This is a cop out. By L&P's own standards, this update had poor writing. Is it better than most porn games? Yes. Does that matter? No, because that isn't the standard that was set. L&P wants to create something great, something more than just a porn game, and with that comes raised expectations. This is especially true considering the length of time for development and in particular the length of time it takes to go through translation. Yes, English is a difficult language, but typos are inexcusable because they're easy to catch. Not catching them is simply sloppy. It's more difficult to get the localization and syntax correct, but it isn't as though L&P doesn't have the offers for help, or the resources to get the help. He certainly takes long enough to translate the scripts. To have such a muddled script shouldn't be hand waved away. It is absolutely misguided to say that he can't be criticized over his writing just because English isn't his first language. No one asked him to create a complicated narrative in a foreign language. He's the one that doesn't seem to want to get the help necessary to make his writing better. If he wants to make a story-driven game that leans on eroticism rather than hardcore pornography, then it's his responsibility to produce a well written script. Could I write a script in German? No, but that doesn't mean that any criticism of his writing is invalid. If I tried to write a story based game in German, and my German sucked, then I would deserve criticism.