VN Ren'Py Abandoned 53x – Homecoming [v0.2.8.1] [Agent 53X]

[Look-see]

i was pretty dissapointed we couldnt avoid wendy. mostly just cause it was a forced sex scene. give me the option and i might've gone for it but im also not into femdom or that mistress stuff. i like her daughter so far but not so much that it looks like wendy will start doing things with her so eh. all in all though the first release was pretty long and story seemed ok so far but i also didnt like being blackmailed as well.

 

[MG-Gaming]

Yes, it is just a bj and a story of her past.
Just tested it myself again. Should work
The last chance to change the values is Saras 'Really...'
You can check in the console with 'mc_chores' (without the ' ', sry if that was the problem^^°) before. Should give you '2' back. Than use 'mc_chores = 4' (again without the ' '). After that you can check again with 'mc_chores'. It should give '4' back now.

Now it worked. Thank you.
I kept doing it with the " " . Worked fine now.
That was an awful lot of trouble for a 5 second scene though

 

[Ajhero12]

Android version?

 

[originalspam]

Not bad at all, for a demo. Interesting setup. True that there's a lot of similarity to other VN's out there, but I thought this was enjoyable enough. Some of those VN's have a heavy grind to them, not a lot of eye candy, and honestly not a lot of content even after waiting months for an update, yet this demo had a surprisingly large amount of story and setup.

I'll be keeping my eye on this one.

 

[Tease Me]

I'm not sure, but it seems that there's a bug with the "chores counter"...

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I noticed that, I helped Sara every time she needed it and did all the chores and ened up with only a 2 @ the spa scene.

 

[Tease Me]

I don't like not having a choice on how the character reacted.
Edit: Also, not just a scene, someone blackmailing you affects the whole dynamic of the game, and can be a way to take control away from the player, which I really don't like.

Simple solution. Don't play games you don't like. Don't demand changes because you do not like a fetish.

Alex is a bitch to everyone not just MC. He knows it, we know it. She needs to be broken not fought. Fighting a bitch only makes them worse. He knows it, we know it... The thing is do you know it.

 

[Tease Me]

I don't know if this is a bug or not, but I have done everybody's chores for the past 2 days and she is talking like I have not done any chores. Help?

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I didn't get the Blowjob ...

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Bug unren and cheat shift o mc_chores=4

you do not need to cheat except to fix this bug
every thing else is ok.

 

[TundraLupus]

Simple solution. Don't play games you don't like. Don't demand changes because you do not like a fetish.

Alex is a bitch to everyone not just MC. He knows it, we know it. She needs to be broken not fought. Fighting a bitch only makes them worse. He knows it, we know it... The thing is do you know it.

That is why I stopped playing the game at that moment, did you read my previous comment? I also read what other people posted about the Mc playing along for now, something not indicated on the progression of the scene, I didn't demand shit, I only voiced something that I didn't like, and asked that if the scene was changed in a way to demonstrate that the character already had planned something, or by giving us a choice I would like to be pinned as to give the game another chance, and if the only way you know of breaking someone is by becoming their bitch first, that's on you, but also, I'm not into breaking people, well, Tanja in my new family being an exception, but even to her I gave a second chance, I'm about solving problems through actually understanding someone/characters, not being simply an arrogant self-centered asshole.

 

[1 Lone Wolf]

For a new release this game is actually quite good. Truly like the plot and where things are headed. Looking forward to the next update with how it ended. Just wish there were animations although the renders were done quite nicely. The very beginning has me wondering who they are what they are up to. Are they good or bad folks that perhaps had something to do with his father. Time will tell, hopefully.

Very nice job developer.

 

[SilverSoul83]

Nice start!

 

[assman1337]

Enjoyed a lot
good amount of content for first release

 

[HarveyD]

Start game, get immediately and ridiculously blackmailed by step sister, quit game.

Shitty porn game trope and bad writing to boot.

 

[meigame]

really nice start

 

[AvgHeretic]

Quite alot of content for a 1st realese version

 

[originalspam]

Start game, get immediately and ridiculously blackmailed by step sister, quit game.

Shitty porn game trope and bad writing to boot.

You made it through two minutes of a demo, quit, and you say it's a shitty porn game. Life got ya down huh?

 

[HarveyD]

You made it through two minutes of a demo, quit, and you say it's a shitty porn game. Life got ya down huh?

Actually no, I said the blackmail was a shitty porn game trope. Reading comprehension go ya down, huh?

 

[fdawshwerb]

Great content for a first update, lots of spelling mistakes but the grammar overall isn't too bad so it's OK. The sister blackmailing you right after you get out of hospital is kinda "meh" but later on you do realize it fits the character of Alex pretty well. Won't spoil more but it didn't bother me so much in the end.

Anyways, good stuff : props :

 

[Ajhero12]

Very short game when its second part is releasing

 

[andrew david irving]

Really good start, slowly introducing the characters involved in a complex story that has oodles of potential long term. The renders are well posed - I particularly enjoyed how minimal movement can convey emotions in the graduation gift scene - and the engrish can be understood and does not distract too much from the story-line. Looking forward to watching the story unfold in this VN.

 

[originalspam]

Actually no, I said the blackmail was a shitty porn game trope. Reading comprehension go ya down, huh?

I believe, ahem, the original quote that I was replying on was " Start game, get immediately and ridiculously blackmailed by step sister, quit game." So if what you typed is true, you didn't make it very far into the game. Which means you didn't play most of the content...cause you know, you said you quit. Which means your review isn't very solid. If I'm wrong, and you played the demo all the way through, your comment doesn't show that. Cheers!