VN Ren'Py Abandoned After the Infection [Episode 2] [Piloo Games]

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piloo55

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The worst thing here is not even rape, but the stupidity of the MC, who has a pregnant wife at home, and he opens the door to someone without even check who is standing there. It's a pity that two people died because of this idiot.
"But one afternoon someone knocked and a YOUNG GIRL ASKED FOR HELP at the door. When I opened the door, they hit my forehead with a baseball bat, then they beat me very rough."
 

paust.alex

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"But one afternoon someone knocked and a YOUNG GIRL ASKED FOR HELP at the door. When I opened the door, they hit my forehead with a baseball bat, then they beat me very rough."
That doesn't explain anything, nor does it detract the fact that he should have checked who was standing there first anyway. It's amazing how he even survived in such a world, I think that before these events, he constantly paid scammers bitcoins, who sent him letters with threats that they would publish a video of him jerking off to porn.
 

Limura

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So far the English still needs some work but is understandable, the confusing stuff is when they say the gender wrong haha addressing the male as 'her' or the girls as 'him'
 

Streetcarbon

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That doesn't explain anything, nor does it detract the fact that he should have checked who was standing there first anyway. It's amazing how he even survived in such a world, I think that before these events, he constantly paid scammers bitcoins, who sent him letters with threats that they would publish a video of him jerking off to porn.
Man, you sound really angry, maybe you are taking this a tad too serious? Just a little bit.
Also
 
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bosp

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This is not so bad as I thought it would be.

Just 2 pointers for the dev:

1. for god's sake please, and I mean PLEASE, ask here on the forum for a native English speaker who is willing to edit and proofread your game. Your Engrish is beyond terrible and almost made me quit after a few mins of playing.

2. I know people talked about it before but yeah, images are too dark. Your attempt at making them brighter failed and you'll have to do better than that if you want people coming back to your game.
 

piloo55

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This is not so bad as I thought it would be.

Just 2 pointers for the dev:

1. for god's sake please, and I mean PLEASE, ask here on the forum for a native English speaker who is willing to edit and proofread your game. Your Engrish is beyond terrible and almost made me quit after a few mins of playing.

2. I know people talked about it before but yeah, images are too dark. Your attempt at making them brighter failed and you'll have to do better than that if you want people coming back to your game.
Thank you for your comment. I am trying to solve these problems. I’m afraid the bright images will spoil the feeling of the game. What are your opinions?
 
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bosp

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Thank you for your comment. I am trying to solve these problems. I’m afraid the bright images will spoil the feeling of the game. What are your opinions?
Have you watched The Walking Dead?
When it's daylight they have normal light when it's nighttime it's dark. Did any of that spoil the feel of the series?
You don't need to keep every screen dark and gloomy to emphasize that the world has gone to shit.
You have your story to do that.
 
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piloo55

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There are many complaints about the lack of light, which is one of the reasons.
For me, the picture is lifeless, bleak. I work a lot on light settings.
 

Cernunnos.

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Interesting story as far as I played but the pronoun confusion became too much for me. Devolved into gobbledygook when they were talking about Alicia.
 
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