dbp5ca

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Since the developer is trying to optimize the visual novel by eliminating some routes, it would be good to suggest that some lesbian routes are also eliminated, such as the maid's route, Emma's route or other routes that I don't remember since I don't follow those routes, there are many lesbian routes that are slowing down the development of the novel. A next poll would be good, if there are already two why not three. It would be good to suggest that...
I hope he doesn't go down that route as the lesbian arcs are one reason I play this. From what someone stated earlier in the thread, apparently they are a big hit with his patreon supporters too. That being said, if streamlining the story meant cutting a few then that makes sense. Just please don't cut Allisa's route. That's the one which seemed to start it all (MC oogling her when she came to pick up Aiden) and she's definitely the best looking character in here.
 

HarryGER

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I haven't posted anything on this site for a long time, because my English isn't the best. But because I read again and again what is supposedly not right about this visual novel I would like to comment on it again.

I can only say I love :love: this game, it's one of the best I've found here and I sincerely hope that L&P will continue the game in its planned direction.

I would have only small optimizations that I could imagine but I can live well without them.

First of all, maybe Dylan's tail could be a little bigger in the toilette shower scene (day 4) to leave more impression on Sophia, I think I would have read something here in the forum.

Second, the balcony door scene (day 14) could be a bit more revealing, maybe a hotter bra or Sopiah completely in underwear to make her reaction a bit more plausible.

Third, I don't know if we need the section about the janitor and his blackmail, but I don't know the whole story board, maybe it will be necessary for later events I don't know yet, so it's just a question how useful this blackmail is for the story. (should not be a criticism)

I can only say about Aiden's blackmail, maybe it's unrealistic but it has the potential to move the story forward a bit faster that Sopiah will be a bit more revealing and might like it more and more.

I think it's a pity that so far the soccer moms only play a minor role, they could have talked a bit more about their boys at the soccer game, a little dirty fantasies like in porn movies soccer moms.
Or did Sophia not even want to search the internet for the term MILF, but that could still happen, so I hope for the first time. But that would also have a lot of potential.

Or like Sophia Liam visited in the office, she was asked if she would like to work as an underwear model. I personally would have liked this job better than the one as a nurse in a nursing home. But that's just my opinion!

The main thing is that L&P continues, I can even live with his update rate, of course I wish to have the finished game but better slow and constant quality and good action like just one of those entertaining porn games where everyone fuck everyone the same without sense and intellect. Especially his slow building up plot I find so nice about his novel.
I fibernate again and again against the next update to learn how it goes on.

I can only say L&P keep doing this, no matter what others say, you're doing a great job. (y)
 

Notretsam

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I haven't posted anything on this site for a long time, because my English isn't the best. But because I read again and again what is supposedly not right about this visual novel I would like to comment on it again.

I can only say I love :love: this game, it's one of the best I've found here and I sincerely hope that L&P will continue the game in its planned direction.

I would have only small optimizations that I could imagine but I can live well without them.

First of all, maybe Dylan's tail could be a little bigger in the toilette shower scene (day 4) to leave more impression on Sophia, I think I would have read something here in the forum.

Second, the balcony door scene (day 14) could be a bit more revealing, maybe a hotter bra or Sopiah completely in underwear to make her reaction a bit more plausible.

Third, I don't know if we need the section about the janitor and his blackmail, but I don't know the whole story board, maybe it will be necessary for later events I don't know yet, so it's just a question how useful this blackmail is for the story. (should not be a criticism)

I can only say about Aiden's blackmail, maybe it's unrealistic but it has the potential to move the story forward a bit faster that Sopiah will be a bit more revealing and might like it more and more.

I think it's a pity that so far the soccer moms only play a minor role, they could have talked a bit more about their boys at the soccer game, a little dirty fantasies like in porn movies soccer moms.
Or did Sophia not even want to search the internet for the term MILF, but that could still happen, so I hope for the first time. But that would also have a lot of potential.

Or like Sophia Liam visited in the office, she was asked if she would like to work as an underwear model. I personally would have liked this job better than the one as a nurse in a nursing home. But that's just my opinion!

The main thing is that L&P continues, I can even live with his update rate, of course I wish to have the finished game but better slow and constant quality and good action like just one of those entertaining porn games where everyone fuck everyone the same without sense and intellect. Especially his slow building up plot I find so nice about his novel.
I fibernate again and again against the next update to learn how it goes on.

