VN Ren'Py Abandoned A.O.A. Academy [Ch.5 Gold] [TLGGAMES]

[Joyce Harding]

Can someone make a signature for Ashley, she's the Apple of my eye.

 

[Deleted member 2492533]

Renders are amazing

 

[PinkGoddess]

Can someone make a signature for Ashley, she's the Apple of my eye.

Give me the render and Ill make it.

 

[Max1276]

Guys i can't hear nothing ,i mean no music,no sound ,nothing what's happened?

 

[Deleted member 2624195]

Yo we good?..................

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[Cirdon]

I'm putting this game aside.

The FemDom , low key though it is belongs in the genre tags.

First day, don't even get to settle into your dorm room and you're obligated to serve someone who holds your future over your head like a sword of Damocles?

I don't care how hot she is. Fuck that noise.

 

[Cirdon]

Also, A.O.A. needs to be expanded to it's meaning.

Never introduce an abbreviation before introducing it's expanded form.

 

[Moose_Tracks]

Kept seeing this game pop up in the latest replies and after scoping out the previews thought this might be worthy of a playthrough. I wasn't disappointed. Certainly a strong start for someone just getting their feet wet when it comes to creating a VN.

The pacing was nice and I'm glad there's a foundation for story elements being built to further propel the relationship aspects. The introduction of characters (especially on the train) felt organic and smooth. Choices that matter and/or lead to differing outcomes are always a plus in my book. Virtually all the character models are attractive with a nice variation to choose from, but the dev certainly knew what they doing by choosing Jenny to be one of the leads for the game. I could easily see her becoming a fan favorite. Ashley's not too far behind.

Unlike other comments I've read in this thread, I didn't mind the strip event being what it was. Jenny's vibe/body language in the Dean's office mostly signaled she had some ulterior (flirtatious) motives, so while the extent of how far things went during that scene wasn't a total shock, it was just enough to catch me off guard, which I liked. I guess I enjoy a lil spontaneity. Also, the option is in place for that scene to never happen, if you'd prefer taking things slower. Another shining example of why choice-based games are the cat's pajamas.

As I was nearing the end of the game, I was thinking to myself how well-rounded this product as a whole was, and that it certainly captured my attention. Then, (don't read if you haven't played yet) that crazed murderous Valery flash occured.... and my intrigue spiked. Perhaps this is just my preference, but if there's gonna end up being a spooky/mysterious vibe thrown in this story with everything else taking place.... Just yes, please.

Prob through sheer luck but I was able to get the perfect score for Jenny on my first playthrough. There's a small handful of choices that aren't obvious as I think you have to choose every option that 'Jenny likes', but here were my choices that might prove tricky (again, avoid if you haven't played)....

- Told Jenny her brother is an asshole
- Didn't check Jenny out in the Dean's office (crazy, I know)
- 'Just finished it' for the strip down
- Chose Jenny during the strip event
- Called the strip event weird
- Went for the hug in her bedroom

Overall, props to the creator for all the effort, I think you're really onto something here.

 

[joe powa]

Kept seeing this game pop up in the latest replies and after scoping out the previews thought this might be worthy of a playthrough. I wasn't disappointed. Certainly a strong start for someone just getting their feet wet when it comes to creating a VN.

The pacing was nice and I'm glad there's a foundation for story elements being built to further propel the relationship aspects. The introduction of characters (especially on the train) felt organic and smooth. Choices that matter and/or lead to differing outcomes are always a plus in my book. Virtually all the character models are attractive with a nice variation to choose from, but the dev certainly knew what they doing by choosing Jenny to be one of the leads for the game. I could easily see her becoming a fan favorite. Ashley's not too far behind.

Unlike other comments I've read in this thread, I didn't mind the strip event being what it was. Jenny's vibe/body language in the Dean's office mostly signaled she had some ulterior (flirtatious) motives, so while the extent of how far things went during that scene wasn't a total shock, it was just enough to catch me off guard, which I liked. I guess I enjoy a lil spontaneity. Also, the option is in place for that scene to never happen, if you'd prefer taking things slower. Another shining example of why choice-based games are the cat's pajamas.

As I was nearing the end of the game, I was thinking to myself how well-rounded this product as a whole was, and that it certainly captured my attention. Then, (don't read if you haven't played yet) that crazed murderous Valery flash occured.... and my intrigue spiked. Perhaps this is just my preference, but if there's gonna end up being a spooky/mysterious vibe thrown in this story with everything else taking place.... Just yes, please.

Prob through sheer luck but I was able to get the perfect score for Jenny on my first playthrough. There's a small handful of choices that aren't obvious as I think you have to choose every option that 'Jenny likes', but here were my choices that might prove tricky (again, avoid if you haven't played)....

- Told Jenny her brother is an asshole
- Didn't check Jenny out in the Dean's office (crazy, I know)
- 'Just finished it' for the strip down
- Chose her during the strip event
- Called the strip event weird
- Went for the hug in her bedroom

Overall, props to the creator for all the effort, I think you're really onto something here.

