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mpekas

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This update has been a big disappointment, grammatical errors all over, forgotten checks in the script, story that feels thrown together in a couple of hours if that...

I remember having high hopes for this VN - it's been a while since then, but i didn't remember it being this bad.
 

Skeltom

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Oct 9, 2017
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This update has been a big disappointment, grammatical errors all over, forgotten checks in the script, story that feels thrown together in a couple of hours if that...

I remember having high hopes for this VN - it's been a while since then, but i didn't remember it being this bad.
There have been issues with the writing since the beginning. Most notably the constant misuse of past tense grammar.

Edit: As for the checks a pretty big one in chapter two is with the phone, Jade is adamant that we fucked but I have seen very little of her content let alone a booty call. And not to mention a still unfinished relationship tracker after three chapters.

It's not a terrible game but this far in and it still feels pretty rough to me.
 
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If you still run into the same issue I would try to extract it in pieces vs. all at once. It may be a handful of files that fragmented during download rather than the entire archive being invalid.

If you have a slower D/L speed there's a compressed version that's around 1gb.
after redownloading everything its working now
 
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Ahchi

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This update has been a big disappointment, grammatical errors all over, forgotten checks in the script, story that feels thrown together in a couple of hours if that...

I remember having high hopes for this VN - it's been a while since then, but i didn't remember it being this bad.
[CHP.3 BETA]
Did you happen to miss that the word "BETA" in the title
 

Canto Forte

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MC is becoming some kind of a prottector for gurls, Jenny is rubbbing her mother hen vibes on him.
there are a couple of instances when others jump into your conversation with a girl, making her unconfortable.
Did anyone chose to step in and say you were talking to her?
Did anyone let their girl get stolen into dialogue with some other dude?
How much do y”all think MC should get invested in each and every girl?
Anyones blood curdled when the henchman thought out loud what a badunk! looking at our sweet prof in the bar?
 

Casper52

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Synopsis of Chp-3 beta

Valery path: Bingo! whole episode is based on Valery's past and her security along with Clint's investigation on marcus and his death escape. She finally confesses MC about her past and feeling towards MC.

Jenny path: Worth it! win-win decision from the content point of view. Lots of content has been added and MC will be spending whole day with her. MC and Jenny will get more romantic and they will get even more closer.

Ashley path: Worth it! Sweet romance as usual. Lots of contents has been added. MC can spend more time with her improving relationship wih her, where she tell MC about her fear and doubts

Rebecca/jade path: not much progress very less interaction with MC, nothing specific. Since most attention was given on Valery's past.

Elizabeth path: Some focus has been given. Relationship with MC will improve a lot depending on chp 1 & chp 2 choices.

Jessica: MC finally gets a chance to meet her.

Bad News:

Ashley and Valery's joint path is broken now from chp-3 they are seperated.

Vicky path: Less content. Since vicky joined Ashley group, ashley will block her way, if MC want to pursue vicky in future, MC will need to dump ashley, clear passage on Jenny's path

Sung ji path: Less content. Things will get even more hard, If MC want to pursue Sung Ji in future mc will need to dump Ashley and Vicky both, that makes her least interesting to pursue.


I simply enjoy playing the story in different ways to find out how girls are arranged and their reaction towards others, still the contents are heavyly dependent on paths and points achived form previous chapters.

My best friend CTRL key. Haha
 
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MC is becoming some kind of a prottector for gurls, Jenny is rubbbing her mother hen vibes on him.
there are a couple of instances when others jump into your conversation with a girl, making her unconfortable.
Did anyone chose to step in and say you were talking to her?
Did anyone let their girl get stolen into dialogue with some other dude?
How much do y”all think MC should get invested in each and every girl?
Anyones blood curdled when the henchman thought out loud what a badunk! looking at our sweet prof in the bar?
bro I don't know if this makes me an ass but I barely got interested in the other girls

I mean I barely have any points with the girls except Jenny have all of my points

but I've actually enjoyed my interactions with Ashley in this update it felt like we were good friends and the game wasn't trying to force a relationship with Ashley on me

but I'm curious my brother who is your favorite girl and what did you think of the update
 
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The issue I have, currently on Jenny's path is there are 2 definite kiss moments - during the dance rehearsal, and later in Jenny's room, when
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. It's really unbelievable that Jenny and MC talk about driving each other crazy, but do not kiss at those 2 moments. It's actually immersion breaking for them not to kiss and demand a huge suspension of disbelief from the player
 

Skeltom

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The issue I have, currently on Jenny's path is there are 2 definite kiss moments - during the dance rehearsal, and later in Jenny's room, when
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. It's really unbelievable that Jenny and MC talk about driving each other crazy, but do not kiss at those 2 moments. It's actually immersion breaking for them not to kiss and demand a huge suspension of disbelief from the player
That's really the only way to describe it.
 

Skeltom

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First of "Gameplays" Updated to C-3 BETA.
Hope it will helps
Jenny Route
You seen to be doing a lot of runs through this. Is it possible for me to be on an actual solo Rebecca route, or is it just she wants everyone to be happy?
 
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