The game is off to a great start, I can see this becoming an epic game. Only two things were slightly bothering - how quickly relationships escalate and errors in the writing. MC steps through the door and here we are sucking dick and feeling more comfortable with him than the people we lived with for months? I mean. A little more buildup wouldn't have hurt seeing as this seems to be a game about relationships and not just sex.
Also the script needs to be proofread and rewritten to some part. (i know we got a warning about it being a beta, but the prologue was supposed to be proofread, or did I misinterpret it?) There are grammatical errors throughout the whole thing and some sentences just aren't written the way people speak.
The most glaring issue being the tense used - is/was, has/had etc is being confused all the time.
Maybe this is a bit nitpicking, but the small things really stand out when the rest is so good.