VN Ren'Py Abandoned 53x – Homecoming [v0.2.8.1] [Agent 53X]

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ah yes, car crash-kun is at it again.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Alex I own you this is forced and no choices to make that is BS and not a good thing for people like me. Who is not submissive and in fact would have ended up DOM her right then and there.
He better be able to own her ass if not this is not going to be good and in fact that whole thing with Alex just pissed me off so unless she is totally owned by the MC I will pretty much stay pissed off and every time I see her I will want to just spank her ass or slap her until she is begging for me to stop.

Let me offer this...

There are people in this world who only see a destination, while others look to experience the journey. Both can be very enjoyable.

Come along on the journey of training someone to beg you to slap their ass, LOL.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

A very nice and interesting story line so far.

Thanks for your comment, I am glad you have enjoyed it.

 

[Deleted member 2735575]

If MC is playing 6th dimensional chess with this Blackmail plot, that REALLY needs to be indicated in the story (thought dialogue or something) somehow, because frankly the sheer ludicrous nature of the situation made me not want to play any further (i.e. a video of someone jerking off in the shower isn't 'blackmail material', the girl would be violating any number of anti-revenge-porn laws, and why would her Mom kick out MC when her daughter is the one making hidden sex tapes of him?).

I can see potential in this VN, but not if I take a head first crash into a plot point that makes zero sense in any rational way - and if the situation is indeed that the girl is dumb and MC is playing the situation to his benefit, we as players need to know that so we don't feel like we're playing as a brain-dead moron.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

I like this game very much, keep up the good work

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[Deleted member #2743735]

congratulation, excellent one wait the next up date !!

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[Deleted member #2743735]

this game takes a nice femdom development... I love it!

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[Deleted member #2743735]

With the quality of rendersi wish this was animated.

I am one person with one computer that is a couple years old. Most of my single image renders are 20 mins to 1.5 hrs. So, an animation would be 24 images per second for 20 min images would take 8 hrs on my computer just to render. 8 hours for 1 second of animation. This does not take in the time to setup and test the animation. I am not saying my VN will not have any in the future but I think that is why DEV’s disappear for six months and show up with a very small update but there are 6 animations in it.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

nice game .. nice renders .. decent story ... keeping me wanting more

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[Deleted member #2743735]

I would like to see an in game phone app that keeps track of the lust and heart count.
edit: i see you have a spot, i just didn't make it to the time in game yet. Good work

Thanks for your comment, I am glad you have enjoyed it. I would also like a phone component in the VN but I tried with a couple Ren Py cookbook code snippets, but I could not get them to work the way I wanted. I am new to coding, hopefully over time I will get it figured out.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Checking in for when it gets big enough to play.

How big is big enough?

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Didn't expect much after reading the intro, but it is actually very decent game. Lots of reasonably good looking models with enough personality to make the game interesting.
Glad that MC is not behaving like immature d-bag and appears to be the same model as in The De Luca Family.
Also, decent amount of content for a game that come out a month ago.
Will keep an eye on his one.

v003 was released this past weekend....

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Mac version?

I am new to this DEV thing. I took a year to learn Daz3d and what little I can do in Ren Py. I only have a Windows computer which means I do not have a Mac/Linux so I would not really know how to test or support it. I have gotten some grief for not fully testing what I have released, which I had thought I did (did I mention I am new at this LOL). WOW there are a lot of I’s in this, but it is just me by myself.

I do not know if making the Mac or Linux version is as easy as just saving down like the Windows version, but I will ask some questions and try a test. Please understand I would not be able to support anything other than Windows but let me look into it and maybe...

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Well, I expected to drop it after a few pages like many others, but I actually played it all the way to the end.

Shame no one is actually related other than Step and adoption. Would have been nice if little sis was actually blood-related.

Weakcest... But it's at least not Landlady tenant with friends...

Still, it's a great start and the whole Spy games sub-story got me a little interested in where the story will go when MC gets in over his head later on.

Now On my watching list...

Thanks for your comment, I am glad you have enjoyed it.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Sex scenes are animated or only pictured?

Picture for now...

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Okay yeah the blackmail thing could really use some work on storywise and what I don't really like are the two picture sex scenes. Really sad since the renders are quite good I think. Otherwise great game with some good content for this stage. Can't wait for more

Yea, I am not excited about how the two pic scenes work but at this point I am one person with one computer that is a couple years old. Most of my single image renders are 20 mins to 1.5 hrs. So, an animation would be 24 images per second for 20 min images would take 8 hrs on my computer just to render. 8 hours for 1 second of animation. This does not take in the time to setup and test the animation. I am not saying my VN will not have any in the future but I think that is why DEV’s disappear for six months and show up with a very small update but there are 6 animations in it.

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

The linux files have been stripped. Can we get them back or is this windows only?

I am new to this DEV thing. I took a year to learn Daz3d and what little I can do in Ren Py. I only have a Windows computer which means I do not have a Mac/Linux so I would not really know how to test or support it. I have gotten some grief for not fully testing what I have released, which I had thought I did (did I mention I am new at this LOL). WOW there are a lot of I’s in this, but it is just me by myself.

I do not know if making the Mac or Linux version is as easy as just saving down like the Windows version, but I will ask some questions and try a test. Please understand I would not be able to support anything other than Windows but let me look into it and maybe...

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

I like the game overall so far. My biggest issue is that at times it seems a bit rushed, but it's not horrible. This isn't Shakespeare but it is a decent VN that I find entertaining and worth your time, you get what you come for so far.

My other issue, which is a small one, is the heart breaking use of the word "loose" instead of "lose". Think of it like this as an example of the two; "My button is loose", and " I don't want to lose my job". Completely different meanings. It is a tiny problem that many non-English speakers make, but because of my inner grammar Nazi I lose a piece of my soul every time I read it.

There are days you would not know English is my only language, LOL. I am glad you are enjoying the VN so far. I will see about fixing "loose" instead of "lose" in v004 thank you!

 

[Deleted member #2743735]

Unveliebable game!, models are great!

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[thorin0815]

Yea, I am not excited about how the two pic scenes work but at this point I am one person with one computer that is a couple years old. Most of my single image renders are 20 mins to 1.5 hrs. So, an animation would be 24 images per second for 20 min images would take 8 hrs on my computer just to render. 8 hours for 1 second of animation. This does not take in the time to setup and test the animation. I am not saying my VN will not have any in the future but I think that is why DEV’s disappear for six months and show up with a very small update but there are 6 animations in it.

Don't stress yourself too much, IMHO animations in porn games aren't the most important thing. Certain "research material" websites are much better suited for this.

I think, it is much more important to have a good story and well developed (likeable) characters.