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Absolutely Anna isn't innocent at all. Those text messages, she is recieving and sending (like taking and sending pictures in lingerie as fapping material for some other guy [Chris]) definitively cross a line and she neither puts a real stop to it, nor is she honest about it in front of her husband. She also lets others grab her and doesn't say a single word to her "beloved" significant other about being molested, she stays silent or downplays it in front of him (like after the dinner with her fat boss, where David already got suspicious). Nevertheless Chris is a scumbag, so is Anna's boss, don't know about her co-worker, yet, but usually in this genre all males are total assholes anyway.
(y) I agree this is one of the things I hate about Anna she is very naive and open about her friends devouring her by the eyes and molesting her which is a bit stupid of her in my opinion.

It makes sense for Anna to be very caring and friendly to everyone as she was raised in an all-male family but no woman who truly loves her husband wouldn't be that open with her boss or co-workers or the best friend she has. he's already received several photos of Anna, I mean... :sneaky:
David's false friend anyway, this also opens up a lot of gaps for other men like Chris/Hank/Jake to be more encouraged to continue. flirting with Anna and also thinking that she will be easy for them to bed now. without forgetting that there are other predators on the list like David's father, Darren, I don't know if he will be one of them to covet but I don't doubt it but in the end we will have The choice is enough.
 

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Basically this is a Kinetic Novel and options hardly affect the story. I rejected the gym partner girl every single time yet she's kinda forced, also MC has poor choices in friendship.
:KEK: Certainly David is worse off than I am in my friendships. I don't even trust his father anymore after this last update lol even the old man will pay. Therefore :sneaky::ROFLMAO:
 

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You forgot to acknowledge that Anna is an idiot, too. Instead of showing her husband the naughty texts his friend (or the other guy) is secretly writing to her behind his back, so both can cut him out of their lives, she is basically complicit and not pulling the brakes as hard as she should be. When she falls for him one day they will have both added enough fuel to the fire.
Dev said you- Anna didn't have to like sending photos to Chris.
 
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The story was good but there is no saving this marriage of David sees those texts and pics. Even if he proves his innocence his self worth as a man, father and a husband will be shattered. I don't think he will be able to look his wife in the face ever again. The only way to save this marriage is for her to delete and never text Christopher again before David can see them
 

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It is pretty obvious anna has borderline exhibitionist fetish. She masks it by being naïve and approaching shady men.
David seems to be the only honest guy in all of this and he is going to get fucked over pretty bad at the end of this.
Choices you make does not seem to affect anything, hopefully consequences unravel in the 3rd chapter and things make sense.
 
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It is pretty obvious anna has borderline exhibitionist fetish. She masks it by being naïve and approaching shady men.
David seems to be the only honest guy in all of this and he is going to get fucked over pretty bad at the end of this.
Choices you make does not seem to affect anything, hopefully consequences unravel in the 3rd chapter and things make sense.
Sure buddy you just click and don't read the text, the choices are important, with Ch1, Ch2 and you will get the result of your choices in Ch3
 

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Heck It's hard to make some understand. That Anna is doing it for fun and for attention yes she is doing naughty things sending Chris lots of pictures and the lassive and provocative cell phone conversations but that doesn't mean we can't save their marriage we know it will be hard for both of them as we've already seen David's path has been completed Now Part 2 will begin, we will control Anna, we will see from her expectation how everything will be and also some choices that we are going to make I think some of you didn't read the warnings of several members here and from Dev himself who has already made it very clear about this. and once again the sexual things will only happen in CH3 so if some of you have patience I advise you to come back in a year as already said by (Mr Palmer)
 

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Heck It's hard to make some understand. That Anna is doing it for fun and for attention yes she is doing naughty things sending Chris lots of pictures and the lassive and provocative cell phone conversations but that doesn't mean we can't save their marriage we know it will be hard for both of them as we've already seen David's path has been completed Now Part 2 will begin, we will control Anna, we will see from her expectation how everything will be and also some choices that we are going to make I think some of you didn't read the warnings of several members here and from Dev himself who has already made it very clear about this. and once again the sexual things will only happen in CH3 so if some of you have patience I advise you to come back in a year as already said by (Mr Palmer)
Yes we will need lot of patience but she will get it rough and hard from both Chris + husband boss i think. Looking forward to it, let's ruin that "perfect marriage" :devilish: :love:
 

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Dev said you- Anna didn't have to like sending photos to Chris.
I mean I'm talking about one of the story routes you can follow, not all of them. If she was as the most loyal person she would behave the same in every route. We all have it in us to betray other people, more or less. I don't like to put people on a pedestal, that's all.