Well forcing you to work for her free and ask you to strip for a job your FORCED to do...... well it's not flirtarious or "lil spontaneity", it's illegal . And combine that with a person writgh to be moraly "good" (opposite of her brother) it's verry weird. That and the overall reaction of all participant and no option to be offended.
The problem is:it's not a abrupt strip scene, it's a sexual harrasment scene!
So whriting it like it was normal and nothing bad were done because peoples are good and all enjoy it..... for me it's not a good think
It's like rape scene were because the victim had body reaction, by magic she enjoy it and well no harm done. This kind of thing is morality wise dangerous.
You can make sexual harrasment and blackmail in your game that's not a problem. But made it like a normal and good thing it's different !

But yeah like i said earlier exept that scene who is moraly discutable it's really a great game

 

[Moose_Tracks]

Well forcing you to work for her free and ask you to strip for a job your FORCED to do...... well it's not flirtarious or "lil spontaneity", it's illegal . And combine that with a person writgh to be moraly "good" (opposite of her brother) it's verry weird. That and the overall reaction of all participant and no option to be offended.
The problem is:it's not a abrupt strip scene, it's a sexual harrasment scene!
So whriting it like it was normal and nothing bad were done because peoples are good and all enjoy it..... for me it's not a good think
It's like rape scene were because the victim had body reaction, by magic she enjoy it and well no harm done. This kind of thing is morality wise dangerous.
You can make sexual harrasment and blackmail in your game that's not a problem. But made it like a normal and good thing it's different !

But yeah like i said earlier exept that scene who is moraly discutable it's really a great game

I can absolutely see where you're coming from and in time most of what you said might prove to be true. For now, I'm just taking the wait and see approach. There's an obvious intent for Jenny's actions that will affect both the story and her character, I would just like to see more before I jump to any conclusions. She seems to mean well, but we have to remember she is running a house full of 'troubled' individuals surrounded by unfortunate circumstances. There's no saying she isn't troubled herself and perhaps people's reaction of "that doesn't seem right" is intended, rather than just feeling inconsistent with her character.

Any way it plays out, it makes for some nice speculation until we know more about her.

 

[I Got No Strings On Me]

So i played this for about 10 minutes before having to log in and ask if I'm understanding this correctly.

Spoiler: could be kinky

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[xXwankerXx]

Well forcing you to work for her free and ask you to strip for a job your FORCED to do...... well it's not flirtarious or "lil spontaneity", it's illegal . And combine that with a person writgh to be moraly "good" (opposite of her brother) it's verry weird. That and the overall reaction of all participant and no option to be offended.

Agreed. That scene is waay out of place and out of character, dev should reconsider. It's like u beat the shit out of a dude and a couple secs later you try to be his best friend. Maybe the dev wanted to make the MC look more confident about his body, the bitches didn't mind to see his dick, hell, they all act like sluts, especially Jade. We can wait and see how events unfold to judge how good or bad that scene is in the long run.

it's a sexual harrasment scene! ... It's like rape scene were because the victim had body reaction, by magic she enjoy it and well no harm done. This kind of thing is morality wise dangerous.

Guess that's a matter of perspective and how the players feel about it. Personally, I wouldn't give a shit about showing off to those sexy lil' sluts, the MC is a decent looking dude and the ladies didn't seem to be bothered to see his dick. Perks of packin' the big meat, imagine them laughing at the MC for having a small pee-pee, that would've been bad.

I think sexual harassment is a little exaggerated when you say a woman sexually harassed a man, I wouldn't mind if a sexy lady like Jenny would harass me, to me it looked like one of those "My Dirty maid" vids on Bangbros, the woman is getting paid a nice sum to clean the house naked and get fucked by her employer. Nobody forces her to do that. In our case the MC is forced to accept her terms so her retarded brother doesn't expel him ... guess that's her way of having fun or really bad writing on the dev's part. But we can take advantage of the situation and have some fun with her too, y'know ?? Win - win situation.

I'm more bothered about her getting naked and letting him touch her boobs and pinch her nipples, it's waay to rushed and again out of character. She don't seem like that kinda woman and the MC is a stranger she just met. She could have a crush on him, but it was way too soon for that. Wonder how her brother would react to that.

 

[joe powa]

Agreed. That scene is waay out of place and out of character, dev should reconsider. It's like u beat the shit out of a dude and a couple secs later you try to be his best friend. Maybe the dev wanted to make the MC look more confident about his body, the bitches didn't mind to see his dick, hell, they all act like sluts, especially Jade. We can wait and see how events unfold to judge how good or bad that scene is in the long run.



Guess that's a matter of perspective and how the players feel about it. Personally, I wouldn't give a shit about showing off to those sexy lil' sluts, the MC is a decent looking dude and the ladies didn't seem to be bothered to see his dick. Perks of packin' the big meat, imagine them laughing at the MC for having a small pee-pee, that would've been bad.

