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It is funny when so many are praising game for real life when NO things like this do not happen in real life. Yes of course nurse that fall in love with patient is killer some time... but such an exception that work has to be in the game to make it not pulled out of an ass. If girl dies in car accident it is tragic, and I still think bad idea for story as it was told. But it is not insulting. Leah being crazy is set up... one part of the endings that was actually done correct. But that is all. Every other thing with Leah is bad, and says to players that they are too stupid to care to think.

This story, with Leah is not realistic. It is most forced thing ever seen in a game on this site. And this site has pornography games were mother fucks son and special injections make penis bigger.
Look, we all understand your views on this but it's best to be careful to say that (Not exactly the same but it's close). Fact checking is a good thing :) Everyone goes through different experiences (Take a simple example, homeschooling v going to school) so it's best to have an open mind.

Again, I thought we all agreed to disagree with each other's views?
 

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It is funny when so many are praising game for real life when NO things like this do not happen in real life. Yes of course nurse that fall in love with patient is killer some time... but such an exception that work has to be in the game to make it not pulled out of an ass. If girl dies in car accident it is tragic, and I still think bad idea for story as it was told. But it is not insulting. Leah being crazy is set up... one part of the endings that was actually done correct. But that is all. Every other thing with Leah is bad, and says to players that they are too stupid to care to think.

This story, with Leah is not realistic. It is most forced thing ever seen in a game on this site. And this site has pornography games were mother fucks son and special injections make penis bigger.
Phair Enouf.

On the other hand, it's also possible that you're focusing on the specificity of the events/content and not the overall theme - which is - some people are bad. Some people are messed up. Sometimes horrible shit happens to the best of people. Not all endings are happy rainbows and unicorns. That I believe (at least it is for me) is what is being inferred with the comments of there being "reality" mixed in (vs just all happy fantasy). Arguing that bad shit does happen in real life - but not that bad shit is perhaps splitting hairs.

You're certainly entitled to feel differently about the story and development. I do not begrudge you or anyone else for their opinion on this matter. I have a very rare super-power you see. I have the ability to consider another's opinion without it infringing on my own. :) Hopefully you will find another novel/game soon that you find more to your liking and enjoy the hell out of it.
 

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Oh man, what a ride of emotions. I must say the consequences, writing and render is brilliant. It is comedic as well. At some moments I really laughed my ass off.

I do recommend it to everyone, it's really well done. ;)
 
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Look we all understand your views on this but you should be careful to say that (Not exactly the same but it's close). Fact checking is a good thing :) Everyone goes through different experiences (Take a simple example, homeschooling v going to school) so it's best to have an open mind.

Again, I thought we all agreed to disagree with each other's views?
So you are saying that being stalked by nurse who is obsessed over a week, works in two different sections of a hospital so she can kill your best friend with bad drugs, is invisible inside your house and has time to stalk and take pictures everywhere player goes... at all times without noticing her at all is an experience to go through? Not realistic. I also said that yes nurses that kill exist... but they are not normal. And in storys where you throw one in out of nowhere it will come off as what it is, a forced try at drama.

You like the story you like the story. You like the twist you like the twist. But if you want to say Leah is real or that story is real then I jump in.

Phair Enouf.

On the other hand, it's also possible that you're focusing on the specificity of the events/content and not the overall theme - which is - some people are bad. Some people are messed up. Sometimes horrible shit happens to the best of people. Not all endings are happy rainbows and unicorns. That I believe (at least it is for me) is what is being inferred with the comments of there being "reality" mixed in (vs just all happy fantasy). Arguing that bad shit does happen in real life - but not that bad shit is perhaps splitting hairs.

