I like the game. One thing, though, is that the dialogue says "story" like a narrator is speaking, not Sandra, but it's from her perspective. If a game is going to have a narrator, it should be a third voice.
(storia, in this case, is the "Narrator.")
Example:
storia" It was not like me to approach a stranger in such a dangerous way.
storia" I seemed almost enraptured by his beautiful blue eyes and lavender scent.
storia" It was not like
her to approach a stranger in such a dangerous way.
storia"
She seemed almost enraptured by his beautiful blue eyes and lavender scent.
(lavender scent

how about manly scent)
Just some thoughts.