VN Ren'Py Completed Alison Fall of the Apple [v1.0] [OneManVN]

[Avaron1974]

This right here is the good shit. Precisely the reaction I was going for, and all this from just one image... Oh boy, wait until you see the other two ugly fucks and what they have planned this update.

I sure hope one of them doesn't plan on attacking Mels fists with his face ... that would be terrible.

 

[smokebox]

This right here is the good shit. Precisely the reaction I was going for, and all this from just one image... Oh boy, wait until you see the other two ugly fucks and what they have planned this update.

You scare me sometimes mate , i hope they are planning a one way ticket to hell !!, delivered by our Hero, or Mel or Shadow, you see what you doing right? you are waking this killer instinct inside me

 

[OneManVN]

I sure hope one of them doesn't plan on attacking Mels fists with his face ... that would be terrible.

So cute, and yet so full of violent thoughts. Terrifying... But, I'm not referring to the extras. I speak of the big bosses.

 

[OneManVN]

You scare me sometimes mate , i hope they are planning a one way ticket to hell !!, delivered by our Hero, or Mel or Shadow, you see what you doing right? you are waking this killer instinct inside me

I scare myself most updates, I just hope people can handle this one.

 

[Ennoch]

I scare myself most updates, I just hope people can handle this one.

I've only seen one head blown to pieces. Pretty vanilla so far It was unfortunatelly of a good friend's but ohwell, he has a widow now. Carlos Spicyweener is good at consoling! Have i mentioned before how shallow i am?

 

[smokebox]

I scare myself most updates, I just hope people can handle this one.

You are evil, don't they suffered enough already?, you are the George RR Martin of porn, you make that fire on acting lessons from Dr Pink Cake sound like a walk in the park, but i love your story so much that i have to stay tunned no matter what, i just hope to survive this chapter whitout having a heart attack

 

[Avaron1974]

I can take updates where bad shit happens. Sure they suck and we all hate to see the bad guys get one over the good ones.

It just makes it that much sweeter when my Amazonian goddess liquifies their testicles with a flying boot when she takes them on a date to dick kick city.

I know the MC will probably do most of the ass whooping, let a girl dream though.

I fully expect things to suck for a bit, it's how stories go. We need the low or the high isn't worth it when it comes to action based stories.

 

[Ennoch]

I know the MC will probably do most of the ass whooping, let a girl dream though.

I think that to have any chance at succeeding every single member of this lovely deathsquad will have to do a fare share of ass whooping. The loner JohnMcClain gig from the mc won't work. These organizations cannot be taken out by some one-man punisher types.

And it would be stupid. Mel and Shadow are more than your average rank and file police officer and ex-military. I expect them to have their scenes of bloodshed. Preferable before and/or after lewds But i guess that will go into the harem path, on the love path it will be cuddles, fistbumps, make-outs with the chosen dearest one! And then lewds eventually.

Yeah i always end up thinking about the lewds

 

[OneManVN]

I think that to have any chance at succeeding every single member of this lovely death-squad will have to do a fair share of ass-whooping. The loner JohnMcClain gig from the mc won't work. These organizations cannot be taken out by some one-man punisher types.

And it would be stupid. Mel and Shadow are more than your average rank and file police officer and ex-military. I expect them to have their scenes of bloodshed. Preferable before and/or after lewds But I guess that will go into the harem path, on the love path it will be cuddles, fistbumps, make-outs with the chosen dearest one! And then lewds eventually.

Yeah I always end up thinking about the lewds

This is you and Melissa, on your first date... with the current attitude of course. I suggest you adjust it when she is concerned.

Spoiler: They say hell is Red, and hot. I tend to agree.

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But, you are correct in your presumption. The mc is more than capable of John MCing the fuck out this, however, the girls are not really the standing around and doing their nails type... as you may have noticed.

 

[OneManVN]

You are evil, don't they suffered enough already?, you are the George RR Martin of porn, you make that fire on acting lessons from Dr Pink Cake sound like a walk in the park, but i love your story so much that i have to stay tunned no matter what, i just hope to survive this chapter whitout having a heart attack

The story is just starting to get interesting, it would be a shame if you quit now. This is just the start of the "choose a waifu" section. I'd hate for you to miss out on a certain already claimed Red-head.

