she’s way out of our league.

Im not coda. Just someone that like to do what ifs I have my own thoughts on how to make Gail more of a well rounded person. Instead of a walking sex toy.

But

I've must missed where she said she couldn't resist her sexual desires.

From what I gathered. Before the day the game started she was a conservative woman. That had morals. And wanted to be views for her brains not her tits.

I'm still trying to figure out why she did it.
How the personality changes that fast.

And the thing that bugs me the most because i don't understand why Gail let's dirty Dave treat her like a fuck toy.

But then again I like to deep dive in questions like these. That all.
Apparently Gail was nerdy before the day she tried to play Dave and got in over her head.

As for being out of our league. Maybe. But. Gail is very insecure about herself on a few different levels.

 

[AreYouSerious?]

Uhmmmm. Thiccccc.

She kinda reminds me of that streamer that shows up on all the tik toks, the dumb one that doesn't get the sexual innuendos.

 

[javikaston]

Uhmmmm. Thiccccc.

She kinda reminds me of that streamer that shows up on all the tik toks, the dumb one that doesn't get the sexual innuendos.

I wouldn't even know who you are talking about. I've never even downloaded the app. I've sure there are alot of dumb one on there. Last time I heard anything about it. Thats all were on there.

 

[javikaston]

I do feel like coda could do alot better on the dialogue and character development. There is no build-up to the events so they just feel flat. Gail never takes the time to enjoy the successes she has. I feel there is no consistency to her personality. Gail feels like a plot device. Just to move the story to point A to B. Gail doesn't really feel like her own person.


If she's going to be a slut atleast have her own that shit. one moment shes like dont fucking touch me and the next she like please fuck me in the ass and cum inside of it "daddy." Like wtf bitch do you have borderline personality disorder or something. because damn.

 

[javikaston]

Also. I love Gail's big tits and fat ass. If she wants to be used as a fuck toy. Who am I to say no to her. Having a hott fuck toy like Gail can be fun.

If a useless fuck like Dave can do it. I know I can do it lol

 

[dolfe67]

I do feel like coda could do alot better on the dialogue and character development. There is no build-up to the events so they just feel flat. Gail never takes the time to enjoy the successes she has. I feel there is no consistency to her personality. Gail feels like a plot device. Just to move the story to point A to B. Gail doesn't really feel like her own person.


If she's going to be a slut atleast have her own that shit. one moment shes like dont fucking touch me and the next she like please fuck me in the ass and cum inside of it "daddy." Like wtf bitch do you have borderline personality disorder or something. because damn.

Yeah the writing is pretty basic, just enough to more or less link the porn scenes between them. Don't think too much and enjoy the porn. It's not a game you play for the story.

 

[Echbert]

I do feel like coda could do alot better on the dialogue and character development. There is no build-up to the events so they just feel flat. Gail never takes the time to enjoy the successes she has. I feel there is no consistency to her personality. Gail feels like a plot device. Just to move the story to point A to B. Gail doesn't really feel like her own person.


If she's going to be a slut atleast have her own that shit. one moment shes like dont fucking touch me and the next she like please fuck me in the ass and cum inside of it "daddy." Like wtf bitch do you have borderline personality disorder or something. because damn.

That's pretty much what most of the Female MC games are like. The writers don't really put much actual thought into them, and just use them as sex toys, and plot devices. It's why games like ORS stand out. Even then i wouldn't mind if they showed that self awareness in the script. Fashion Bussiness is totally ridiculous, Monica acts like a spoiled child, and the scenarios she's put in show how idiotic she can be, but the writer totally pokes fun at this, and it makes the whole thing much more fun as a result.

I agree on build up, one thing a porn story should have is build up if anything else, it's why we choose to engage with it as opposed to just looking for "sex scenes".

 

[javikaston]

That's pretty much what most of the Female MC games are like. The writers don't really put much actual thought into them, and just use them as sex toys, and plot devices. It's why games like ORS stand out. Even then i wouldn't mind if they showed that self awareness in the script. Fashion Bussiness is totally ridiculous, Monica acts like a spoiled child, and the scenarios she's put in show how idiotic she can be, but the writer totally pokes fun at this, and it makes the whole thing much more fun as a result.

I agree on build up, one thing a porn story should have is build up if anything else, it's why we choose to engage with it as opposed to just looking for "sex scenes".

What are ors ?

 

[Bibifoc]

What are ors ?

Our Red String I guess

 

[Charlie78]

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