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fishbrain

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Shouldn't that be "Patreon release" instead? If it's released only for Patreon subscribers then it's not for public.
Yeah she answered my question and I realized we had different definitions of "public release". Oh well, second to last tier gets it three weeks after release, not sure if there's a public after that or not.
 
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Saint Blackmoor

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I like the game. One thing, though, is that the dialogue says "story" like a narrator is speaking, not Sandra, but it's from her perspective. If a game is going to have a narrator, it should be a third voice.

(storia, in this case, is the "Narrator.")
Example:
storia" It was not like me to approach a stranger in such a dangerous way.
storia" I seemed almost enraptured by his beautiful blue eyes and lavender scent.

storia" It was not like her to approach a stranger in such a dangerous way.
storia" She seemed almost enraptured by his beautiful blue eyes and lavender scent.

(lavender scent :unsure: how about manly scent)

Just some thoughts.
 

Lucrezia&Augusto

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Dec 25, 2019
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I like the game. One thing, though, is that the dialogue says "story" like a narrator is speaking, not Sandra, but it's from her perspective. If a game is going to have a narrator, it should be a third voice.

(storia, in this case, is the "Narrator.")
Example:
storia" It was not like me to approach a stranger in such a dangerous way.
storia" I seemed almost enraptured by his beautiful blue eyes and lavender scent.

storia" It was not like her to approach a stranger in such a dangerous way.
storia" She seemed almost enraptured by his beautiful blue eyes and lavender scent.

(lavender scent :unsure: how about manly scent)

Just some thoughts.
Hello friend, it's Luana.
I actually understood Narrator as Sandra telling her story.
Amanda also pointed this out to me and we are changing to improve this dialogue.
Luana.png
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Oct 26, 2017
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Hello friend, it's Luana.
I actually understood Narrator as Sandra telling her story.
Amanda also pointed this out to me, and we are changing to improve this dialogue.
Hey, Thanks for the response. I think having a Narrator is less confusing or maybe explain at the start of the game what
''story" is in terms of the game. but since you have Sandra also having inner thoughts, I think players expect a narrator.

I hope for much success in the game. :giggle:
 
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