It looks like its gonna be a nice novel...
Narrator(dev) is explaining a lot in the game.
had 1 error (see att.) And for the dev I have some advice: when you state in the game that something is happening (for instance when Alison jumps into his arms (catching her option) ge the according picture on that moment, and not a sentence later. there are more situations where something happens, but the picture change is later so it reads faster then the picture change happens.
game play on its own is easy.
graphics are of good quality.
interesting enough to follow this game.