- Thread starter TrueLoveGames
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- Sep 16, 2016
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Once again dad died, but you know what ? it didn't strike me as a trope because the mc loved him.
Then the teen years love interest had good explanation for her behavior and so does the mc.
The train journey was fun and the arrival too.
Then the brother was an ass and i was a bit miffed that i couldn't stop the mc from getting angry, but i'll give you this one Dev.
And then she appeared, and then you got me on the ride.
Then the teen years love interest had good explanation for her behavior and so does the mc.
The train journey was fun and the arrival too.
Then the brother was an ass and i was a bit miffed that i couldn't stop the mc from getting angry, but i'll give you this one Dev.
And then she appeared, and then you got me on the ride.
- Jan 19, 2020
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WOW. Just WOW. I've avoided reading spoilers in the thread, and just started this. I'm only at the part right after the cinematic I guess you'd call it, where he's sitting on the bench. And I got say you've already got me hooked. 
- Feb 11, 2018
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I normally can't stand the side-shave haircut, but damn Valery (?, is that her name?) is stunning. I think this one is gonna be great.
- Dec 30, 2019
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I thought Jenny wet her pants for a sec.
- Aug 16, 2017
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very promising and good start of a game, cannot wait for the new version, good luck and nice one
- Nov 10, 2017
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I was sad by Eric aren't our roomie T_T Hope mc and him will be best buddy ! Appearance of a Joke but, it seems, not personnality that's.... quite refreshing !
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Compressed Bugfixed v.0.1.1
Original - 995.34 MB > Compressed - 106 MB
PC Compressed:
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Original - 995.34 MB > Compressed - 106 MB
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- Sep 17, 2020
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- Apr 3, 2018
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Turned it off when I got to Jenny's, female domination and blackmail is not mah jam. Why is there no Female Domination tag? Besides the whole thing stinks of a setup by adam AND jenny. Throat punches for both of em.
- Mar 7, 2019
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No, you wait at the station, go to the school, get a new job, and get to your new room.
- Mar 7, 2019
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- Oct 23, 2019
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Did you download it today?
There was a bugged version uploaded yesterday which was replaced.
- Mar 7, 2019
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- Aug 17, 2019
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Unofficial Android Port for 0.1.1Fix Compressed :
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My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.
If it says unknown developer or something like that just press install anyway.
Give Me Your Feedback on the Discord Server. As it's easier to reach me there, than here.
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If it says unknown developer or something like that just press install anyway.
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- Mar 7, 2019
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So, I'm about half an hour in, some critiques:
The renders are just fantastic. Some of the best I've seen. Really well done.
The font and color are frequently difficult to read. Darker color and a more standard font would be best. Especially when the screen is lighter and the text ends up bleeding into it.
You need a copy editor. Seriously, you need someone to look over your script/text and fix mistakes and correct grammar. There are mistakes in nearly every line of text in the game so far. If you like, I'm happy to do it for free. I've been a professional copy editor in the past, can give you links to some of my online work if you're unsure. If you don't take me up on it, at least find someone who can do the job, because the VN seriously, seriously needs it. Your text is not doing the renders justice.
The renders are just fantastic. Some of the best I've seen. Really well done.
The font and color are frequently difficult to read. Darker color and a more standard font would be best. Especially when the screen is lighter and the text ends up bleeding into it.
You need a copy editor. Seriously, you need someone to look over your script/text and fix mistakes and correct grammar. There are mistakes in nearly every line of text in the game so far. If you like, I'm happy to do it for free. I've been a professional copy editor in the past, can give you links to some of my online work if you're unsure. If you don't take me up on it, at least find someone who can do the job, because the VN seriously, seriously needs it. Your text is not doing the renders justice.