Just started playing, and everything seems very well executed. Nice models, well written out and believable dialogues, believable story (so far) and no major bugs or anything. Scene direction also seems quite nice.
I do have one major annoyance though. That anime style intro movie you get after that first phone call, the audio in that isn't linked to the audio opties. So it fking blasts the audio at full volume. Very annoying for someone who tends to put down the in game volume to 10 or 20%, because he wants to listen to his own music. Please fix.
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Okay, I'm starting to noticing some writing issues.
"has train doors always been this short" "I've never gotten in one for years..."
I don't even know what the writers are trying to say with those sentences. Even if I were to interpret those sentences as:
Have train doors always been this small? I haven't been in a train for years." -- I'd still say the sentences are weird.