 

[Avaron1974]

however, the girls are not really the standing around and doing their nails type.

OBJECTION

I am totally a stand around and do my nails type while they do all the hard work.

In fact that sounds like an awesome idea.

 

[Ennoch]

Naaaah, i'm way too cute to be chokeheld like that Poor sod is done for tho. I bet he didn't knock on the door and/or said disrespectful things! Tsk tsk.

As much as i love a girl with nice nail polish the fact they will do serious asskicking is even more exciting. Some serious terminator type ladies are always give me the buzz.

OBJECTION

I am totally a stand around and do my nails type while they do all the hard work.

In fact that sounds like an awesome idea.

But thats fine, you are the team's mascot

 

[OneManVN]

OBJECTION

I am totally a stand around and do my nails type while they do all the hard work.

In fact that sounds like an awesome idea.

Please forgive my rudeness. I completely forgot that you were cheering them on from the salon through this update.

 

[smokebox]

But thats fine, you are the team's mascot

Lucky charm suits her better

 

[Ennoch]

Lucky charm suits her better

Well, someone has to do the grocery while the rest is busy doing violent stuff. Beers have this particularly boorish habit of not buying themselves before marching straight into the fridge in an ordely fashion. So until they learn some decency they have to be bought and carried home. This is critical job. Ava is tasked to carry it out. With or without nail polish. The former adds +1 to the difficulty while the latter sets the "We are out of beer, wtf??!!" trigger for Mel to 0 that day. Further options can be unlocked on both routes.

 

[OneManVN]

Got some really good news, and sadly some really bad news as well. The really good news is, I managed to find the money for 90% of the next PC build, with a Ryzen 9 3900X in it. So hopefully by next month, it'll be up and running. This will help me work on an update on two PC's one to fully render, and the other to write in peace while I render. Unlike now, where I have to dedicate the whole first 2.5 weeks to the rendering then write/code.

The really bad news is, I have officially spent my last dime on this project:

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Great house and it will sure AF be put to good use on all three paths. It is a perfect place for our multi girl story. Lots of separate rooms to house the beauties, and the second part of the bad news is.

Me having to return to a full-time job again.
I will try to keep the monthly updates (Per my patreon goal promise.) But they will likely not be OMFG I just came in my pants from those 400 renders that last update.

As much as I love doing this, you can't pay bills with things you love. Anyhow, hopefully, I'll be able to return to "big updates" once I have worked my ass off for a few months and not spend any more on assets.

PS: This is not me bailing on the project, this is me saying that it would suck to work in a tent under a bridge during Canadian winters.

And to clear confusion, this Love update will indeed be fucking Nadia booty size big.

 

[UnDeaD_CyBorG]

Got around to playing the dom path last weekend.
It's.... not your strong point.
On the other hand, after a half year break I got to look into the love path again, how the story progresses, and that one certainly pulls me in.
Pity you'll have less time on the project that you clearly like working on, but that's the way the world works. Best of luck with that, really.

 

[OneManVN]

Got around to playing the dom path last weekend.
It's.... not your strong point.
On the other hand, after a half year break I got to look into the love path again, how the story progresses, and that one certainly pulls me in.
Pity you'll have less time on the project that you clearly like working on, but that's the way the world works. Best of luck with that, really.

"It's.... not your strong point." In your opinion. I fixed that for you.

As for the rest, I am glad you find love to your liking. Pity indeed, but like you once said. "Do you pay bills with praise" or something along those lines haha. Gotta work to keep the lights on and the internet flowing. I'll still be able to do plenty with two systems anyhow over the weekends.

 

[OneManVN]

Alison: MC, why am I wearing these!?

Spoiler: These

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MC: Oh, that's a long story... Why don't I find you something more appropriate?

Alison: Okay.

MC: Now that's much better!

Spoiler: The much better.

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OneManVN: Oh, Alison; my sweet, sweet, Alison.

And yes she is back!

 

[Ennoch]

I totally agree with the mc! Bra over such beauty of a boobs is heresy!