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hakuna-matata

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MC should have thrown Valery out of airlock. All the problems would have been resolved.
 
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Eric_Draven

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I don't think the writing is the problem, the decision making, however, is. Reading through the comments and I agree with one about this mafia arc being an endgame type of storyline. It's just too soon for this type of content, it looks comical seeing a guy who barely knows these girls wanting to risk life life for them. Let us build bonds and relationships first.
 

Fiufia

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Except for the psychopathic rich brother, determinated to ruin your life for no coherent reason.
you want a coherent reason on how a psychopath acts:WaitWhat:
good luck with that but i think you're going to need some long years studying psychology and even then it depends from case to case
 
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hakuna-matata

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I don't think the writing is the problem, the decision making, however, is. Reading through the comments and I agree with one about this mafia arc being an endgame type of storyline. It's just too soon for this type of content, it looks comical seeing a guy who barely knows these girls wanting to risk life life for them. Let us build bonds and relationships first.
That's still a "writings" issue. Look even poorly written tv show can be quite entertaining. Look, the game is fun but it's not the best one in there in terms of writing. It took a 360, went from a school drama type to a mafia introduction overnight.
 

Darkdevil66

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you want a coherent reason on how a psychopath acts:WaitWhat:
good luck with that but i think you're going to need some long years studying psychology and even then it depends from case to case
Depend which kind you're talking about. Primary psychopath are actually very rational and manipulative individual, often above average in intelligence. You wouldn't even notice them. Adam on the other hand is just a cartoonish character, bragging how much he likes to be evil and see everyone around him suffer.
 
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Eric_Draven

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That's still a "writings" issue. Look even poorly written tv show can be quite entertaining. Look, the game is fun but it's not the best one in there in terms of writing. It took a 360, went from a school drama type to a mafia introduction overnight.
As I said before If the mafia arc was towards the end of the game I wouldn't care as much. But it's not, it jumps from the light hearted college game to a heart pounding stressful drama. The mafia arc hasn't been badly written at all to me, it's just too much, too soon. Hence, why I said the problem is on the decision making side. But, agree to disagree.
 
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Fiufia

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Depend which kind you're talking about. Primary psychopath are actually very rational and manipulative individual, often above average in intelligence. You wouldn't even notice them. Adam on the other hand is just a cartoonish character, bragging how much he likes to be evil and see everyone around him suffer.
i think your definition is more of a serial killer. and although many suffer from Psychopathy is not true for all cases.
but I agree with how you describe Adam
 

Zarathos4

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I don't think the writing is the problem, the decision making, however, is. Reading through the comments and I agree with one about this mafia arc being an endgame type of storyline. It's just too soon for this type of content, it looks comical seeing a guy who barely knows these girls wanting to risk life life for them. Let us build bonds and relationships first.
simp mentality. Barely knows girl. Would do anything for girl anyway. OMG. The MC is a simp. :eek:
 

Canto Forte

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MC is ”working” for all the babes in the mansion and dating around (going out with girls).
His shtick is sticking to his ”employer” like the brute is to Adam.
He can be fun like p uff di dd y butler or lack luster like wayne mannor butler.
Do you see him as a personal assistant to Jenny?
 
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Boehser Onkel

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MC is ”working” for all the babes in the mansion and dating around (going out with girls).
His shtick is sticking to his ”employer” like the brute is to Adam.
He can be fun like p uff di dd y butler or lack luster like wayne mannor butler.
Do you see him as a personal assistant to Jenny?
well
he was forced to this "job" at the beginning (stated this somewhere here)
so yes he is
 
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