- Jan 2, 2020
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Trojan:Win32/Wacatac.B!m
\Affexon-v0.1-pc\Affexon-32.exe
\Affexon-v0.1-pc\Affexon-32.exe
- Thread starter NaughtyDeveloper
- Start date
My initial thoughts: renders look really good. Could use more subtle lighting on a lot of them, but otherwise I've been pretty happy with how the game looks.
I do have some problems with the writing and text, though. First, the dev really needs a proofreader/editor to help with the "Engrish" issues, punctuation, misspellings, etc. There are a lot of problems in the text, and most of them could be fixed with a simple proofread.
I'm also not a fan of the weird, third-person "meta" comments and jokes. There's no reason for it, it doesn't feel right with this story and it ruins immersion entirely when the writer gives you a "wink wink, nudge nudge" moment. Please take those out entirely, they're awful.
Also, the font chosen for the text in the game is not optimal. It looks too cartoonish and silly, and the white text is often lost on lighter backgrounds. Maybe add a shaded text box to help with that issue?
Otherwise, not a bad game at all. I do like premise and the setting, and I'm looking forward to more (hopefully improved) releases in the future.
I do have some problems with the writing and text, though. First, the dev really needs a proofreader/editor to help with the "Engrish" issues, punctuation, misspellings, etc. There are a lot of problems in the text, and most of them could be fixed with a simple proofread.
I'm also not a fan of the weird, third-person "meta" comments and jokes. There's no reason for it, it doesn't feel right with this story and it ruins immersion entirely when the writer gives you a "wink wink, nudge nudge" moment. Please take those out entirely, they're awful.
Also, the font chosen for the text in the game is not optimal. It looks too cartoonish and silly, and the white text is often lost on lighter backgrounds. Maybe add a shaded text box to help with that issue?
Otherwise, not a bad game at all. I do like premise and the setting, and I'm looking forward to more (hopefully improved) releases in the future.
- Feb 19, 2019
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After playing, i can feel Solo Leveling and My Hero Academia vibe on this game. Nice, can't wait for the next update.
- Jun 21, 2020
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Here's my WT mod for Affexon v0.25b
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- Apr 20, 2019
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This is a promising start! The renders are insanely high quality. Also makes me wonder (as others here have) how long it will take to come out with updates. But I can easily see a steady stream of patreons heading your way (I'm a poor student myself, so I can only spread good vibes lol)
no real animations, little cgs but lot of glitter. i doubt that this will turn into content worth playing in the next 3 years.
- Mar 13, 2019
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This game is worth playing, for her. 
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- Jun 27, 2018
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Now that's a milf.This game is worth playing, for her.
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- May 8, 2019
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Since the links not getting fixed.. Here's the patch..
Or on the OP right click the link and 'save file as'..
Or on the OP right click the link and 'save file as'..
A bit strange to have a detail modern fantasy setup and pure VN? Nonetheless, rendering is good and story seems interesting.
- Jan 24, 2021
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- Mar 13, 2019
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What does OP stand for? I only get "save link as" when I right click it.Since the links not getting fixed.. Here's the patch..
Or on the OP right click the link and 'save file as'..
Edit: Apparently saving the link saved it as a file instead???... Still want to know what OP stands for
- May 8, 2019
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