VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.201] [Lust & Passion]

[ancienregimele]

Good day. I went through version 0.130 and was surprised at how much the quality of the script and dialogs decreased. Imbalance between the highest level renders and low-quality stretched dialogues and situations described. A large number of frankly unnecessary renders, in which the position of the characters has slightly changed, etc.
The art school situation is beautifully drawn, but not logically convincing. Under unconvincing speeches, they strip her almost naked and paw her breasts and crotch in front of adolescents, and she agrees to this, and even drinks alcohol for courage, although she knows that she is drunk "not the mistress of her pussy." At the same time, it is highly doubtful that a mentally limited bully from her class could come up with this trip. And why wear leather clothes, if they would not recognize her in their clothes and helmet?
Episode with the 2nd part-time job. Sofia sees these children for the second time in her life, shows them her breasts and jerks off small cocks. Complete nonsense.
Already now I anticipate the indignation of individual forum participants that this is a game in which everything is possible ... If everything is possible, why such long and inconsistent approaches to decisive events?
If everything is possible, then write the scene when Sofia comes to school in a short dress, as always without a bra and Aiden gives her another task to take off her panties during the lesson. She successfully convinces herself that all this is for the good of the family and fulfills his demand. Aiden in this form leads her to the director and they fuck her with him and many similar episodes with each of those who want to fuck her.
It is also clear why the tasks will be more extreme starting from the 4th task. Aiden certainly already has photos in which an unknown man holds her breasts, wrinkles her nipples and puts his hand in her crotch.
It will be interesting if the author will also awkwardly let Sophia jump off Aiden's hook, or will he come up with something radical?
At the beginning of the game, we saw a strong woman who made herself and was the keeper of the family hearth, but proved herself weak and helpless from the blackmail of Bennett and Aiden.
Whatever all the fans of this so-called creativity say, there must be a reason why she is so rapidly degrading both as a wife and as a mother. There must be an explanation for this from her past, otherwise everything is perceived as far-fetched and unconvincing. Bad erotic fiction.
In the current development of events, I assume that sex on the 16th game day can happen during the execution of Aiden's next task. Sophia was instructed to perform a private dance in a strip club. She drank for courage, became very aroused during the dance and had passionate sex.
Also, I do not exclude that Ava Meyers planned this behavior of her children for the subsequent blackmail of Sofia. Who will have to become their teacher of practical sex, in all its manifestations.

Indignation, no, in fact I agree totally about the second side job. About everything else, I disagree. An art class & the performance of tableaux for the class was, IMO, one of the best segments of erotic writing that L&P has done. It depends a lot on an individual's POV concerning blackmail. One glass of wine might have relaxed Sophia, somewhat but it didn't make her lose control of her pussy! As for the rest we'll just have to agree to disagree, as I'm finding myself constantly appearing to defend blackmail & that's not why I'm here.

 

[hzjujk]

It would have gone further than this in many other stories. When I say blackmail & coercion are present in so many other games, I maybe should have added that they're usually done in a much cruder way. IMO the 12 tasks gave players something to wonder about. If you're right & push came to shove, I'd rather see submission than incest any day of the week.

How it looks to me, at present, is more along the lines of Sophia enjoying being blackmailed, or taking the initiative. That's if one of Morello's soldiers doesn't get to Aiden first.

We will probably never have a common position on the humiliations. Where did you read that Sophia is enjoying blackmail? Or did you mean that she enjoys parts of the task?

 

[nexer]

Hey Guys, any Japanese around here. What means?

 

[Mmarsh]

The whole game is falling apart more and more. All the talk about realism, and now L&P sits there with three black mail stories, tons of nonsensical side stories (just to cover every kink), and the actual progress of his main story comes more and more to a standstill.

Yes, side jobs, Aiden, Don Morello storylines are completely crap. It could have been easily realistic storylines like-
- an affair with Bennett
- fling with the janitor so he saves Sophia from thugs n baddies
- wife swapping with neighbor's or with Patricia husband

 

[Old Dog]

Hey Guys, any Japanese around here. What means?
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The mystery of who Aiden really is continues

 

[Deleted member 1023239]

To the administrators: The Shota discussion was maybe "off topic" but it was important and right even if we were all annoyed by it and it was conducted emotionally.

it is avoidable if you're annoyed why don't pick 1st side jobs

 

[nexer]

Could be ? Damn Japs

 

[hzjujk]

it is avoidable if you're annoyed why don't pick 1st side jobs

You did not understand it, I am playing the 2nd part-time job, but I believe that it is the wrong way to simply delete the discussion in this case.

 

[Old Dog]

it is avoidable if you're annoyed why don't pick 1st side jobs

All this talk of domination/humiliation/whips/leathers/tied down has me concerned as to how far this BDSM will go as I really don't want to see Sophia being lead a round wearing a collar and lead

 

[Alley_Cat]

Hey Guys, any Japanese around here. What means?
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"Poison", I believe.

 

[Old Dog]

it is avoidable if you're annoyed why don't pick 1st side jobs

We still have the kinks form Dylan to come yet, so will L&P try and cover every kink humankind knows?

 

[nexer]

Yes, side jobs, Aiden, Don Morello storylines are completely crap. It could have been easily realistic storylines like-
- an affair with Bennett
- fling with the janitor so he saves Sophia from thugs n baddies
- wife swapping with neighbor's or with Patricia husband

Man, that's a real live. Who cares? For this go to a porn site, you will find anything you want.
A game, must deal with more sensitive issues, that's why it's a game

 

[hzjujk]

We still have the kinks form Dylan to come yet will L&P try and cover every kink humankind knows

Yes, I'm torn, many of them I really like and some taste sweet and bitter at the same time.

 

[Old Dog]

"Poison", I believe.

Well that fits in with Aiden

 

[Deleted member 1023239]

All this talk of domination/humiliation/whips/leathers/tied down has me concerned as to how far this BDSM will go as I really don't want to see Sophia being lead a round wearing a collar and lead

L&P always make the game with choice perhaps if you're his patron you can influence him and he do the poll again and makes us wait longer to adjust his story with your own liking , as for me i'm not into lesbian so i literally skip lesbian content, sometimes i just skip the text and save when there's a branch of the story

 

[WTSMG]

So no new Ellie or Patricia content? They're the best characters in the game ffs.

 

[Mmarsh]

Man, that's a real live. Who cares? For this go to a porn site, you will find anything you want.
A game, must deal with more sensitive issues, that's why it's a game

What's sensitive here... Sophia showing boobs to teenager n boys sticking out diks at her face

 

[XaGnard]

it is avoidable if you're annoyed why don't pick 1st side jobs

Avoidable and not associated with any of the other events. From my point of view, both side jobs are perfectly removable from the game. This would save a lot of development time and regain back at least a bit of realism.

 

[Alley_Cat]

Well that fits in with Aiden

I wonder if L&P knows what it means though, like the tattoos that translate as "I'm an idiot"

So no new Ellie or Patricia content? They're the best characters in the game ffs.

The closest to content on that front will be Sam's concert next update. But otherwise playable day 14 around 2 years away

 

[Deleted member 1023239]

We still have the kinks form Dylan to come yet, so will L&P try and cover every kink humankind knows?

i made 2 saves where dylan can become man of the house/ alpha route, and beta/cuckold route where he share his own mom with his whole friend