I think sexual harassment is a little exaggerated when you say a woman sexually harassed a man, I wouldn't mind if a sexy lady like Jenny would harass me, to me it looked like one of those "My Dirty maid" vids on Bangbros, the woman is getting paid a nice sum to clean the house naked and get fucked by her employer. Nobody forces her to do that. In our case the MC is forced to accept her terms so her retarded brother doesn't expel him ... guess that's her way of having fun or really bad writing on the dev's part. But we can take advantage of the situation and have some fun with her too, y'know ?? Win - win situation.

I'm more bothered about her getting naked and letting him touch her boobs and pinch her nipples, it's waay to rushed and again out of character. She don't seem like that kinda woman and the MC is a stranger she just met. She could have a crush on him, but it was way too soon for that. Wonder how her brother would react to that.

That's exactly the problem, people don't see it as sexual harrasment because mc is a boy, but inverse gender and that will change... only because society isn't educated in sexual crime agains't men....

Well that's a morality question and people think what they think i'm not the reality and moral depositer

 

[Cirdon]

I think sexual harassment is a little exaggerated when you say a woman sexually harassed a man, I wouldn't mind if a sexy lady like Jenny would harass me, to me it looked like one of those "My Dirty maid" vids on Bangbros, the woman is getting paid a nice sum to clean the house naked and get fucked by her employer.

We're here to play H games, so yes, we expect this sort of thing.

MC is being caused to agree through coercion, as in he doesn't get to stay at school unless he complies.

That's not consent.

That's sexual harassment. What the person doing the coercion looks like doesn't change that, it just makes it more palatable to the people playing the game.

The My Dirty Maid videos are monetary coercion and in the real world would also be sexual harassment.

And that's fine, this isn't reality, this is fun sexy fiction. The Dev should tell whatever story they want to tell.

It just belongs in the genre tags up top so people know what to expect.

 

[Moose_Tracks]

And that's fine, this isn't reality, this is fun sexy fiction. The Dev should tell whatever story they want to tell.

This is basically the stance I chose to take. I'm all for having the main story beats remaining grounded/realistic, but I'm also here for some mindless fun that sometimes bends the rules on what is reasonable or morally palatable when it comes to the fun scenes. There are plenty of scenarios where my in-game preferences don't necessarily reflect my stance for things pertaining to the real world.

 

[Cirdon]

There are plenty of scenarios where my in-game preferences don't necessarily reflect my stance for things pertaining to the real world.

I agree, so if anyone's reading this thinking I believe this content shouldn't be in the game, they are wrong.

Developers should put whatever they thinks serves the story in the game.

I just think if you're putting FemDom in your game you should tag it FemDom. Yes, that'll draw in those who like FemDom who will complain about how soft she is, but it'll also let those who don't like FemDom in any form skip, and those who can enjoy it in some ways make up their own mind.

 

[oidex]

Again, I don't think there's a single man out there who would complain if a sexy woman sexually assaulted him, he would simply go with the flow, it's no rape if he gives his consent to be "harassed".Unless she want to peg him and he want to save his booty for marriage, that's legit rape.

This has got to be one of the dumbest posts I have ever read on this entire site.

 

[joe powa]

Again, I don't think there's a single man out there who would complain if a sexy woman sexually assaulted him, he would simply go with the flow, it's no rape if he gives his consent to be "harassed".Unless she want to peg him and he want to save his booty for marriage, that's legit rape.

Cirdon the monetary coercion you talk about it's called "business agreement" bruh. Dude makes her an offer and she accepts. Agreed, it is sexual harassment given the context, but she could simply refuse or call the cops on him if shit got out of proportion ( in a RL scenario speaking, not porn movies). Here it's legit blackmail if u look at the context, if he don't wanna kiss her ass, he's expelled. Semantics bro', that's why I said that it depends on how the players feel, some may not like it and some may not give a shit about it unless it'll get worse in future updates, it's up to the dev to "fix" that.

Well i'm a man and in this situation i would feel humiliated, forced and harrassed. But yes i'm not all men.

 

[xXwankerXx]

This has got to be one of the dumbest posts I have ever read on this entire site.

Thank u for the input, it's your opinion and I respect that unlike you, apparently. Coming from a user with that pic as avatar and given the "stupidity" of my comment makes it a personal opinion on a subject first and an educational experience second. I promise to do better with my future posts so I won't disappoint u again.

 

[steenbok]

Loved all the girls and seeming variety of their backgrounds. With Jenny and others who live with her you have girls with some baggage you will get to unpack gradually. And with Ashley, Sung Ji, Vicky, Kara(if she comes to academy later) and some more girls we will be introduced to later we have some more lighthearted(hopefully) backgrounds to pick from.

It felt annoying at first when Jenny gave us no choice but to work for her if we want to stay at the academy but after dads letter reveal I am fine with it. She helped us and we will help her with taking care of her roommates. The whole stripping part felt a bit tacky though. Would be better if later in her room Jenny clarified that it was more of an optional fun rather than job requirement. Feeling roped into it kind of sours the taste.

Sex scene was the weakest part of release to be honest. I dont mind how it happened but visuals and writing in it were rather bland. I hope for better angles and spicier writing next time.

Overall this is extremely promising start, you have something special in the making. Keep it up and good luck.

Stripping part is optional. No stripping = no sex scene. Did you play the game ?.