VN Ren'Py Abandoned A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

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tricksyg

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Espritviril said:
Yeah this was my biggest problem in 0.1 release. MC instantly started to whore himself without any buildup and I thought "damn, another potentially good story wasted into a generic harem.."

But this 0.2 beta rekindle my hope for this game. No more man-whoring for MC, really sweet development for most girls...
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Yeah, it got better but almost every girl is still so emotionally comfortable and connected after speaking 10 sentences to each other and studying math for an hour. Why can they confide in him and not the people they have lived together with for months? It's a little fast even on an emotional level. Especially Jenny, but I guess that's explained by her projecting Dylan unto him. Maybe I'm just being a whiny bitch with this tho, you are right, there is a really sweet development still.

Espritviril said:
But Ashley is my favorite, her character is really cute and it is sweet to see how is she head over heels for MC.
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Ashley is my least favorite, but that's why these games are so great, everyones tastes are catered to. If I need a dose of kawaii Ashleys roommate is gorgeous. I'm totally going for her instead of Ashley!

But my main girl is absolutely Valery. Crazy (hot) women are my thing (which IRL is a real problem but in these games it works out so, hell yeah!)
 
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Koushiro

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I don't know if I've ever had to take a hard out on a game before because I like the characters TOO much, but I may have to in this game. Every girl is lovely and I want to help them all, but unless this pulls a WVM and everyone is cool with each other, I don't think I could play this if it makes me cheat on these lovely girls to get to the harem. Also, they each are so clearly in need of friendship and love so I'd feel horrible if in the end I had to pick only one.

Either way, I'll feel bad. Guess the next couple updates will show me for sure.
 
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punisher2099

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tricksyg said:
The game is off to a great start, I can see this becoming an epic game. Only two things were slightly bothering - how quickly relationships escalate and errors in the writing. MC steps through the door and here we are sucking dick and feeling more comfortable with him than the people we lived with for months? I mean. A little more buildup wouldn't have hurt seeing as this seems to be a game about relationships and not just sex.

Also the script needs to be proofread and rewritten to some part. (i know we got a warning about it being a beta, but the prologue was supposed to be proofread, or did I misinterpret it?) There are grammatical errors throughout the whole thing and some sentences just aren't written the way people speak.

The most glaring issue being the tense used - is/was, has/had etc is being confused all the time.

Maybe this is a bit nitpicking, but the small things really stand out when the rest is so good.
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LOL i think you mean getting our dick sucked
 
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There are several girls here that are up in the air as far as potential LI Vicky, Erin and her streaming roommate, the girl Eric was talking to, Heather the receptionist, The Dean, even Kara
 
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Gh0st_Harambe

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Andre Young said:
Could it be that the MC is Dylan and he has been adopted?
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It might be him, we must have to see if Dylan was a friend of Jenny or could even be her brother.
Probably that they have met in the orphanage and became friends or that they are brothers and both have been abandoned by their family or that their family had an accident.
 
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Vile_Mage

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The 0.1 was the starting point....the new version dont know if it keeps me cause i havent playing yet but i hope it will be good...
 
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This game fully outdid my expectations. Wasn't expecting a prologue so heavy and rich in content, as well as the whole story per se; I also liked a lot on how replayability is going to work here, as there are some clear branches and also impacts on every decision taken.

My huge congrats to the dev for his stellar job. Unfortunately I can't pledge a thing atm, as my currency worth like shit, but I wish him all the best.

Mage009876 said:
The 0.1 was the starting point....the new version dont know if it keeps me cause i havent playing yet but i hope it will be good...
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Worth it 110%, no relevant bugs found. You'll have some gameplay hours btw :)
 
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