I can only say L&P keep doing this, no matter what others say, you're doing a great job. (y)
brilliant, don't agree with everything you said but am cool with that, just happy to see a positive post on developer doing a great job because they are.

Nothing happen in this game,absolutely nothing.Just a bunch of reading and reading then teasing and them some more reading.
This woman is the most frustrated woman in the world,she want somebody to fuck her but nobody gives a damn.
yeah its almost like its a Erotic Novel instead of a porn game. :)
 

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yeah its almost like its a Erotic Novel instead of a porn game. :)
have you ever read an erotic novel before?, actually it's not even at the level of an erotic novel that is far more kinkier and more erotic compared to this game storyline
but i'm pretty sure if he willing to make this game right by making more sex scene with another partner or make swinging parties i'm sure he will earn another patron and he can reach his 6k in no time
 

sansot

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yeah its almost like its a Erotic Novel instead of a porn game. :)
If this is a erotic novel, is it written for prudish Victorians or for Saudi Arabians?

Nothing screams erotic like watching a woman sunbathing when you're mowing a lawn after a year of development, so like 400 pages into a book in real life. Peak eroticism.

At least use one of the damn side characters to have a scene with each other.
 

Taker Fan

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but i'm pretty sure if he willing to make this game right by making more sex scene with another partner or make swinging parties i'm sure he will earn another patron and he can reach his 6k in no time
But, I am pretty sure, when this will happen, people here will criticise him about that also. And I bet they will do that also, when she has sex with Sam. Even so the build up is there and she is falling for him.
 

CamelRed

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yeah its almost like its a Erotic Novel instead of a porn game.
Felt like reading a book."Use your imagination"...
I think I fell asleep a couple of times when running/reading this game.

Genre:
3dcg, big ass, big tits, corruption, exhibitionism, female protagonist, incest, lesbian, masturbation, milf, oral sex, romance, voyeurism
Don't advertise shit for your game when you know there's nothing in it.
You want to make an 'Erotic Novel' SAY it's an Erotic Novel...

I think this woman gonna end up shouting from rooftop-"I want a diccccck'
 

Shane498

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guys if you want to see some sex scene go to pornhub or something, this forum is full of VN, some have already some nice scene other don't. I don't mind if he is slow in developing, at least this game is something different from "son that fuck mother sister aunt cousin…". i guess none of you is all day in front of the computer waiting for the update… (sorry for my eng)
 

Notretsam

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to all 3 who quoted my last post about me calling it a Erotic Novel.

*points to the title*

oh look it has VN for Visual Novel , yes I add the E for Erotic because there is erotic elements to the novel, that is true no matter how much ya'll complain about no sex scene.

its just so sad to see how desperate ya'll for a sex scene, its like a endless novel in this thread called "No sex scene" , I swear this topic has been discussed enough but apparently ya'll want to keep beating a dead drum.
 

Notretsam

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Sure it's his but then he shouldn't make these promises.Or at least must apologise.And probably make charge per an update not each month.Also he shouldn't blame patrons that he don't make "enough" money.It's his fault that he can't get as many support as he want,not ours.Also we saw plenty of projects/in some of them 3+ people/ that are making several times less money and still menage to deliver each month.
seen in this thread a number of times that he charges per update and not month, so it really doesn't matter how long he takes, as he gets paid per update and not each month.

now if it turns out am wrong on per update, then i say sorry in advance but I have seen quite a few saying it per update in this thread.

as for promises, yeah maybe he should have said something like "this is my plan now but it could change" instead, but to be honest, if you don't think plans can't change and don't expect the chance that some promises not happen, then that on you as clearly this VN still being developed and literally anything is possible.

my advice to you and all, any promises you hear from a developer, take it with a pinch of salt and believe it when you see it, and if they do keep promise, its a bonus because developer plans will always change during development of there VN/game.
 

Notretsam

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pretty sure all pages show as per month , even though they set to per update.

**edit** actually I stand corrected, as another page on patreon is per version, so yeah it is per month.

I still don't see any issue, you either support or you don't, we get it free here.
 

lockerxx

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I already started with the work on the next update. And unfortunately I can't estimate now when 0.08 wil be ready, especially because the next update has 3 very elaborate events at new locations with a lot of characters involved!
 
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