While we are waiting for the next update, I am going to throw out another mod.
As mentioned upthread, I am a big believer in the power of the internal voice of the protagonist to draw us into the story. As it stand, the story is told entirely in third person past tense. I wondered if it might be worthwhile to experiment with some first-person present tense and even some future tense, all within the protagonists mind. So I spent some time today and re-wrote some of my first mod to add two new voices to replace some of the existing text: "protagonist thoughts" and "protagonist fantasies." The result is attached.
To use these, back up your game folder and then copy the game folder in this mod to your game folder. Delete the files "8Hen.rpyc" and "script.rpyc" so the game compiles new versions of those when it loads (may not be strictly necessary, but can prevent some problems). Start the game and load either save. They are the same except that the first has Wisdom as the advisor when you remember "support advisor" and the second has Mara. I did nothing to Ungor-as-advisor scene so included no save for that. Hit the "remember" button and choose the scene you want to see.
The changes are mostly in the five scenes with the protagonist: the two "support advisor" scenes and the three potion scenes. They are considerably longer than the base game scenes, and are totally unofficial, so don't lose your base game files or saves. The other scenes are pretty much my first mod, with maybe some corrections.
These are a first cut at the scenes, so there may be typos. Let me know what you think.