I enjoy the game very much. Like the concept. Suggest, when you have time, re-do the first section to make the enslavelment of Linda less abrupt and easy-looking. Maybe give Vruk three or four days staying in the house before Emely betrays him, starting the events leading to Linda's enslavement. Maybe Vruk has the chance to give sleeping Linda two or three mouthfuls as he does Eva. Play up the suspense and danger of what he's doing, but establish that she's been 'prepared' more than the current story line allows. Also, seems a pity not to enslave the blonde female bandit. She's hot and Vruk claims to be desperate for breeding females ... besides, the cave's right there. Anyway, please keep up your effort. I'm eager to see more of Vruk's world and the people (women) in it.