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Lotex

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More than a few things IYAM.
Yeah probably, but that's what bothered me the most. I mean if your friend/mentor suddenly becomes king you'd think it would have more of an impact or that the whole "The new king killed the old one to become the new king" would lead anywhere.
Other than that though it was okay in my opinion, dragged a bit too much from the mid 20s updates until the end, but there are worse dumpster fires on here.
 

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dragged a bit too much from the mid 20s updates until the end, but there are worse dumpster fires on here.
IMO it dragged on way too much, for much longer than just the mid-20s updates. SoL stories are fine if done well; this one just wasn't done very well. I will agree that there are definitely worse games you can find, though.
 

Lotex

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IMO it dragged on way too much, for much longer than just the mid-20s updates. SoL stories are fine if done well; this one just wasn't done very well. I will agree that there are definitely worse games you can find, though.
Yeah, I guess that's up to everyone's own interpretation of what's REALLY bad and such.

The last game by Daniels K, can't remember the name anymore for example had this REALLY annoying thing where, whenever somthing semi spicy was on, the character's dialogues mostly consisted of variants of "Mhhhhh" and similar things.
 
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Yeah, I guess that's up to everyone's own interpretation of what's REALLY bad and such.

The last game by Daniels K, can't remember the name anymore for example had this REALLY annoying thing where, whenever somthing semi spicy was on, the character's dialogues mostly consisted of variants of "Mhhhhh" and similar things.
Yeah, there are a lot of games like that. IMO a much better example of how to write sex scenes in a porn game would be something like Midlife Crisis where the descriptions alone are very erotic and arousing.
 
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LinusMundane

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are there any other KN's like this out there anyone could recommend? Aside from Triangle? The length and easy going story, for me, is wonderful.
 

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are there any other KN's like this out there anyone could recommend? Aside from Triangle? The length and easy going story, for me, is wonderful.
agents of heels is very kinetic with some choices (didn't have wt-mod when i tried it). advanced search has kinetic novel tag as searching option.
 
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Use the report button in the main post to report dead links.
agents of heels is very kinetic with some choices (didn't have wt-mod when i tried it). advanced search has kinetic novel tag as searching option.
Thanks, ill check it out. I know i can search for them, and i have, I was just looking for one's very similar to this in the tone of the story.

Edit: AoH has way too many cocks for me.
 

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Also, am I the only one that thinks, Damn, ya'll sword fighting, riding horses, doing chores, come back eat dinner and then dive into eating pussy and sucking dick, gotta be ripe.

They clearly define when they take a bath so it's harder to just assume one was taken off screen.
 

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Also, am I the only one that thinks, Damn, ya'll sword fighting, riding horses, doing chores, come back eat dinner and then dive into eating pussy and sucking dick, gotta be ripe.

They clearly define when they take a bath so it's harder to just assume one was taken off screen.
Yeah, the medieval times were . . . less than pretty.
 

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Thats probably why despite being quite young they only ever managed one fuck per night the sweat musk and sex fumes must of knocked them right out.:devilish:

Just sayin
 
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sdibolcrif

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How has no one created a mod for this replacing the goddamn backticks with actual apostrophes???

Please I am suffering mental pain
 
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