You're certainly entitled to feel differently about the story and development. I do not begrudge you or anyone else for their opinion on this matter. I have a very rare super-power you see. I have the ability to consider another's opinion without it infringing on my own. :) Hopefully you will find another novel/game soon that you find more to your liking and enjoy the hell out of it.
One, others can have opinion. I never said they can not. But the realism part I do not agree with. And it is a place to discuss. I and every other person who comes to talk about not liking the game starts with liking first chapters. With problems game was written well. Why so many talk about it here probably two reasons. The quality is much worse in forced drama parts than in regular parts. And if something that you liked thought was best writing seen on porn game turns to garbage... it is more annoyed than when it is bad from the beginning. If Mr. Dots made a dark twist in DmD, I would laugh. Many other dark games are done well, have sad moments and do not cause problems. In this game, darkness was always worst part... and worst part took over the game.

Seems difference is more over ones who like feel any emotion at all no matter if makes sense or not. And ones who want story to make sense. I am not judging people. It would be easier to just like the roller coaster.
 
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Just adding my kudos to the dev's also. This game... man oh man... It is one of only a couple that had me both engaged and invested with a few different characters and plot lines. I appreciate the option of seeing when and how certain choices affect characters in certain ways and if they notice and/or will remember the option I chose. I will fully admit to openly laughing at points in the game, Liam's writer and/or artist should be highly commended for their work as his comedy and goofball nature, and the interplay with the main character was both hilarious and heartwarming simultaneously. I wont add spoilers here, but fuck you guys had me torn up inside at points. The artwork in this game is outstanding, truly a pleasure to see. The only qualm I have, and I will add a spoiler here for those who aren't interested, is:
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The game so far is awesome, huge props to all involved. I would really like to see more of Rena... yes she's my type of Achilles heel that chick. It is so refreshing to find a game here that isn't all about a dude lusting after mumma's big ol' titties and grooming or blackmailing family members for sex. Anyhow, that's my two cents. I cannot praise the writers and artists enough for their work here. I will wait for the next tidbit eagerly. Thankyou.
 

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Not that it really matters, but I work in a hospital and it takes a very unique situation for a nurse to care for some rooms in the same wing he/she are on let alone an entirely different department. You will just never have a floor nurse go and scrub in for surgury, or take over in the ER. You need different skills and training and it just would never happen in real life.
 
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Not that it really matters, but I work in a hospital and it takes a very unique situation for a nurse to care for some rooms in the same wing he/she are on let alone an entirely different department. You will just never have a floor nurse go and scrub in for surgury, or take over in the ER. You need different skills and training and it just would never happen in real life.
And I am sure you wince when you watch any of the million shows about hospitals because you see all the errors/mistakes they make as well. It's all creative license. If you want facts, watch a good documentary on PBS or BBC.
 
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It is so refreshing to find a game here that isn't all about a dude lusting after mumma's big ol' titties and grooming or blackmailing family members for sex. Anyhow, that's my two cents. I cannot praise the writers and artists enough for their work here. I will wait for the next tidbit eagerly. Thankyou.
On the other hand, many have said that AL is the most unbelievable story among the adult novel/games. So apparently "mumma's big ol' titties and grooming or blackmailing family members for sex." is quite believable and possibly even commonplace.

Again I am shrugging.


I agree wholeheartedly that more Rena is a good idea! :)
 

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On the other hand, many have said that AL is the most unbelievable story among the adult novel/games. So apparently "mumma's big ol' titties and grooming or blackmailing family members for sex." is quite believable and possibly even commonplace.

Again I am shrugging.


I agree wholeheartedly that more Rena is a good idea! :)
You can see a little more Rena in the game Retrieving the Past.
 

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And I am sure you wince when you watch any of the million shows about hospitals because you see all the errors/mistakes they make as well. It's all creative license. If you want facts, watch a good documentary on PBS or BBC.

I mean, yea sometimes depending on the show. If you want to recreate something that is seen every day and has millions of employees maybe do a little research on what you are making.
 

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On the other hand, many have said that AL is the most unbelievable story among the adult novel/games. So apparently "mumma's big ol' titties and grooming or blackmailing family members for sex." is quite believable and possibly even commonplace.

