Hello.
I wouldn't call this a game since there's nothing to do but it was fantastic.
It's too short to create a complete worldbuilding but what we have is good.
The two characters are charming and well developped for this small period of time in game.
The story is straight to the point but well brought.
And the art is really magnificent. I'm not usually into 3dcg characters but having been able to do something like this with them is amazing. Their beauty is astonishing. Her skin is so realistic. Their clothes and ornaments enhance their charm. The work on hair (beard, head hair, body hair) is very great. Even the sperm that usually looks like plaster is correctly done. The background too is very well made (the wall of the chamber, the door, the other furniture...).
The few problems I had were :
Allegra's eye when they were dancing : I felt like she was staring into space or she was squinting.
The ass play : it felt like he was playing with butter.
There's also a few spelling errors so be careful.
I don't know about the bigger game but, if you're adding voyeurism (from the ex), make it optional (outside accident serving the plot, it should always be optional).
Good continuation.
I wouldn't call this a game since there's nothing to do but it was fantastic.
It's too short to create a complete worldbuilding but what we have is good.
The two characters are charming and well developped for this small period of time in game.
The story is straight to the point but well brought.
And the art is really magnificent. I'm not usually into 3dcg characters but having been able to do something like this with them is amazing. Their beauty is astonishing. Her skin is so realistic. Their clothes and ornaments enhance their charm. The work on hair (beard, head hair, body hair) is very great. Even the sperm that usually looks like plaster is correctly done. The background too is very well made (the wall of the chamber, the door, the other furniture...).
The few problems I had were :
Allegra's eye when they were dancing : I felt like she was staring into space or she was squinting.
The ass play : it felt like he was playing with butter.
There's also a few spelling errors so be careful.
I don't know about the bigger game but, if you're adding voyeurism (from the ex), make it optional (outside accident serving the plot, it should always be optional).
Good continuation.
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