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I couldn't write it better, i was really positive shocked, when i saw Allegra. Thats a real Wife and Mother, seeing her age at its most positive Form. Dev, you've done a real good Job, please keep it on!Fuck, man.
Interesting short story. I liked it a lot.
For this very reason, there is not much plot. It's short and to the point. Still, it's an interesting plot. Your ex-girlfriend invites you to her wedding, you reunite with your ex-mother-in-law and you end up making love. It's perfect.
The renders are excellent.
And holy shit, Allegra. She's incredibly beautiful, in my opinion. A real MILF at her finest. Beautiful, sexy, gorgeous, stunning... I was left wanting to see more of her.
As a more personal opinion, I don't know what kind of visual novels you're interested in creating. Or what genres you plan to include in them. But I would have loved to see something much more seductive and romantic. I think these types of stories go excellent with these genres.
Anyway, my 2 cents. I wish you much success in your future projects and, if you include Allegra and some more romance in them, it would be perfect. But if that's not your intention, I'll still keep an eye on your work.
Cheers!
No I want him to improve in doing a VN that's why I posted an unbiased opinion.Thats like talking with salesman "This dress is bad, worst, waste.. but i will buy it dont worry".
I know. I said that just as a joke.No I want him to improve in doing a VN that's why I posted an unbiased opinion.
Now that fucking cool! Girl dumped you and invite you to her wedding. And then for revenge you banged her mom now who's boss here bitch!
LOL That would be sooo damn cool! i can imagine her face and reactionYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Afterwards, the Mom is like: “Dearie, that's your new Daddy!”LOL, That would be sooo damn cool! i can imagine her face and reaction
'Daddy" that would fucking another level!Afterwards, the Mom is like: "Dearie, that's your new Daddy!"
I knew my Netori senses were right after reading the summary, "You are invited to your ex's wedding party in a different country. ...you meet someone unexpected."
So, the EX cucks the MC with her new lover. While the MC double cucks her by banging her Mom and hopefully her dad, lol.
Now I want a fucking sequel where the MC and Mom just keep cucking the EX!'Daddy" that would fucking another level!
Funny, I've already made one while playing the game. But I didn't really intend to post it here since there is already a track integrated. Well, here you go......Has also a music track (still a bit curious what KoGa3 would have done here...)...