VN Ren'Py Abandoned 53x – Homecoming [v0.2.8.1] [Agent 53X]

[Deleted member #2743735]

nice first release. Good models and nice story. Looking forward to more.

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[Deleted member #2743735]

Bug unren and cheat shift o mc_chores=4

you do not need to cheat except to fix this bug
every thing else is ok.

There was a bug. This has been fixed. Look for v003 update. Thanks!

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

For a new release this game is actually quite good. Truly like the plot and where things are headed. Looking forward to the next update with how it ended. Just wish there were animations although the renders were done quite nicely. The very beginning has me wondering who they are what they are up to. Are they good or bad folks that perhaps had something to do with his father. Time will tell, hopefully.

Very nice job developer.

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[Deleted member #2743735]

Nice start!

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[Deleted member #2743735]

Enjoyed a lot
good amount of content for first release

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[Deleted member #2743735]

really nice start

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[Deleted member #2743735]

Quite alot of content for a 1st realese version

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[Avaron1974]

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The edit button exists.

With it you can do magical things like edit 1 post to put all those replies together and not spam the thread with the exact .. same .. response.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Great content for a first update, lots of spelling mistakes but the grammar overall isn't too bad so it's OK. The sister blackmailing you right after you get out of hospital is kinda "meh" but later on you do realize it fits the character of Alex pretty well. Won't spoil more but it didn't bother me so much in the end.

Anyways, good stuff : props :

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[Deleted member #2743735]

Very short game when its second part is releasing

v003 was released this past weekend....

 

[Zoey Raven]

There was a bug. This has been fixed. Look for v003 update.

Yea, it's reflected in my WT, he actually fixed it in v0.02. It's been corrected in my WT since.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Really good start, slowly introducing the characters involved in a complex story that has oodles of potential long term. The renders are well posed - I particularly enjoyed how minimal movement can convey emotions in the graduation gift scene - and the engrish can be understood and does not distract too much from the story-line. Looking forward to watching the story unfold in this VN.

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[Deleted member #2743735]

Enjoying the game!

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[Deleted member #2743735]

If you play the first update through the foolish 'shitty blackmail' is effectively 'null and void' by the end with the the mc starting to control her in a nice way, whilst the drama queen step-sister starts to fall for the mc; in effect it was simply a construct that enabled particular links to develop between them. I don't believe that at any point the 'sons wanted their fathers dead', quite the opposite in fact as he seems to have been dearly loved and greatly missed by the son.

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[Deleted member #2743735]

Good Storyline & quite a bit of content. Very enjoyable, even though the tons of spelling errors did mess with my immersion of it. It's pointless though that Alex is still a b*tch even though ye do her chores (her attitude should at minimum gradually get to either a neutral way or a loving way since ye choose to be generous in doing her chores for her). I felt it was understandable that the intimate situations with the mother were dependent on ye doing your chores, but it shouldn't be the same with Alex (especially being that her attitude doesn't change because of doing her chores).

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[Deleted member #2743735]

love this game so far...hope they keep it up..

That is the plan, glad you are enjoying it.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

I just started the game, found a little misspelling.

"with no close (clothes) on"

Will keep playing till end the version, and then come to said what it looks like!

I will see about fixing that in v004 thank you!

 

[Fappable One]

Bruh...
I don't know if I should grab the popcorn or a cigarette.
I guess the ship has sailed on hoping he's aware of multi-quotes

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

I just started the game, found a little misspelling.

"with no close (clothes) on"

Will keep playing till end the version, and then come to said what it looks like!

I will see about fixing that in v004 thank you!

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

I'm here to comment about the title. What's up with the title?

Title is.... Agent 53X – Homecoming

Kind of like.... Star Wars - A New Hope