I've had this couple over - let's call them Dave and Anna. It was a nice dinner and we drank a lot of booze afterwards. Cocktails, wine, beer. It's around 2 am when Dave had enough and goes to bed. Not her though. She is still wide awake, happy as a clam and orders me to open another bottle while she goes to the bathroom to freshen up.
I go to the fridge and I see her phone on the table, unlocked, chat open. Someone is writing her a message. My heart skips a beat when I read how much she misses [dude] and how much she's looking forward to see him on the weekend. Anna and Dave are married.
The next day I ask Dave who [dude] is and pretend that she mentioned him earlier. Yes, they're friends and no, he doesn't try to be jealous because the last time he almost wanted to kill some guy. She's also going with a female colleague, so the only reasonable thing to do here is to trust her.
Well they're divorced now because she couldn't keep it in the pants. She tried to put the blame on him as in you didn't fight enough for me and all that childish bullshit to justify her cheating, like in a cheap soap opera.
 

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Dev said you- Anna didn't have to like sending photos to Chris.
But I guess that's where the game loses points with me (don't get me wrong I really like the game and want to see how things play out), we may get the choice to like or dislike sending those photos, but they are sent regardless there was no choice to not send the photos and stop the conversation when he pressured.

It plays from David's perspective but we see some stuff from Anna's which should be left for chapter 2 to be honest. Like for the photos I would have David receive them instead for CH1 and for CH2 we get to see if she also sent them to Chris with maybe an extra one or two (being the standing and the behind one, don't want to push too much).
Also when Chris grabs Anna's ass when he is spending the night we shouldn't have seen that if we were playing David's POV, maybe he turns around because she made a sound or something?

Though I get it, as the player we get to see and hear things for a 'fly on the wall' type of feel so we are given more information at points, but we lose some choice to be able to escape totally 'unharmed' which may be by choice of the DEV in that no one is really squeaky clean and some spicy photos or some chick trying to throw herself are a lot easier to work through than taking a dick that isn't your husbands or giving the dick to some chick at the gym.
 

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agreed. Anna is very naive and quick to dismiss when David tries to warn her to be on her guard. if i don't see her at least question what is happening before she tosses David out, then she is dumb bitch and deserves to have David give up on her and divorce her. chapter 3 will be interesting for sure.
Yes, this is something that frustrates David. Anna is too trusting of people. She seems to always give people the benefit of the doubt. It makes her naive to peoples’ intentions and she can be taken advantage of. David is fully aware of this and it really bugs him, but Anna doesn’t like when he tries to manage her, so he tries hard to refrain from it.

In Anna's mind, she is fully in control of her actions and thinks it's ridiculous David wouldn't trust her. If a man hits on her, so what? She will tell them no thanks and move on. When David gets upset or jealous she finds it unattractive and irritating.

The thing about Anna... she's spent a lifetime with males, so inherently she always feels like she has to prove herself as a woman. She's been treated like a helpless little girl her whole life by her older brothers and father, so when she met David it was refreshing to have someone who fully respected her as a person and gave her the freedom to express herself. Therefore, it sours her when David doesn't respect her ability to take care of herself.

Chris is someone who understands Anna's naivity too, which is why he's so hot for her. All the other girls in his life eventually got tired of his act, but Anna has compassion for him and doesn't turn him away, at least on the friendship level. He wants to use her compassion and trust in him to manipulate her.

