VN Ren'Py Completed 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Abere Lucifer]

[slayer991]

They're just balancing all the people giving 1-star ratings to anything they personally disagree with.

That's not right either. I don't rate games based on the subject matter. Say example, I don't like NTR...would it be fair for me as a reviewer to downgrade the game based on the fact I don't like NTR? Obviously not. I just don't play those games. There are 2 audiences in any review. One audience is the author/dev. The other audience is the community. A good review serves both audiences.

I almost never rate what I consider to be a substandard game early in the cycle unless the game has potential. Why? Because it can sink a dev before they really get started. This game had so many 5 star reviews based on the subject matter alone well before my review, so I left an honest review.

This game has a ton of potential. The premise is ridiculous, amusing, and I ended up laughing out loud various times throughout. The weak spot of this game is the gameplay and renders.

It's my hope that Doc can clean up the flaws in this game and I can amend my review. Do I expect a serious game? No. But with better renders, more choices that affect gameplay, and continuined humor; I'll happily amend my review.

 

[slayer991]

Dude chill it's SATIRE. The developer is NOT condoning rape rather he is poking fun at the conspiracy theories certain Americans hold to. Believe me as an American I can attest that some of them are really out there and I have worked with a few that would "educate" me about them on a daily basis.

The humor is the best part of this game right now. Full credit where credit is due on this aspect. If you don't get the humor in this game then it's probably best to move on.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

v0.03d has been uploaded. It's all spelling and punctuation fixes. Thanks to those that reported those to me.

 

[LorgarAurelian]

If he didn't understand the premise of the game,
why do you suppose he will understand the explanations?

He probably will not understand it, but it never hurts to try.

 

[apariciodof]

It's basically like trying to explain comedy to a feminist, it's just not possible.

A comment perfectly suited to the spirit of this thread

 

[TommyTuba]

I'll tell you why I started making the games The Mysterious Island and 23 Sisters...I got bored during the quarantine and taught myself to code and make CGs. I'd never done either ever. My brain absorbers shit I wanna learn very easily, but shit I don't goes in one ear and out the other.

Best of luck to you. Looks like you’ve found a new career.

Well. I almost allways support game makers with warm words. Maybe i dont like some themes but can go on. In this game i must use some warm words to: "Burn in HELL!". WTF! COVID is because mothman rapes woman!? If you wanted to show that incest + drugs make some people very miserable its your game. I can stomach bad graphic, some typos and even bad jokes about Total RUMP, but this game make dick limp. If you created game on some drugs please throw them away. Dont let them destroy remnants of your intelligence or common sense.
While you put so much work in this game and maybe made your skills better, story or aplication of your knowledge totaly missed point.

 

[RustyV]

I liked not being able to understand the Irish girls. It reminded me of an Irish girl I met in London.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

Spoiler: Tiffany's Pregnancy Time

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[RustyV]

Brandine

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

I've started writing the script for 0.04 and in it we see just how redneck Krissy and Tiffany really are. I'll let you ponder this question, "What happens when you give rednecks a lot of money?"

 

[tripod70]

I've started writing the script for 0.04 and in it we see just how redneck Krissy and Tiffany really are. I'll let you ponder this question, "What happens when you give rednecks a lot of money?"

That should be easy :They go "ApeShit"

 

[tripod70]

I couldn't resist it

 

[Deleted member 2613945]

I've started writing the script for 0.04 and in it we see just how redneck Krissy and Tiffany really are. I'll let you ponder this question, "What happens when you give rednecks a lot of money?"

They will go to casino to win even more money, and knowing a life they lost everything
Or
They will buy many unnesessary things they didn't had in they lifes and spend every cent

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

I'm not gonna say who says this. Use your imagination.

Spoiler: Rednecks and Money

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[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

I'm not gonna say who says this. Use your imagination.

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Golden dildo? Jewel encrusted anal douche? Very expensive cowboy boots?

 

[Macinnes]

I've started writing the script for 0.04 and in it we see just how redneck Krissy and Tiffany really are. I'll let you ponder this question, "What happens when you give rednecks a lot of money?"

They go buy a 4x4 and a triple wide...

 

[Deleted member 2613945]

I'm not gonna say who says this. Use your imagination.

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Buttplug with diamonds
Diamond dildo?

Fuck it, must Play on latest update again to see new easter eggs

 

[TommyTuba]

Spoiler: Tiffany's Pregnancy Time

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How fast will the newborns mature?

 

[Badjourasmix]

From all the adult games I've played, Grant is by far the best father. Not only he gives the mc a shitton of money he also helps him create his own harem.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

How fast will the newborns mature?

Five days.