Again I am shrugging.


I agree wholeheartedly that more Rena is a good idea! :)
I did not saying that AL is the most unrealistic story in adult games. I said Leah, is the most forced. Also a joke that people do not understand it seems. Why do I say it is forced? Because entire story musts be relied on Leah. If Leah does not work, entire of drama falls to nothing. And for Leah to work, entire belief in world must falls apart. Using of twist and secret of Leah asks player to look back at story for hints... and when looking at story it makes no sense. Leah is the monster in a bloody movie.

And I am sure you wince when you watch any of the million shows about hospitals because you see all the errors/mistakes they make as well. It's all creative license. If you want facts, watch a good documentary on PBS or BBC.
That is one issue... what about dozen other problems with Leah Twist? In medical or police television there are errors but they make sense within show itself and become close enough to the real world to suspend disbelief. If it was only the chemotherapy error than discussion would not even happen in this regard.

That’s probably true - but maybe a certain artistic license could be afforded the first time writer?
Continue to move positions. It is real... no wait... it is not real... but don't expect sense because Pink is first time writer. I have no expectings that this will change mind of Pink... but one thing common in games that try for darkness is to go too far without setting up or think that just adding dark is enough. Maybe they can learn from mistakes of others.
 
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Oh man, what a ride of emotions. I must say the consequences, writing and render is brilliant. It is comedic as well. At some moments I really laughed my ass off.

I do recommend it to everyone, it's really well done. ;)
I loved both the hilarious scenes and the dramatic ones. The ending portion of this game grows progressively darker, and frankly, I like it. I'm just afraid Dr. will suddenly do a 180º and be like "it was all a dream!!!! everything is well!!!"
 

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Person 1- "This was crappy and stupid."
Person 2- "I liked it, and thought it was well done."
Person 1- "It was OK in part a, but part b was crappy and stupid."
Person 2- "I think that's a matter of opinion. It's not perfect, but better than most of the stuff available here, to me."
Person 1- "It was crappy and stupid, and [insert opinion here] is why."
Person 2- "That's your opinion. It works because of [insert opinion here]."
Person 1- "That's stupid. This is terribly written because I didn't like [insert subjective scene]."
Person 2- "There's more VN's out there if you didn't like this one. I think it's fine."
Person 1- "No. I liked this and it was ruined by [subjective scene] because of [insert opinion]."
Person 2- "We'll just have to agree to disagree."
Person 1- "No! It was crappy and stupid because of [insert subjective scene]. Can't you see!?"
Person 2- "No. I still think it was fine, and it's just a matter of opinion."
Person 1- "Well I'm trying to help the Dev see that he messed up. [insert opinion] is right."
 

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the girl named Leah creep out the mc and she is following him wherever he goes she's a stalker man a stalker
 
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FUCK THIS SHIT. I didn't ask for emotions, I wanted a fap. I wish I hadn't downloaded this. Like, giving the best bro cancer was tough enough, but then you also made me kill Melissa? I want out... but I need to know he's gonna make it. The nurse creeped me the fuck out... aaaaand she is a psycho. This is like the perfect telenovela.
 

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FUCK THIS SHIT. I didn't ask for emotions, I wanted a fap. I wish I hadn't downloaded this. Like, giving the best bro cancer was tough enough, but then you also made me kill Melissa? I want out... but I need to know he's gonna make it. The nurse creeped me the fuck out... aaaaand she is a psycho. This is like the perfect telenovela.
Why kill anyone? That's what multiple saves are for.
 

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Multiple saves don't make it so you can save both of them. All that does is give you one save where you save one, and one save where you save the other. The one you didn't save will still be dead in each save.
It's the limitations of the game. With multiple saves you can play each route through to the end. I said it before and I will say it again, having both girls date the MC simultaneously was not a sustainable situation. Someone was going to get badly hurt in the end. This actually was a somewhat humane way of preventing the inevitable emotional heartbreak that would have occurred.
 
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