As for her being dumb that she wouldn't realize a set up, perhaps that's the case, but really, why would she ever guess somone is trying to wreck her marriage or her life? And while it seems strange David would suddenly have an affair, there's enough smoke there to have Anna doubting his fidelity to her. There are real pictures and real events. A husband cheating on a wife is a much more plausible scenario than an elaborate setup by some jealous ex-girlfriend of David's that she’s never heard of.

We're getting ahead of ourselves though. Let's just sit back and see how Anna's week goes.
 
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What Anna's election will look like, somehow hard for me to imagine, incl. Anna is home when David was at work, Anna sent photos to Chris yes / no, Anna hits Chris in the face for grabbing her ass. Yes No. Annie likes David's comment about her work dress code, yes /no Will it be any different?
 
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I would like to see David get revenge on fake bestfriend Chris by playing a prank on him.
Maybe hire an escort and 2 futas to hide in a hotel room
then the escort can wait outside of his work pretending her car broke down
and could he give her a lift back to the hotel room for a bj.
Then when he accepts it, she tells him she’s kinky and wants to cuff him so he can’t touch her while she’s blowing him otherwise no bj,
then while he’s cuffed the futas come out and chain his cuffs to the bedpost bend him over and start fucking him in the ass, then the other futa puts cayenne pepper on 12 in strap on dildo and fucks his ass
Then they flip him over & put a chindo over his face and one of the trannys can be riding it in their ass while their cock & balls are slapping chris in the nose
And the escort takes plenty of photos to give David to make Chris disappear if he doesn’t want these to get leaked
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I would like to see David get revenge on fake bestfriend Chris by playing a prank on him.
Maybe hire an escort and 2 futas to hide in a hotel room
then the escort can wait outside of his work pretending her car broke down
and could he give her a lift back to the hotel room for a bj.
Then when he accepts it, she tells him she’s kinky and wants to cuff him so he can’t touch her while she’s blowing him otherwise no bj,
then while he’s cuffed the futas come out and chain his cuffs to the bedpost bend him over and start fucking him in the ass, then the other futa puts cayenne pepper on 12 in strap on dildo and fucks his ass
And the escort takes plenty of photos to give David to make Chris disappear if he doesn’t want these to get leaked
:ROFLMAO:
 

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I would like to see David get revenge on fake bestfriend Chris by playing a prank on him.
Maybe hire an escort and 2 futas to hide in a hotel room
then the escort can wait outside of his work pretending her car broke down
and could he give her a lift back to the hotel room for a bj.
Then when he accepts it, she tells him she’s kinky and wants to cuff him so he can’t touch her while she’s blowing him otherwise no bj,
then while he’s cuffed the futas come out and chain his cuffs to the bedpost bend him over and start fucking him in the ass, then the other futa puts cayenne pepper on 12 in strap on dildo and fucks his ass
And the escort takes plenty of photos to give David to make Chris disappear if he doesn’t want these to get leaked
:love: I'm with you in this would love to see this happen with Chris :KEK:
 
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What Anna's election will look like, somehow hard for me to imagine, incl. Anna is home when David was at work, Anna sent photos to Chris yes / no, Anna hits Chris in the face for grabbing her ass. Yes No. Annie likes David's comment about her work dress code, yes /no Will it be any different?
I'm not exactly sure I'm following you Sadowdark, but if I'm reading this correctly, you're asking if Anna's choices have any impact on the events of Part 1? I'm going to be writing a Patreon post for everyone soon about Part 2 and how it will work. There will be choices for Anna, but Part 2 is largely kinetic like Part 1. You cannot change events of Part 1... this won't be another Back to the Future. You can influence Anna and there will be some things you can control that weren't shown in Part 1... but all roads will lead to the same place, which is where we left off at end of Part 1. Now, where it goes from there? That's where the outcome will largely be determined by your choices in Parts 1 and 2 along with the choices that come up in Part 3.

Surely there will be people who get angry about this, that they cannot control the outcome of Part 1 and 2. But sorry, I don't want this to be a project that takes eight years to finish. I'm telling a story, and I want you to be in a position to choose how you'd like it to end.
 
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