I must say this one is amazing. Its kinda hazy how this affection/dominance route works at first because there are several choices before that part arrives, so the Guide isn't exactly helpful for a newcomer but it gets clearer after trying.
But beside that this is a real jewel in more than one way. Meme like choice descriptions, totally fooled me into belive that the Red Riding Hood is another but no

Story is detailed, lots of talk, lots of insight into the minds of npcs which makes them more lifelike. Background is grim though, perhaps too much for its own good.
A few more static images would be useful, long scenes with a single image are fine but adding a bit more flavour, a bit more expressions not just here and there but during most long conversations would definitely enhance the experience further. I'm sure this is a workload issue, all i'm saying that if i'd have to point out weak points i'd finger this one first and foremost.
Right now i picked the dom route, its hilarious in a good way. I really like the fact (not everyone would do so i'm sure) that the story takes a sharp turn into fiction land within the fiction and yet still can be taken seriously especially if this continues and the actually story-side seeps into it, so it won't end up with just the two of them. I really hope that this path won't end up just a sidegig as i, for exaple, am really looking forward a dom route not just because i prefer dom routes but because this is a loving dom approach. These are so rare, virtually non-existant so its a real treat.
My questions is: The dom route focuses on one-on-one? There is a harem route which is a different pick, but that deals if with affection-based harem? Yeah, what I'd like to know if this dom route will extend to other characters?