Patricia's gonna need it 
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It never was a beach bar. It was always "one of those bars at the beach".ok not a beach bar.
Remember, the beach is a 20 minute drive from where Sam and the Parkers live, so "at the beach" could mean anywhere from on the beach to several blocks away.
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Maybe not, but I am also getting a bad vibe about it. It may be that the crowd is a bunch of oafs who make the same kind of sleazy remarks as the park hobos, creating some tension and then what, Sam steps in and plays the hero? Dylan v Hobos part 2? Hope not...bar of bikers and truck drivers, worse than I thought
That was actually my first thought - the same kind of interaction we got with the movers...
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ok, whats wrong with truck drivers ?bar of bikers and truck drivers, worse than I thought
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You know too much...Could Killjoys be a bot account created by you to fool people into thinking you're really Killjoys while GingerSweetGirl is really a separate spy account for L&P's second in command Nexer who really is a Bane71 dupe account?
Yep. Like Father Like Son. I think hes a little Douche. I bet Dylan gets to Amber before Sam gets to Sophia. NVM. He already has.
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And this is why it's challenging to have LIs who are still teenagers- this scenario strains believability. A biker bar is not going to hire a high school garage band. There's just so much about this that doesn't work. It's like a silly 80s movie without the charm.
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Yup, ergo my previous post on this. If this is not disinformation, than it looks like the writing aspect, the story telling aspect is about to take another huge hit. Believability is heading for the crapper. If this is the actual bar the stress over the dress will seem like a light mist vice a Cat 5 hurricane rolling in if this is the bar. I can see it being the straw for many.
I hope this is just the bar in the background and the actual bar is not yet revealed. Most beach entertainment districts have a series of bars, comedy shops, cafes etc. And many share the parking spaces. Here is hoping. It is a small hope but,....
man you aren't whistling dixie, if thats the bar, it WOULD be a mess for her
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There's an alternative possibility here: Sam's band is actually quite good and has already played shows around town. Bars will book bands that bring a crowd, regardless of age. When he invited Sophia he may have been being modest or even using false modesty. It's not likely but it is a possibility.
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How I feel it might happen is if one of the boys from the band has a connection to or is a relative of someone who runs the bar or works there. A recommendation could have been made and they were asked to play Infront of the owner, he liked it and they were allowed to perform. It also depends on how big and reputed the bar is or if it's a new bar that's opened. A new bar or one with low reputation won't get really good performers ( unless ofcourse they can pay good money ) so an amateur band is what they settled for.
We'll have to wait till the scene, maybe he does give that explanation. Which I believe he should.
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L&P will absolutely give a painstakingly detailed explanation of how the band got the gig so we know that the scenario is totally realistic and we shouldn't question its plausibility at all.
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Sure, it's possible. But again, having teenage LIs just makes things needlessly complicated. I know that it's a popular kink, but when the age difference is as great as it is here, it gets really hard to maintain realism. If Sam had been 24, still much younger than Sophia, I think it would have made for a much more believable scenario.
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Sometimes I feel bad for him
He always is left with no choice but to explain. People always raise questions on how is it a believable scene, so the poor guy has to give a proper explanation.In this scenario an explanation is due. Since Sam's band isn't a big band how did they manage to get in a performance, there has to be some explanation. We always have lots of dialogue, he can easily fit it in. I would say it's a better use of dialogue than 20 lines of Sam thinking how hot Sophia and Patricia are.
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It's the nature of the beast. He wanted to create a game that was smarter, more realistic, than the average porn game. In doing so though he cultivated a fanbase that has higher expectations. There are many games that are sloppy and poorly written, but because they make no effort to be something they aren't I can brush it aside. But when games try to be more sophisticated than a typical porn game, expectations rise accordingly. This is where L&P gets into trouble, I think he has a good sense of the broad strokes of the story but he sometimes struggles with details and creating the story's connective tissue.Sometimes I feel bad for him
In this scenario an explanation is due. Since Sam's band isn't a big band how did they manage to get in a performance, there has to be some explanation. We always have lots of dialogue, he can easily fit it in. I would say it's a better use of dialogue than 20 lines of Sam thinking how hot Sophia and Patricia are.
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When you read the synopsis for his Novel, It's hard not to ask questions about realism and realistic. He puts these words in almost every part of his description. So it's natural that readers are going to have questions.Sometimes I feel bad for him
In this scenario an explanation is due. Since Sam's band isn't a big band how did they manage to get in a performance, there has to be some explanation. We always have lots of dialogue, he can easily fit it in. I would say it's a better use of dialogue than 20 lines of Sam thinking how hot Sophia and Patricia are.
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So yes, there are going to be some things he will need to explain. It could be a simple post on his patreon page or a narrtive line in the novel.