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- Oct 1, 2019
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So, just finished Chapter 3, and caught up with the Dev on this one.
Anyways, been a fun game, enjoyed the 3 chapters, and the bosky bonus as OSW Reviews would call that, the Christmas Event. Thank you so much for this game, and looking forward for more in Chapter 4.
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Anyways, been a fun game, enjoyed the 3 chapters, and the bosky bonus as OSW Reviews would call that, the Christmas Event. Thank you so much for this game, and looking forward for more in Chapter 4.
- Jul 1, 2017
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Just finished chapter 3 today and it is awesone. There is a few grammar and spelling mistake but I'm not one of those grammar police asshole so it doesn't bother me much.
Base on the end of chapter 3. Chapter 4 will be about Rebecca story? She is just so damn cute
Oh and just to be sure the only Rebecca content in chapter 3 is the cuddle scene in the hotel? Will there be more scenes if I'm not on Jenny/other character path?
Base on the end of chapter 3. Chapter 4 will be about Rebecca story? She is just so damn cute
Oh and just to be sure the only Rebecca content in chapter 3 is the cuddle scene in the hotel? Will there be more scenes if I'm not on Jenny/other character path?
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This one really made me say WTF. why would someone have something so permanent just because that person lost a stupid bet? A temparory one would have been fine.
My No. 1 LI is ashley but If she acts so dumb again I'll lean towards jenny as the best girl.
- Sep 8, 2020
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Started off with Ashley as main L.I., but halfway through ch.2, had to switch over to go with Jenny and not regretting it at all. I'll come back to Ashley eventually, but I'm going with Jenny (and Jade) for now.
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Very nice game with amazing grapchics, non-trivial characters and interesting twists of story (sound is on the high level too btw, good job!).
There are 2 things which, imo, could be done in a better way, but those are very subjective and do not belittle this game's amazingness:
- Conditions a player has to meet to get bonus extras is VERY strict, 1 mistake - and it's locked, one has to replay from some while to fix that mistake. And not all the choices are so very intuitively understandable. A little annoying, but not by much.
- You can truely go lusting for only one girl at one playthrough. All other content starts to rapidly become locked by the choices MC makes. Which feels a right thing to happen storywise, but feels a little boring sometimes as MC is steadily depraving himself from lusty actions or simply fooling around with other girls. As they are still in the story and MC still has to interact with them to progress through the story (which is not a bad thing itself), those fun times with girls are becoming more seldom with each girl cut from intimate interactions. Yes, they are still having good time with MC, so he does with them, but that is clearly not the same.
I did not play far enough at chap 3 to say for sure it will go the same way (I think it is), and I do not really know if I will get that much fun doing another playthrough(s) featuring another girls each time as many scenes and event will be the same, just slightly altered (in theory, haven't try that yet), but for now I clearly can mark this game as a very enjoying and nicely done. Even with those... "issues" I've mentioned above.
There are 2 things which, imo, could be done in a better way, but those are very subjective and do not belittle this game's amazingness:
- Conditions a player has to meet to get bonus extras is VERY strict, 1 mistake - and it's locked, one has to replay from some while to fix that mistake. And not all the choices are so very intuitively understandable. A little annoying, but not by much.
- You can truely go lusting for only one girl at one playthrough. All other content starts to rapidly become locked by the choices MC makes. Which feels a right thing to happen storywise, but feels a little boring sometimes as MC is steadily depraving himself from lusty actions or simply fooling around with other girls. As they are still in the story and MC still has to interact with them to progress through the story (which is not a bad thing itself), those fun times with girls are becoming more seldom with each girl cut from intimate interactions. Yes, they are still having good time with MC, so he does with them, but that is clearly not the same.
I did not play far enough at chap 3 to say for sure it will go the same way (I think it is), and I do not really know if I will get that much fun doing another playthrough(s) featuring another girls each time as many scenes and event will be the same, just slightly altered (in theory, haven't try that yet), but for now I clearly can mark this game as a very enjoying and nicely done. Even with those... "issues" I've mentioned above.
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- Jul 21, 2021
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Tattoos are an off for me too, even in RL. I could even understand a small tattoo for a lost bet in a not visible place... but this one is half the arm! Yes, it´s plain dumb. That's something the dev should have thought twice.
Actually, that's something that happens with several characters. I think the developer thought, at first, to make the characters more "wild" and promiscuous. That´s why he gave some of the girls big tattoos, a lot of piercings, heavy make ups, hairstyles with half shaved head and revealing clothes. Then, for some reason, he decided to make them more shy (except Jade) and with traumas, and there is kind of a incongruity between the look of some characters and her personality.
For example, Jenny is not interested in boys because of her childhood trauma and the kind of boys she usually met in her social circle... but at the same time, she´s a tease that asks the MC to caress her nude breasts just after a couple of hours of knowing him... The guy that she chose because he reminds her a child that was like a brother for her when she was in the hospital with a brain tumor... I don't think it has any sense. The dev had to change his mind about Jenny's personality after the first update or something.
Valerie is another incongruous character: she looks like a sexy punk (almost like Jade) and she flirts freely with the MC when she meets him in the train and during the scene in the house of the girls... but actually she has a lot of traumas and fears from her terrible childhood and she´s shy and afraid of people... Again, it doesn´t make sense.
I think that the exaggerated drama that most of the girls have as background wasn´t either in the original plans of the dev. I think that at first he thought in creating a lighter story (and that would have be better, IMO. So much drama and traumas detract from the credibility and realism of the story) and then for some reason started to add drama over drama to the characters. I think that the inspiration of the dev are those dramatic animes (actually, Rebeca and Jenny could be characters of "Your lie in April") and that's not a good inspiration for an erotic game. Those animes tend to have an over the top sentimentality to artificially thrill the viewer, and a erotic game should be more light and funny, not try to make the player cry at all cost.
