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Care to provide an example, and possibly a correction?
- Jun 7, 2017
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Another good release. I love the writing, the right mixture of funny and sexy-pervy. This one felt short but I think it's because I was really into the story (like usual). I think the dark scene is meant to leave something to the imagination. Plus the room is dark so too bright would have been weird (inaccurate?). I have no problem with a possible love triangle... where's the downside? I mean... would every man want a threesome with 2 beautiful girls? Maybe knock-up both of them? (I'm getting ahead of myself). Bottom line another great update.
is there a path to get with Alex? when i choices come up for her i pick right ones but she always tells me she cant she wont and says im loyal to Izzy but Izzy on the other hand she seems to want more from MC but with Alex always around she cant
- Oct 23, 2016
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This was another good update, but damn that one scene was way, way too dark.
Honestly, it was that dark that the scene should probably be re-rendered, as it is a shame to lose out on Ptolemy's quality pics.
Honestly, it was that dark that the scene should probably be re-rendered, as it is a shame to lose out on Ptolemy's quality pics.
- Aug 21, 2018
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O thanks! Just thought it is just me. There a some games that have way to dark scenes. Dont know with what settings they check their pictures. I had to push my gamma and settings around to see at least some.
The rest was good
- It really helps that this now a VN without that RPG stuff 
- May 10, 2018
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i actually think its really dark on purpose..this looks like a "long-story" so the Dev dosnt want us getting the "main-dame" quite yet..so its a tease..i'm ok with that..i've stated in many game threads i'm a fan of the "long-story"O thanks! Just thought it is just me. There a some games that have way to dark scenes. Dont know with what settings they check their pictures. I had to push my gamma and settings around to see at least some.
The rest was good
- Jun 11, 2017
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We can only hope they will have their first time outside home with a bright sunny day.
Anyway i enjoy the update. Always great writing and very good renders.
- May 28, 2018
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That was a great update, things moving along nicely in the story
Merry Christmas/Fapmas to you all, the dev team and the fans alike!
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- Nov 26, 2018
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Went through the scripts looking for typos and other errors, listed in spoilers below by line number.
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- Aug 28, 2018
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i think this issue of yours with this threesome will solve itself soon enough, i have this feeling or hope? im not sure but something should happen to Izzy... it's maybe becouse im deep in writing my story but i feel like something bad should happen, father of Alex will be the reason and thats will trigger spiral of events, war or mc with Alex will run. its very dangerous world after allThat was a great update, things moving along nicely in the story
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- May 10, 2018
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i think the MC-Alexandra-Izzy triangle will be fine...MC hasta devote to them only though..no side-nookie..lol
- Feb 12, 2018
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Nice update. Interesting development with the librarian. I wonder what her role will be in the future. Looks like we may have some really kinky stuff coming up.
Good game, but my problem that i find pratically all girls better than Alex
Katya the bartender, the gun range girl, street smart girl, librarian, Izzy, recruiter girl, Alex, madam.
Katya
the bartender, the gun range girl, street smart girl, librarian, Izzy, recruiter girl, Alex, madam.
Her "sister lookalike", just a short story, 10 min but i'm in love
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