billyjoebobmartin

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I've started writing the script for 0.04 and in it we see just how redneck Krissy and Tiffany really are. I'll let you ponder this question, "What happens when you give rednecks a lot of money?"
going by the few rednecks i met in life, it's either they blow it all on dumb shit or buy a shit ton of guns and supplies for civil war 2 or a zombie apocalypse...

might i make a suggestion of tiff eventually starting up her own mercenary company? that drill sargent bit with the twins really hits some funny places. and i could totally see her trying to train some of her kids to be army rangers or some shit.:LOL:

or maybe there could be a texan sister for that? :unsure:
 

Abere Lucifer Productions

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Okay, writing is coming along. On page five so far. Five pages in a couple hours is pretty good. I'm just wondering if I'll be able to fit Georgina into the next update. Mary and Jessica, definitely. With Tiffany's wedding, I might have to hold off on Georgina. The wedding plans was something I put in at the last second while writing the script for 0.03. The wedding is two days after the end of the update. I'm gonna have to put it in there. I didn't think this through. LOL. I'm guessing one day with the four girls and MC doing their thing and the next thing the wedding. It's not gonna be a big wedding. It's gonna be very similar to Sammy and Tammy. It's actually gonna be in Grant's room so he can witness it. Poor guy. His balls are literally killing him. So sad. What I've got planned after the wedding is Tiffany staying home and hanging with Krissy while one of the twins accompanies the MC on the next mission. Things can change though. They almost always do.
 
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van321

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SWEEEEET HOOOOME AAAALABAMA!!!!!

That was everything I hoped it would be. And the latest update had better renders and an even funnier script. Definitely keep the comedic tone as it is, if not pushing the envelope even more. Holding off on reviewing for now as it's too soon, but this is the first time in a long time an incest VN hasn't been copy of a hundred other "dad dies and son moves in with mother and daughters" incest VNs, and it occupies the severely lacking pregnancy fetish category.

If I had any criticisms, it would be that the renders still have room for improvement, and that it's a kinetic novel on rails. Having some choices that increase or decrease the depravity of the MC and changes how some of the characters interact and approve or disapprove of him (like, Grant will like you more if you act more depraved, but the twins will like you more if you act more romantic) could make choices have meaningful impact to dialogue. I wouldn't bother with that until getting more proficient with coding, however, or maybe if the game goes through a remaster upon completion.

And it's probably coming, but preggo harem lewd scenes! If you can get animation to work, that's a standout feature!
 

Abere Lucifer Productions

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SWEEEEET HOOOOME AAAALABAMA!!!!!

That was everything I hoped it would be. And the latest update had better renders and an even funnier script. Definitely keep the comedic tone as it is, if not pushing the envelope even more. Holding off on reviewing for now as it's too soon, but this is the first time in a long time an incest VN hasn't been copy of a hundred other "dad dies and son moves in with mother and daughters" incest VNs, and it occupies the severely lacking pregnancy fetish category.

If I had any criticisms, it would be that the renders still have room for improvement, and that it's a kinetic novel on rails. Having some choices that increase or decrease the depravity of the MC and changes how some of the characters interact and approve or disapprove of him (like, Grant will like you more if you act more depraved, but the twins will like you more if you act more romantic) could make choices have meaningful impact to dialogue. I wouldn't bother with that until getting more proficient with coding, however, or maybe if the game goes through a remaster upon completion.

And it's probably coming, but preggo harem lewd scenes! If you can get animation to work, that's a standout feature!
Thanks for the kind words. I am trying to get the game looking better and playing better. A day before the release I learned how to do the custom ages. If I had known how to do that in the beginning I would have done it for Tiffany. I'm learning new things everyday.
 

TommyTuba

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Thanks for the kind words. I am trying to get the game looking better and playing better. A day before the release I learned how to do the custom ages. If I had known how to do that in the beginning I would have done it for Tiffany. I'm learning new things everyday.
How can it be that this game is in second to last place in the Trending Games list!? https://f95zone.to/trending/threads.1/?page=60. We need to do better. How can we improve our stats?
 

WastedTalent

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Thanks for the kind words. I am trying to get the game looking better and playing better. A day before the release I learned how to do the custom ages. If I had known how to do that in the beginning I would have done it for Tiffany. I'm learning new things everyday.
please no kind of sliding scales or points systems hidden or unhidden. It's great as it is... vn's are great, but porn games are grindy and usually disappointing... you have a a good story, great humor and interaction between characters and full plate creating all these different chcaracters and locations. So please focus on the art and your story and don't get sidetracked with changing it to something else.
 

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please no kind of sliding scales or points systems hidden or unhidden. It's great as it is... vn's are great, but porn games are grindy and usually disappointing... you have a a good story, great humor and interaction between characters and full plate creating all these different chcaracters and locations. So please focus on the art and your story and don't get sidetracked with changing it to something else.
I plan on keeping the game mostly as is. I feel the same way you do with complex games. When I mean when I say "Playing better," I mean custom stuff the player can do. Kinda like what I did for the custom age. Let the player customize the characters.
 

list101

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How can it be that this game is in second to last place in the Trending Games list!? https://f95zone.to/trending/threads.1/?page=60. We need to do better. How can we improve our stats?
Agreed! This game is unique - one of the best (if not the best) concerning the writing and the story.
The reasons may be:
- the game 0.03 tag - most of the folks will wait to see at least 0.11.
- there is no tag compressed and most of the folks who saw the 1Gb of 0.02 were waiting for compressed.
- the porn community is very much visual and prefers animated scenes. There is tough competition.
- maybe some snowflakes are melting, bcz of the jokes (let them melt - nothing to do there)

What the dev could do imho - improve the publicity and touch the graphics a bit.
LMK what the fans could do.
 
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