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DeShawn comes with vicky. :cry:i hope we can pick a sophie/Vicky solo path.
Natalie is the only lesbian option left for a good wife path :unsure:
Vicky is in the poll but DeShawn isn't so it maybe it will go the same way as Neil/Amber while Amber is in the poll Neil isn't
 

xxxorro

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We all have a different definition for 'hot'

However, we can still agree, I think, that a hot event is one where there is passion/desire/tension/thrill.

I did not see these aspects in this event.

For exampe : Shopping mall DAY 17
" (Oh God, do all the guys in the school really have such fantasies and thoughts about me?)
(They're watching me lustfully all the time and fantasizing about having sex with me and getting me pregnant?)
(Fantasizing what it'd be like to sleep with me all together at the same time, something like... group sex? Or everyone individually?)
(Like in the classroom during recess, while everyone else is in the schoolyard?)
Sophia, who hadn't been laid in weeks, suddenly felt herself get a little wet from these lewd thoughts.

(And... what would a 'gang-bang' with a group of teenagers feel like? They must have stamina like stallions and could easily take me to near exhaustion!)
She became more and more absorbed in her thoughts. "


DAY 19 There she is half naked, in a room full of young men and she finds the experience just interesting. She should be totally wet.

That's why I am talking about 'a step forward a step back'.

PS I understand that you appreciate the beautiful renderings, besides me too, but I can't relate them to 'hot'
Those lines of the inner thoughts come with a simple close-up image of Sophia (in normal clothes) but to me are much much hotter than many other images in the whole game. They say that one image is worth thousand words, here is the contrary!
I found that sometimes leaving something to the imagination of the reader (at that stage of the game obviously) can deliver a stronger eroticism than the images themselves.

At the same time I found Aiden's event globally quite hot.
I agree that maybe there could have been a bit more space for Sophia inner thoughts to push a little bit her barrier, but this event, IMO, was already "charged" if you consider that Sophia had to accept a task without knowing much about the nature and the place. She had to accept to pose for the first time, being incognito. Then she had to expose herself and then being "abused" by the unknown model. I think that for the character it was a rollecoaster of emotions and a lot to take in in a single event. So not having lewd thoughts like in the mall is understandable and I'd say believable.

For sure the game is going in the direction of Sophia being exposed in public in a sexual way at some point as it has been hinted many times, from the mall event you cited, the porn movie she was watching or after each of the previous tasks. So I think there is still time for getting there.

And, ca va sans dire, everyone has his own concept of "hot", I'm more like hzjujk , I somehow prefer the journey rather than the destination, that's why for me it was globally fine as event.

But for sure I understand your frustration. And please don't give up on the forum, it won't be as funny without you! ;)

Last update's dialogue was a bit worse than the previous updates..
A bit much of over explaining and some very cringy takes, especially these ones.

I agree, the dialogues of that last sequence are a bit off, like they were somehow rushed. I understand that Aiden was also rushed to tell everything to Sophia and then leave without leaving her the time to reply but still the phrasing is quite weird to say the least.

On a different level, also the attitude of Aiden at the very beginning was a bit too direct wrt to the dialogues they had till that point, like if there was almost a gap in the story. And same with the beginning of Dylan's event.

But again, it's almost nitpicking if you compare with the dialogues of other games.
 
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Those lines of the inner thoughts come with a simple close-up image of Sophia (in normal clothes) but to me are much much hotter than many other images in the whole game. They say that one image is worth thousand words, here is the contrary!
I found that sometimes leaving something to the imagination of the reader (at that stage of the game obviously) can deliver a stronger eroticism than the images themselves.

At the same time I found Aiden's event globally quite hot.
I agree that maybe there could have been a bit more space for Sophia inner thoughts to push a little bit her barrier, but this event, IMO, was already "charged" if you consider that Sophia had to accept a task without knowing much about the nature and the place. She had to accept to pose for the first time, being incognito. Then she had to expose herself and then being "abused" by the unknown model. I think that for the character it was a rollecoaster of emotions and a lot to take in in a single event. So not having lewd thoughts like in the mall is understandable and I'd say believable.

For sure the game is going in the direction of Sophia being exposed in public in a sexual way at some point as it has been hinted many times, from the mall event you cited, the porn movie she was watching or after each of the previous tasks. So I think there is still time for getting there.

And, ca va sans dire, everyone has his own concept of "hot", I'm more like hzjujk , I somehow prefer the journey rather than the destination, that's why for me it was globally fine as event.

But for sure I understand your frustration. And please don't give up on the forum, it won't be as funny without you! ;)


I agree, the dialogues of that last sequence are a bit off, like they were somehow rushed. I understand that Aiden was also rushed to tell everything to Sophia and then leave without leaving her the time to reply but still the phrasing is quite weird to say the least.

On a different level, also the attitude of Aiden at the very beginning was a bit too direct wrt to the dialogues they had till that point, like if there was almost a gap in the story. And same with the beginning of Dylan's event.

But again, it's almost nitpicking if you compare with the dialogues of other games.
And waaaay too much dialogue in the art school sequence. The art teacher went on way too much!!
 
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ancienregimele

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A quote from L&P stated that the reason for Bennett/Neil/museum guys not being in the poll was because they have small events and we already know that the Bennett saga is coming to an end.
Since Larry/Tyler/DeShawn are also not in the poll can we assume that they have the same fate?
Whatever occurs in the future, it's definitely a good idea to write some characters out. It's such an easy way to speed things up. My continued support for Bennett & Larry notwithstanding, (especially Larry, hats off to him, I say).

IMO, Patricia &/or Sophia should ring up & cancel the museum date. It would be realistic & it must have happened to us all at some point. Those two sisters are way out of Jason & Haru's league, so what's going to happen anyway?
 

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I'm preparing the events in my script right now and will probably start with the scene creation on Monday. Then I will also approximately know the volume of every event and can name you the percentage share of the four main events of 0.150.
So, there will also be the first teaser towards the end of the next week.
Thank you brother
 

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Nathalie/Sophia event is 10% bigger than Aiden's last event but since it happens in the house at least he will not have to use new locations unless it all happens on the 2nd floor,where Nathalie got changed the last time.
The Sam event is the one that bothers me the most at 35%
 
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xxxorro

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Nathalie/Sophia event is 10% bigger than Aiden's last event but since it happens in the house at least he will not have to use new locations unless it all happens on the 2nd floor,where Nathalie got changed the last time.
I was just thinking about that 2nd floor because the last event ended saying that she will start from where she left.
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Maybe the two will start to tidy up together the 2nd floor which should be still unused and maybe not in order. That would be a nice settings for the old cliché "would you hold the ladder for me" kind of thing... :)

The problem is that it is the kind of huge work that you plan ahead and Sophia was kind of surprised when she arrives.
But still there are so many possibilities...

Anyway I hope we are in for a great event! :love:
 

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I don't know if this is asked before.. But the model used for 'Nathalie' looks like Katie from Katie's corruption... Are they same or some different asset?
 

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I was just thinking about that 2nd floor because the last event ended saying that she will start from where she left.
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Maybe the two will start to tidy up together the 2nd floor which should be still unused and maybe not in order. That would be a nice settings for the old cliché "would you hold the ladder for me" kind of thing... :)

The problem is that it is the kind of huge work that you plan ahead and Sophia was kind of surprised when she arrives.
But still there are so many possibilities...

Anyway I hope we are in for a great event! :love:
Most of the rooms in their house are made up with multiple assets the kitchen/bedroom/living room/laundry room are all set assets with 1 or 2 pieces added, also we have seen very little of the 2nd floor,if I remember right.
 
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