A background of the characters with a bit of drama is good, but all of them are orphans that lived in the streets, were sexually abused or prostituted when child, had cancer... even have a cartel of drugs behind to kill them!... the "cartel of New Hampshire"? That kind of stories would have made some sense (sadly) in Venezuela, Colombia, Cuba, Brazil, Mexico, where there are really powerful drugs cartels that even control the police and politicians (or politicians control the cartels) and there are orphan children living in the streets without social services... But... "New Hampshire"? What has happened in that New Hampshire that there are so many orphans living in the streets, at the expense of scoundrels who want to abuse or prostitute them? A war maybe? Aren´t there social services for orphans children in New Hampshire? And what kind of drug is cultivated in New Hampshire? Are there opium poppy fields in New Hampshire? Coca or marijuana fields, to have such a powerful cartel of drugs that even controls the police?
I really like this game and the characters, but the drama is over the top and out of hand. With a story a bit more light and with a bit more of sense of humor this game would have been a masterwork, IMO. This way, I enjoy the game, but after some of the scenes I have to say "Come on, dev, this is way too much"
PD. I have read some old comments and apparently in the firs release of the Prologue, Jenny and her friends/protegees were a bunch of cunts that bullied the MC when he started working for them, and there were so much criticism that the dev changed that. It seems that the dev can't find a healthy middle ground with his characters and carries all to the extreme, and not only in regards to the drama. From being a bunch of cunts with the MC to be almost in love/lust for him literally minutes after knowing him at the girls' home... I prefer the girls being sweet with the MC better than cunts, but again is too much. The MC should have had to work a bit more to earn the confidence/love of the girls. Right now, it seems like:
MC: "Hello girl, nice to meet you"
Girl: "Ooooh... You are the man I was expecting all my life! Please, love me, love me..."
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Drama does seem over the top. But their horrible histories is the reason Jenny picked each one of them and took them in. I don't know what drugs they grow in New Hampshire, but I know that even here in Canada there are a whole lot of very young kids that live on the streets and there are many who are in a position just like Jade was. We don't hear that on the news all the time but it's because journalists are cowards. And the government does it's best to show the best side of the child welfare system.
The thing is that I feel that while the game seems really dark right now, but there are a whole lot of positive already going on. The girls are becoming more open and are starting to make friendships. They are already starting to realize that they don't have to always be on guard. And I think as the game progresses it will get much lighter in it's tone. Everything is still very much new to them.
The thing is that I feel that while the game seems really dark right now, but there are a whole lot of positive already going on. The girls are becoming more open and are starting to make friendships. They are already starting to realize that they don't have to always be on guard. And I think as the game progresses it will get much lighter in it's tone. Everything is still very much new to them.
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I know that the reason why Jenny picked them was their problems, but even the ones that Jenny didn´t picked up have terrible problems... Vicky is an orphan too and a family of... Chinese? people adopted her just because they found her in the streets... I don´t think it happens usually in a lot of western countries, that Asian people adopts western kids of the street... In my country, people adopts orphans from China, not the opposite.
Even with the group of Jenny's troubled girls, the drama is too much. I think it would have work better if the background stories of the characters were less terrible. Something like the background of the MC, that is not the victim of a ring of prostitution of children, didn´t killed a relative that abused of him and is threatened with death by a cartel that controls the police, didn't had brain cancer being an orphan living of charity, or things like that. Why not regular problems of young people in western countries, like coming from a troubled family and having bad companies? Bad grades, youth rebelliousness, problems with the police for petty offences, abuse of alcohol, marijuana or speed, or things like that? I met people with that kind of problems when I was in school and high school that had a second chance at their late teens and early twenties, when they grow up and were more mature mentally, and now have a life; but not victims of child prostitution... I think that something like that leaves in a person such a trauma that only professional help and therapy can fix.
Also, the bad guys are too bad without a good reason. Adam, the main villain of the story, is evil just because is evil, because is evil... Even if he's involved with the cartel of drugs... why he even care about the "charity work" of his step-sister? It doesn´t cost a lot of money to him, and if something, gives good image to the family that Jenny is working in rehabilitate troubled youth...
It would not matter if this one were one of those games for a quick fap. But I think that the dev was trying to create something more, a good story and characters. And I´m not going to say that it´s ruined by the excess of sentimentality and drama, because I enjoy the game anyway, but could be better with a lighter story, with drama but not so excessive, and with a bit of sense of humor.
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Yeah, Adam I can't figure out. He is thinking he is more than he is and is far too ambitious (probably watched far too many mafia movies), but his part does seem way too far for me as well. The wrong hard on for his step-sister might be because he just hates her. She has no problem making him feel small (his own fault for acting like a "half inch") and probably because she is step-sister so he does not want her to have anything of what he thinks would belong to him if she was not there. Trying to ruin her charity is just a spiteful thing.
I don't usually like games that have this much drama attached to so many characters all in one place, ut this game is so well written at the the same time and I am really interested in the story itself that I can't help but ignore that.
I don't usually like games that have this much drama attached to so many characters all in one place, ut this game is so well written at the the same time and I am really interested in the story itself that I can't help but ignore that.
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now that's my boy I'm so proud of you wait when you say I'm going with Jenny (and Jade) for now. you don't mean at the same time right
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Hey, i got a problem.
I have this blonde teacher waiting in academy restaurant?
When i want to talk with her its says that i should talk to everyone first - but i already did :/
What to do now? pls help
Edit: Nvm, load save and everything is fine
I have this blonde teacher waiting in academy restaurant?
When i want to talk with her its says that i should talk to everyone first - but i already did :/
What to do now? pls help
Edit: Nvm, load save and everything is fine
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