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Thats prettty much the exyenyt of aaamazing intellectullismss
Jizziminiszmm
not so much
Thats prettty much the exyenyt of aaamazing intellectullismss
Jizziminiszmm
not so much
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Spotted what I think is a mistake:
Muck is dirt, grime.
I think you meant "run amok" - behaving without control?
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I think you meant "run amok" - behaving without control?
whichone
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np
It kinda works, as is, if you wanted to say they're running things poorly and creating a mess, but you wouldn't really say they were "running a muck", more that they're "running it into a mess", or just "making a mess of running it".
They're running a shit show.
But, in context, amok is the one.
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Maybe they're just publishing a magazine that's trying to turn anything and everything traditional on its head.np
It kinda works, as is, if you wanted to say they're running things poorly and creating a mess, but you wouldn't really say they were "running a muck", more that they're "running it into a mess", or just "making a mess of running it".
They're running a shit show.
But, in context, amok is the one.
whichone
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Ha ha, yeah, maybe so, but I don't see how that changes anything?
If someone wants to be read & understood - which is reasonably crucial for an author\story teller (or a crazy magazine publisher
) - it helps if they use the correct words to accurately convey their meaning, as they intended it to be received.If English is not the author's first language and they use something inappropriately, it might be considered "helping" if a reader were to offer assistance, in a constructive way.
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i don't have twitter .. but i'll follow her anywhere
S1nsational
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Just played a tiny bit so far, does MC ever stop being so reluctant and start to actually want to fuck his sisters and get them pregnant?
Harem, Incest, and Pregnancy are a dream combination, but the reluctant MC really kills it
Harem, Incest, and Pregnancy are a dream combination, but the reluctant MC really kills it
Master of Puppets
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Man, you really haven't played much, have you? He was reluctant for all of five minutes or so.
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Chapter 2 is finally out. Sorry for the wait. My coauthor has been dealing with some stuff at home. I promise the next chapter won't take as long.
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Really fun game. While not a parody of anything in particular, it is a parody of everything in general.
Also I'm glad it's a "I'm going to offend everyone equally" type of thing, otherwise I might actually have been offended.
Also I'm glad it's a "I'm going to offend everyone equally" type of thing, otherwise I might actually have been offended.
I'm glad you liked it. Please give our other game, Extra Credit a try. It takes place in, somewhat, the same universe. It's an Abere the Demon prequel.
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It is mentioned Bao has some pen pals named Jackie and Marshal.
S1nsational
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Still loving the game, but the time skips are starting to get kinda confusing. First time meeting Kathy and Becky and it's when we're seconds from fucking them. Not a huge complaint, just kinda disorientating
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Just finished all the current content. Now begings the long wait for updates