Welp, That was disappointing, but wasn't expecting much. See you guys in the fall.
You forgot to insert disgust and fear. You can only understand the situation as highly sexually charged if you mentally mingle with Aiden's gang, become one of them and completely block out the protagonist's feelings. That doesn't work for me. So I can't understand her enthusiasm here.Mini Review 0.161
Rather than a monologue, I divided into 3 categories, dismissing the Morello option.
Art/Location
Use of perspective, location, entrance, shots of stair walk, posture, expression, use of colour/tone/light, costumes, angles (Sophia's figure unquestionably stunning).
9.5/10
Erotic
Sense of tension, danger, humiliation, voyeur, tactile, subjugation. Although (highly) sexually charged throughout, I think an erotic strip-tease might have been a better choice. Following Aiden's continuation to humble Sophia, the flashes and groping felt more like schoolboy fap fantasy.
8/10
Text/Storyline
Still work to do on translation and text, but leaps ahead in terms of progress. A brave, strong and plausible storyline matching excellent imagery. Once again it felt underdeveloped but that's this dev's style, keep players wanting more and returning.
8/10
Summery
A near perfect piece within the multi-layered AWAM jigsaw. Confirms L&P in another category, light years ahead of the competition. Highly likely to increase patron numbers, increase business and putting fears of abandonment on hold.
Finale.
Constructive comments/criticisms welcome, but please keep it polite and don't simply mock or jeer at these, or other people's personal opinions.
Thanks guys.
If the gang had groped her like this in RL, that's where control would have been lost....theirs & Aiden's. It wasn't even clear that all those involved were a part of Aiden's gang. Although we knew things wouldn't go too far, (because this is AWAM & L&P [Vanilla King] we're talking about), this was just another aspect of why the update didn't make sense. We're asked to believe that all Aiden has to do is tell the crew to "let her go" after things have already gone past the tipping point. What's the point of the ever-increasing difficulty of the tasks, if we're already at the "show us your tits" phase, let alone the "hands on" experience?Regarding the choice between "Showing breasts" or "getting groped", do you guys think this will play a different role in the future? They both give +2 filthy points so there really isn't that much of a choice, you go with what you like, but the actions are different. Being groped and showing breasts are not the same. One is a lot more physical than the other. So do you think in choosing one over the other could lead to different scenes in the future?
yes you can fuck only the husband if you wantGuys, I want to start the game, but I hate cheating and blackmail paths.. Is the game suitable for me? Or at least is there another path other than cheating?
Her husband is the only one having sex with her at the moment (4 scenes), so yes, there is another path besides cheating. Also known as the Good Wife route. But with no content in it for the foreseeable future, whether or not the game is suitable for you is a different question that we can't really answer right now.Guys, I want to start the game, but I hate cheating and blackmail paths.. Is the game suitable for me? Or at least is there another path other than cheating?
This is what's known as erotic writing, with the type of Aiden that the story seemed to be progressing towards. It has shades of Anais Nin. L&P has, (temporarily?), stopped this kind of thing in favour of kids who want to wank, because as we all know, there's not enough porn that appeals to young people in the games pantheon???Me personally for this last scene i would have had Aiden and Sophia alone, and Aiden gets Sopia to strip leaving on her panties then have him stand up and walk around her admiring her, maybe have him run his fingers across her back sending a tingle down her spine, then have him run his fingers down one of her breast and pinch her nipple then move his hand down her stomach and just as he is about to get to her panties his finger tip brushes slightly against it, Sophia lets out a small moan and Aiden stops and says i am impressed but that is enough for today....Sophia gets dressed and says that is another task done, Aiden responds i never said this was a task you did this on your own and he walks away.
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It's listed as being 0.165. As for how long it is, no-one knows.Next update will also be short? It will be 0.162 or he will make it a little longer ie 0.165?
No, we've already had one this PD, so "yet" isn't correct. We had the first in v.160. And we are in Dylan day, so all but update 5 (which is a Sam event) of the rest this PD will be Dylan events.No Dylan scene yet? Pass.
I agree with you. Except she can be with all the females but only if she brings them to her son as a gift later. Let the son have a harem with the top bitch being his Mommy.The only thing I want to happen is Sophia getting with her son, I'm not interested in anything else, it's either her son or I do my best to keep Sophia a faithful wife, she ain't cheating on the husband with no one else but her son, not on my watch, haha xD
Crushed hopes and dreams.What is this update bring ?
There's also a scene with Aiden and co if you didn't go to Morello. Not a task though, for some reason.nothing new? just fight of gangs after Dylan and Ellie ice cream?
That's been explicitly ruled out as happening by L&P. You're playing the wrong game if that's what you're afterI agree with you. Except she can be with all the females but only if she brings them to her son as a gift later. Let the son have a harem with the top bitch being his Mommy.
Oh, I think this update brought some crushed kneecaps, possibly skulls too.Crushed hopes and dreams.
Very good, but it would be excellent if there was open relationship path? at least lesbian or theresome.Her husband is the only one having sex with her at the moment (4 scenes), so yes, there is another path besides cheating. Also known as the Good Wife route. But with no content in it for the foreseeable future, whether or not the game is suitable for you is a different question that we can't really answer right now.
i hate you tooOh my god, I hate Dylan