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This game started out as a great game. Now I think it got lost. This last chapter showed me that the writer does not know where he is going. The game was so good with nothing dramatic about it and all of a sudden he puts it in the game. I hope he changes the idea he has about how to tell the story to us. Well this is boring exhausting.
I was so looking forward to playing this update, but after what I saw I don't know if I'm still with the game. Although it's a game with great quality but this att I didn't laugh. And I read the whole story didn't skip anything. I felt like I was in a suspense movie but without the suspense because everything that showed in one scene the characters already knew in the other. What do you mean a person asking about the Academy is a suspect? It has a weird vibe. Man I still don't buy it.
well my brother to each their own I'm not going to say that the story doesn't have problems

because like my brother Skeltom pointed out it does but I still love it it's a lot better than the typical the mc go to college get drunk and fuck everything in sight story
and am I the only one who thinks the story is pretty exciting
 

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This game still has alot of potential, but we need to rid it of the drama that in real life would be far too outside The AOA students ability to deal with it. The dev needs to solve the brother issue - getting rid of him altogether, Jenny needs to get control of her fathers shares etc... and let the MC get on with pursuing his LI, for me Ashley
 
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BGRW2020

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Honestly out of all the games on this site A.O.A Dik and Wvm are definitely my personal top 3 favourites closely followed by Pale Carnations and Summer is gone:sneaky:
Not mine - WVM is to far fetched with everyone in the country fucking one man, Being a dk is too dark exploiting women / girls in terrible ways to make money, AOA up to now is great, hopefully it will continue once the Dev gets back on track from the attempted murder issues and deals with Jenny's dam brother, Now Leap of faith is one of my top games as well as so far where the heart is
 

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Not mine - WVM is to far fetched with everyone in the country fucking one man, Being a dk is too dark exploiting women / girls in terrible ways to make money, AOA up to now is great, hopefully it will continue once the Dev gets back on track from the attempted murder issues and deals with Jenny's dam brother, Now Leap of faith is one of my top games as well as so far where the heart is
1. I do personally enjoy the darker theme of both Dik and AOA not the exploitation nor abuse Ofc but having characters who have quite a lot of emotional baggage that they have to overcome/get over is something i personally have a much easier time relating to when it comes to liking/getting attached to characters compared other games as messed up/sad as that may sound lol 2. now i'm normally not into the whole plot with one guy who can get any girl he wants myself but Wvm is for some strange reason one of the few exceptions now i will 100% agree with you that Leap Of Faith and where the heart is are both great games as well :)
 

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Maybe I'm missing something, but the dramatic tone of the story is perceived from the first release, starting with the father of the MC who dies, it is true that other games with lighter tones often start with a dead family member, but we do not see the scene , we are told to justify the fact that a lonely man finds himself living with three sex bombs of different ages, while here we see that death, we feel it, how can it not be dramatic? And even the train ride has dramatic clues, two guys arguing heavily, a girl with ambiguous facial expressions, our childhood friend in tears as she talks to us on the phone. End of chapter the young valery covered in blood.
I don't think the author has changed course, I think that has always been the way, but if he changed now it would really be a change of course and it would kill the plot, what would be a drama.
From the first chapter it is clear that we are dealing with problematic girls, almost a homage to the film "Girl, Interrupted".

I like the story of valery a lot, it has nothing hard to believe, if you see it in a script context, we have a girl on the run from a mafia organization, there are dozens of films like that, in one a casino singer pretends to be a nun.
There may be some perplexities, such as the fact that the MC goes around asking if they have seen a suspicious guy in the area, but it does not seem to me a huge mistake, however we must remember that the MC is a very young person who does not has ever faced similar situations. I found it more wrong that the MC could propose Vicky as a bodyguard, which was a no-sense moment. But it's true that if we do that Jenny won't listen to us and turns to Adam. So it was just about making the right choice, which is not proposing vicky.
 
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Maybe I'm missing something, but the dramatic tone of the story is perceived from the first release, starting with the father of the MC who dies, it is true that other games with lighter tones often start with a dead family member, but we do not see the scene , we are told to justify the fact that a lonely man finds himself living with three sex bombs of different ages, while here we see that death, we feel it, how can it not be dramatic? And even the train ride has dramatic clues, two guys arguing heavily, a girl with ambiguous facial expressions, our childhood friend in tears as she talks to us on the phone. End of chapter the young valery covered in blood.
I don't think the author has changed course, I think that has always been the way, but if he changed now it would really be a change of course and it would kill the plot, what would be a drama.
From the first chapter it is clear that we are dealing with problematic girls, almost a homage to the film "Girl, Interrupted".

I like the story of valery a lot, it has nothing hard to believe, if you see it in a script context, we have a girl on the run from a mafia organization, there are dozens of films like that, in one a casino singer pretends to be a nun.
There may be some perplexities, such as the fact that the MC goes around asking if they have seen a suspicious guy in the area, but it does not seem to me a huge mistake, however we must remember that the MC is a very young person who does not has ever faced similar situations. I found it more wrong that the MC could propose Vicky as a bodyguard, which was a no-sense moment. But it's true that if we do that Jenny won't listen to us and turns to Adam. So it was just about making the right choice, which is not proposing vicky.
preach my brother preach
 
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tlarsen

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This game still has alot of potential, but we need to rid it of the drama that in real life would be far too outside The AOA students ability to deal with it. The dev needs to solve the brother issue - getting rid of him altogether, Jenny needs to get control of her fathers shares etc... and let the MC get on with pursuing his LI, for me Ashley
If focusing on one girl only is your goal while playing this game then i think waiting for a couple updates would be the smart idea tbh cause from what i remember hearing the Mc won't settle down with any of the girls harem or solo until each of the girls drama/story has been resolved and out of all the LI that we've been introduced to so far Ash and Jenny are most likely the last two to get thier story resolved imo
 

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1. I do personally enjoy the darker theme of both Dik and AOA not the exploitation nor abuse Ofc but having characters who have quite a lot of emotional baggage that they have to overcome/get over is something i personally have a much easier time relating to when it comes to liking/getting attached to characters compared other games as messed up/sad as that may sound lol
i totally agree with you ^^ im sooooo diging this vn for exactly this reason. i wanted to wait to play ch3 till gold but couldnt wait for it in the end xD lookin hella forward to it sinceee there is still so much he could put into this chapter. i do hope though that the whole situation will be dealt with within this chapter >.< plllsssssssss no story cliffhanger o_O would drive me nuts haveing to wait till next update xD btw is there a way to change the colour from the textfont inside the multimod >.<
 
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