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I have actually got things like that set up in kinda a flashback ordeal... That will help explain a little about some of the girls... Some things are explained in the story, but left some out...
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Hmmm... Why does our main guy ride a motorcycle and wear a suit ??? He wears a suit most of the time anyway, because that is just him... The bike issue is a thing that if his flashy cars are seen near a hit, people will remember... An everyday bike and people don't look twice...
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Kinda what I meant, it's a flashy bike and a man in a suit riding one is unusual enough to be remembered. It's really just a tiny story nitpick that stood out for me, no big deal. Hey i still played till the end. Not sure about the flashbacks thing but hey, i look forward to those pieces of the story when they come.
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All will be revealed... Christine is the mother to Dianne, Gail, Journey, and Shyanne...
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thanks again for the previews (looks great) however i wondering if you have a release date for said game. just asking
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I was the one that somewhat strongly suggested the rework of the character in question, so it's not entirely JJsworld 's fault... Since she's being introduced for the first time, I suggested that the character rework should be incorporated into the current batch of renders before the character is introduced to y'all...
I haven't finished editing the previous chapters yet for typos, numbers, etc. but Chapter 8 will be ready to go when the pics are. I found the current chapter rather enjoyable as I was editing it. What will probably happen is that Chapter 8 will be released as a 'standalone patch' that you'll be able to drag into the story/game folder, with the Chapters 1-6 edits coming a bit later. There's a LOT of text/code to scan through, and I've also been introducing a few 'fade breaks' to help highlight story transitions better as well.
If you've already read the previous chapters, no need to go back and re-read it (the story itself hasn't been changed), but for new readers to the story, yeah still hammering away...
I'm doing this as a volunteer effort, but I do need to focus on my own projects as well. As for how much time I'll be able to dedicate going forward, not really sure but a number of people are awaiting Pt 4 of my comic, and I'm in the mood to work on/have been working on it ATM...
So be patient with JJsworld ! Chapter 8 is almost ready for prime time!!!
I haven't finished editing the previous chapters yet for typos, numbers, etc. but Chapter 8 will be ready to go when the pics are. I found the current chapter rather enjoyable as I was editing it. What will probably happen is that Chapter 8 will be released as a 'standalone patch' that you'll be able to drag into the story/game folder, with the Chapters 1-6 edits coming a bit later. There's a LOT of text/code to scan through, and I've also been introducing a few 'fade breaks' to help highlight story transitions better as well.
If you've already read the previous chapters, no need to go back and re-read it (the story itself hasn't been changed), but for new readers to the story, yeah still hammering away...
I'm doing this as a volunteer effort, but I do need to focus on my own projects as well. As for how much time I'll be able to dedicate going forward, not really sure but a number of people are awaiting Pt 4 of my comic, and I'm in the mood to work on/have been working on it ATM...
So be patient with JJsworld ! Chapter 8 is almost ready for prime time!!!