Fuck, man.
Interesting short story. I liked it a lot.
For this very reason, there is not much plot. It's short and to the point. Still, it's an interesting plot. Your ex-girlfriend invites you to her wedding, you reunite with your ex-mother-in-law and you end up making love. It's perfect.
The renders are excellent.
And holy shit, Allegra. She's incredibly beautiful, in my opinion. A real MILF at her finest. Beautiful, sexy, gorgeous, stunning... I was left wanting to see more of her.
As a more personal opinion, I don't know what kind of visual novels you're interested in creating. Or what genres you plan to include in them. But I would have loved to see something much more seductive and romantic. I think these types of stories go excellent with these genres.
Anyway, my 2 cents. I wish you much success in your future projects and, if you include Allegra and some more romance in them, it would be perfect. But if that's not your intention, I'll still keep an eye on your work.
Cheers!
Thats a real Wife and Mother, seeing her age at its most positive Form. Dev, you've done a real good Job, please keep it on! 
