VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Long Summer [v0.04] [Ardanos]

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fortuna95

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I understand it and like realistic and slow progress too. But masturbate or voyeur is faaaar away from gangbang or whoring. I'm just afraid of too slow progress like AWAM. So it would be not negative to see 1st little lewd scene, soon. It's after all an adult game what we've here, how many updates do you want to wait? Three, four more? Then it's one year over without sexual content and another blue ball game? No, thanks! ;)
 
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Amahl Farouk

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A wee bit of extra lewidity wouldnt go wrong, I like the story, love the renders, writings good, but lets not lose sight of the fact that it is a porn game, a wee bit more flirting and a bit more fantasising before she starts sliding down the rabit hole would be lovely

but its hard to grumble at quality work like this, it really is damn good,
 
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I liked it, mostly because of the MC, she is gorgeous, very sweet. Seems like it will be a slow burner, and to me that feels like the right choice for this game.
 

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I liked it, mostly because of the MC, she is gorgeous, very sweet. Seems like it will be a slow burner, and to me that feels like the right choice for this game.
I agree. To me this is a very realistic plot and the game would suffer without the character's slow intro. The perfect daughter, her struggle to conform to her father's wishes, and to be her own person. We all know in future chapters outside forces/her choices will turn her into a slut (at least in my game) having lost her way and trying to dig her way out. From the pinnacle to the pit.

And I'm okay with the <smiling> stuff
 

ashitanojoe

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Nice game but hopefully less annoying <smiling> in the text in the next update.
The feeling must come from the text, and it saves 300 times to read the same word.
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Agree. But more than the text, the feeling (gestures) should be shown in the image. That's why it's a visual novel, not a book. Although that will mean more renders, more development time, but it would be the ideal. Ironically, the render you show has the guy smiling, so it's unnecessary say that he is smiling in the text. Besides, 'haha' it's written there too. Pure redundancy.
 

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Wow, I never played AWAM but judging by all the comments here that game left some deep scars... If anyone wants to talk about it feel free to send me a PM.

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Ceesko

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Is this AWAM´s unknown daughter or will it contain adult content also?

Spot on. Looks like this will be a repeat. With all the same faults and mistakes. But with even less lewd scenes. Even AWAM had some nudes from the first update. This has nothing. Of course some here will be praising it for its ~realistic~ pace despite that this is absolutely absurd. If we are going to talk about realism, in university you can easily meet a girl in class and be in her room by next week, and that is me being generous. Of course not everyone is the same. But people in this day and age do not wait months to sleep with each other.
 
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...this is absolutely absurd. If we are going to talk about realism, in university you can easily meet a girl in class and be in her room by next week, and that is me being generous. But people in this day and age do not wait months to sleep with each other.
...you know only two days have passed in the game, right?
 

Avakao

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...you know only two days have passed in the game, right?
Exactly, like, day one she just went to know the school, and now day 2 she started to interact with ppl, making plans, even dates, etc. Honestly, I don't think this is bad but will take a long time to start the pace of romance, corruption, etc. Not in terms of days that the character goes, but developing time. I'll keep watching this since I really like MC, and how it seems to be more plot driven than just instant porn. However, I know that'll turn many ppl off. A few scenes here and there, even if masturbating would be nice, honestly, like in the last update, it could be given the choice between going to sleep, or masturbate like most games. And being honest it's a common thing in everyone's life, since forever.
 

fortuna95

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A few scenes here and there, even if masturbating would be nice, honestly, like in the last update, it could be given the choice between going to sleep, or masturbate like most games. And being honest it's a common thing in everyone's life, since forever.
But I said it earlier I just wanted a masturbation or voyeur scene and You agreed Mr. Boombastic answer to me not to have lewd scenes too soon. And now I read You want masturbation scene too. Now You know what I mean and we understanding us! ;)
 

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But I said it earlier I just wanted a masturbation or voyeur scene and You agreed Mr. Boombastic answer to me not to have lewd scenes too soon. And now I read You want masturbation scene too. Now You know what I mean and we understanding us! ;)
Well, I agreed with him, but is not like I'm against it as long makes sense to the plot. But I'm saying as it's something that would make most ppl happy. That, for me, is far better than her jumping to bed with someone she barely met.
 
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I think you misunderstood me before fortuna95. I'm not saying that I don't want lewd scenes, that's why I play these games after all. ;) And there's nothing wrong with a masturbation scene at this stage of the game.

I just hope the dev doesn't forcibly add sex scenes only to gain Patrons or to keep the players happy. Once the slut train leaves the station there's no turning back, and it would be a shame if that ruined the story. Just look at 'Light of my Life' for example. What makes that game unique (and loved) is the fact that the main characters don't have sex after the 2nd or 3rd update. Once that happens a lot of of the suspense will be gone.
 
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